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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 24)

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
Thank you Twiggy! I off to read!

Edited:

Reading that was difficult. And easy. And painful. And refreshing.

It makes me angry sad hopeless jealous envious hopeful curious and a whole host of others that aren't defined either in the dictionary or my personal vocabulary

Overwhelmed I think - in the end...

Edited by meera30 - 29 May 2016 at 10:14pm

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera30

Thank you Twiggy! I off to read!

Edited:

Reading that was difficult. And easy. And painful. And refreshing.

It makes me angry sad hopeless jealous envious hopeful curious and a whole host of others that aren't defined either in the dictionary or my personal vocabulary

Overwhelmed I think - in the end...


Good overwhelmed?

There is something relatable to this Arnav. Sometimes you feel like irrespective of how much work you do, how much effort you put and offer your very best, it still doesn't seem to be enough. No expectations from anyone/anything is one thing. But the casual disregard? That's painful.

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Seems like a sad update
Arnav khushi both were broken and needy of love and affection.
Arnav blames himself for his broken relationship,where as Payal was panicking about khushi sudden interest.
What exactly Payal worry was about khushi mingling with a guy or her interest in new project.
Khushi seems more of mystery than arnav
Willb waiting for next.
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RockBarbie

Originally posted by meera30

Thank you Twiggy! I off to read!

Edited:

Reading that was difficult. And easy. And painful. And refreshing.

It makes me angry sad hopeless jealous envious hopeful curious and a whole host of others that aren't defined either in the dictionary or my personal vocabulary

Overwhelmed I think - in the end...


Good overwhelmed?

There is something relatable to this Arnav. Sometimes you feel like irrespective of how much work you do, how much effort you put and offer your very best, it still doesn't seem to be enough. No expectations from anyone/anything is one thing. But the casual disregard? That's painful.


Always good overwhelmed!

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Posted: 30 May 2016 at 12:38am | IP Logged
Such awonderful and full of enotions story

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Posted: 30 May 2016 at 1:10am | IP Logged

"Aman doesn't want it. Not yet anyway." You just feel so desperately sad for him here. Wanting to hold on to that tiny kernel of hope regardless of what his mind may be telling him. But we all do that in varying degrees don't we. Sometimes it's the only way to keep sane.

"She trails, losing confidence in her instincts" The first thing to be felled in an abusive relationship.You can see Payal trying very hard. A sense of duty vying with sibling love. I'm looking forward to reading more about Khushi and her equation.

I really like La's character. She comes across as such a lovely person. As classy as her preferred choice of restaurants :)

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Posted: 30 May 2016 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Hello  RB
Great update dear
So khushi was married , felt bad for payal as well, she has to thread so sensitively with her broken sister.

Arnav, my heart went out for him, 
Hope all these wonderful persons get their sunshine one day.
Thank u RB, Really loved ur way of writing.
Thank u

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Posted: 30 May 2016 at 2:36am | IP Logged

Such an emotionally charged update!

This Aman is so so special. It seems he himself equally deserves all the love, care, affection and understanding that he thinks Arnav deserves and wants to shower it upon him! And although he wants Arnav's love, he prioritizes giving over gaining...

At times I wonder whether sensitivity, understanding nature, maturity are boon or bane? But then another dilemma that hits me is if one is mature enough then why would she/he desire any understanding from immature people? 

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