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RockBarbie Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 12:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ranogill

khushi was married ..interesting..and what suppressed life she was living .. Is she divorced now .. How old she is now .. 38

She is 36. More about Khushi in future. :)

RockBarbie Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by N0306

I like the way you give stress to minute details in the best required time.. It is so easy to imagine the setup..

Payal's character is very intriguing.

So Khushi is 36 yrs old.. I had a late twenties Khushi in mind but this goes well as well..

Khushi's husband is an ass and surely insane.

Thanks. Its hard for an outsider to see this behavior as anything else other than adoration especially when they aren't subject to it 24/7.

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RockBarbie Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mirabell

Chapter 5:

"I don't know what I would do with the knowledge I have of you, of us being together, as lovers." 

This is just spectacular. A slice of the jugular, It went straight to what we are often left with, with relationships we carry - that carnal knowledge, that intimacy.

That she wants to change that into a talisman, a memory seems incomplete. It is an action, but there is so much residue that is left of that knowledge that it would leak beyond the confines of talisman, no?

I loved this conversation - I loved this exchange. In fact, as I am writing this comment, it occurs to me that your stories treat Lavanya so kindly. 

hmmm... what is Khushi's backstory? You have piqued my curiosity.

I am trying Aman, I swear. I am trying to hold on to what little human relationships are left in my life. They all seem to slip away just when I start to think I have got a hang of life."

See - right here in this exchange - I see your allusion to time - those sands of time, slipping through our fingers. The more tightly you clutch, more sneaks through. Human relationships, time... pretty much everything we have... isn't it?

And right there, in that very context this line makes so much sense...Arnav's eyes lose some of its edge. "I wish I could love you the way you want to be loved." Aman's heart stutters."

If only... if only...

But it isn't... and that is the tyranny of all things related to heart isn't it?


Aww, thanks MB. You have indeed chosen some lines that kind of defines the chapter and these characters; especially Arnav. I am quite careful with Arnav and I am glad to see you acknowledging the lines that I believe define him for who he truly is.

I absolutely hate the way Lavanya was portrayed in the show. I have a soft spot for her. Yeah, she was bitchy in the beginning but she tried later on. She changed. She was made a scapegoat, a straw man to fit into the "bad girl" stereotype. I hate that so, so much.
RockBarbie Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 12:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Loki-

You!! You never cease to surprise (and amaze) me!

Teddy is the most disturbing character I've read about in recent times. Their unhealthy relationship gave me the chills and left me feeling irrationally violent. Like, I almost believed I had the superhuman strength suck his brains out and tear his limbs apart with my bare hands. 

She had no freedom whatsoever. Every goddamn little aspect of her life was controlled and emotionally manipulated to suit his fancy. No personal boundaries, not just unbound jealously at her unsupervised socialization but isolation too, blind conformance to stereotypical gender name a few. 

One wonders, how can anyone not see these clear signs of an abusive relationship. Ah, but they are all done in the name of love and lust. <sigh> 

How long did she suffer this relationship? If this was a glimpse of their early relationship, I won't be surprised at all if his abuse got more overt and violent over time. <sigh>

Arnav's thoughts restore faith in humanity. 

Thanks :)
Teddy is a douche bag and there are so many, many of them out there. Teddys of the world may not just exist in marriage but also in friendship, siblings, parents...its everywhere. It isn't just limited to women though it is prevalent among them.

More in future.

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MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 12:30am | IP Logged
very interesting and intriguing...Clap

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shafqee80 Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 12:32am | IP Logged
So khushi had a devil for a husband ...and sixteen yrs back is not a smaalll tym ...liking story

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docs Senior Member

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Two hi... teddy seems to be a loser of the top order!!

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albmum14 Senior Member

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Teddy was thorough wasn't he? He didn't leave any aspect of her life unaltered or uncontrolled by him. The mental cruelty he put her under had her feeling like she was straitjacketed, emotionally numb by the end of it all. The little tension she feels as he speaks about the perfume, is her way of trying to find a reason to exercise her decision making, but he is ready with answers to change her thoughts. All the excuses she makes for tolerating his behaviour, show the little doubts she has about doing so. It's strange how the abused will let go of a few decisions, thinking that they are showing their love, while the abuser will use them to fuel his abuse further. It's a never ending circle, the love she shows igniting his need to have more power over her. And it seems that intimacy is missing too, perhaps in all its aspects.
With this glimpse I understand better Khushi's issue with Payal not breaking her parenting habit. Although, she has Khushi's best interests by looking out for her, she is stifling her more. But there is a lot more we don't know about the past or Payal's reasons.

It's good to see Arnav slightly better, to me his breakdown was more about his life in general rather than the situation with Lavanya. I find his behaviour with Aman these last three weeks a little disturbing, it feels like he keeps Aman more and more chained in his attraction (love?) for him. But it's a difficult situation, when your best friend has feelings for you and you don't reciprocate them. The hurt is always there ready to engulf and destroy, so I don't know how he should behave differently. Maybe skirting the issue is the only way forward now.

Are Arnav and Khushi both 36?

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