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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 26)

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Posted: 03 June 2016 at 6:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tiramisu_coffee

Aww... Lavanya did the right thing.. And poor Aman! I am always team Arhi but this Aman is making me wonder why can't Arnav fall in love with Aman! I would if he swung that way! This is a classic grass is greener on the other side kind of a story for me.. Arnav, Aman and Lavanya are rich, easy on eyes, and well established in their lives .. What more could they want, an outsider may say!! They would say - family's acceptance and their unconditional love is all they care about .. I want happy endings for all three of them PLEASE!!


:=) Welcome to Team A-A. Aman is inherently good. As in, he is a very nice man. He is kind, intelligent, loving, caring...what more can one ask for? Connection, may be. For some this would be enough. For some it would be stifling and it would be cruel if there is an unbalanced reciprocity.

Irrespective or rich/poor, grass is always greener on the other side. Irrespective of our situation, we like other situations better.

Yes, happy ending for all three. Gotcha :-)

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Posted: 03 June 2016 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amaypranay

Brilliantly penned... Fantastic one wishes to keep reading... Hoping to read the next soon!!!

This is one of your best's work:)))


Thank you :)
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Posted: 03 June 2016 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera30

Are you writing?


Will be posted on Monday morning/evening or Tuesday morning.

If I finish my work early tomorrow, then probably sooner :=) Worst case, i will have to split chapters. I don't like doing that but I don't want to be idle for another whole week.

Hint: A song of enchantment by Walter De La Mare :-)

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Posted: 03 June 2016 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mrieshka

I truly don't know what is the correct word I am feeling after reading this update. My thoughts are everywhere. One thing I definitely feel is a lot of sadness. Arnav, Aman and lavanya are rich and have luxurious life but still sad and crave for affection, love and relationship. I had never picturised Arnav like this in any story, very different but real. On the other hand Khushi and Payal also sad for their own reasons of their past. It appears Khushi has become conditioned to live in denial or indifferent due to her past. 
Both Arnav and lavanya seems to have feelings for each other and together for 20 years, I am confused why lavanya broke up-- looks like I missed some clue in the update--is it because she noticed some difference in Arnav recently.

Arnav and Khushi finds solace in each other's company even though they stay silent-- amazing-- this language of silence has no name for their relationship but how can one say it is less than any good friendship. 
I am intrugued  to know much more.



Don't everyone crave for affection? Be it child or a grown adult. Arnav is bruised and a flawed individual. He is very special to  me :)

Khushi is more afraid I suppose than denial. I hope I will be able to effectively convey it in next update.

No, you didn't miss anything. I will add a clarification in next or the chapter after. Yes, there needs to be Lavanya without Arnav in an update.

Glad you are here :)

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Posted: 03 June 2016 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by archnahardik123

Brilliant I cried with Arnav today.  Your Arnav is different in so many levels. He is smart, caring, sensitive. He can even cry when it's too difficult to handle. Not like men who thinks its not good for a man to cry. But it's really important to get it out for men or women. I loved this version of Arnav.

Arnav is a human being is all I can say. So much he has lost, so much he is losing; there is a point when emotions can bring a sensitive person down so much so they have an actual breakdown.

So La broke off with him. It seems she understands him and can't live without Arnav. She need him as a friend now. But is it so easy for them to remain friends after being in a relationship for so long? How will their respective partners behave in future about them still friends. Will they not think about their life as couple? It's not that simple. Let's see how their relationship work out in future.

La, I think, understands that her relationship with Arnav has been unbalanced. More next chapter :)

I feel sad for Aman today. He loves Arnav and didn't get his feeling return same. How difficult it must be for him to see Arnav with lavanya and still been friends. It's not easy. And what will happen in future if Arnav had feeling for someoelse? Like with Khushi. I am patiently waiting to know their life turn out in the end.
You drop another bomb in this update. Khushi was married and now divorced. By payal's thoughts, I could understand that her busy was abuser. He might have abuse her physically too. Might have put thought in her mind that she is not worthy enough.
But why Khushi  is so greatful to Payal as if she not belong to this family. And Payal has to remind her 
this house belongs to her too. 
This life is so strange and tough and yet we have to live with it.
Thanks for marvellous update.


I never said she is divorced :=)  Man, you guys leave fantastic comments and put me in a corner where I cannot answer questions :(

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Posted: 03 June 2016 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kushi.raizada

Awesome part. .loved it


Thanks!
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Posted: 03 June 2016 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kishmish

Melancholic chapter ... Sadness seemed to be pouring out from the seams Confused
But some good always comes out of everything ... at least Arnav cried and 
let out (hope all) pent up emotions and frustrations ... hopefully he will feel 
much lighter and happier ... 
It feels sad to see Aman so sad with all that unrequited love but yet offering 
full moral support to his best buddy ... 
Lavanya's breakup with Arnav was done tactfully but it is difficult to let go of 
something one is so used to for so many years ... it becomes a habit ... 
It was a shocking revelation to know about Khushi and her abusive broken 
marriage ... but by grace of God she has her sister to depend on and lean on 
in times of distress ... 
But there is always a rainbow after the storm and hopefully each of these 
characters will find their happiness soon ... 
Thanks RB ... 


Its a sad story about sad people who have undergone at least one sad situation in their life :) So, yeah. Unfortunately angst is kind of staple :(

Thanks K. Yes, they will find happiness. Maybe not what they planned, but something for sure :)
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Posted: 03 June 2016 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bakwas_serial

 
-  Wonder if there was a catalyst which helped Layanya finally make the inevitable but right decision for both of them.
 
Yes, and also long time coming.

- There are lot of similarities between Arnav and Khushi life except she has family support.    I am looking forward to see how you develop the relationship ( of any kind) between Arnav and Khushi .  Arnav is scarred, looking forward to how his relationship with Khushi heals him and/or her

I really love your "any kind" comment. Cause that's important. Many kind of love can be shown to many people. :-)
 
- Aman makes me sad. Would Lavanya inspire him to do the right thing for himself?    Or  he will not give himself a chance to have his love reciprocated?

Maybe :) Who knows.



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