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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 21)

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sur_10

Sometimes, I wonder why doesn't Arnav leave. The business isn't good for him, the family isn't good for him - it sounds like a silly idea but if something is just constantly eating you up, isn't leaving a good idea?


-Maybe because a part of him blames himself for their death... the mayhem that took place 10 years ago... 

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 12:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mirabell

Originally posted by meera30

An Arnav I know, one of eclectic taste in 90s movies and music, can learn a thing or two about angsting from this one I say!! This is how you do it!

The comparison between childlike innocence and obliviousness is spot on. Innocence is endearing in a child because she knows no better. Reality is messy and dealing with it is the only way to be.

The Aman and Arnav dynamic is interesting. Friendship and romantic love are always just one moment of physical awareness away. Gender has never been a barrier to those - or so I believe... Can't wait to see more of them together.

"Watching" this space now my friend.

PS: It was a tough call between green tea and this little jasmine orange brew you have going...Only time will tell if this is more Rocks or intense Holics

I am so late here and you have journeyed further. But I did want to say... 

Two of my very favorite people on this forum - chatting with each other about the story is just 'fangirling' moment. So..

I agree that nuanced dichotomy you laid out here RB - innocence and ignorance are often present together, but there is a subtle subtext that really does differentiate it. Loved it.

I think I like this 'easily bruised' Arnav... 

And Please... I WANT TO SHIP FOR AMAN AND ARNAV. If there is one possible love story that has never been explored it is this one. (I looked folks, there ain't any). But I worry about Aman - He is going to be hurt at such tragic proportions. I will brace myself.

Love this story already RB... Love it in its first reading and first chapter.

And Meera is here.. what else does one need?

--M


Arnav is bruised :( AA shipper, huh :) Am so proud of you for using proper fandom terminology :P
I am adoring Aman at the moment so not planning to pulling the run under him. Its gonna happen, but not right now. He needs his happy ending and I will make sure he will find some :)

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MysticRiver

well written...


Thanks.

Originally posted by shils28

Wow! Wow! Wow!


Indeed :)
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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 2:09am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
Loved it

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mirabell

Chapter 2:
Something about watches and time... makes me want to stop and think. How strange and so very tragically funny that we have things that try to measure things that are meaningless when measured. An exercise in sheer arrogance or abject stupidity... Like measure something that is so elusive, slips through our fingers. Isn't it a lot like measuring a rainbow... but what are we trying to measure here? The worthiness of a rainbow? The strength of a quicksand? How futile, yet how rewarding.

--M


Meaningless when measured: well said! Clap

Its an illusion we all live under. A necessity just for the sake of measurement and nothing else.

I remember conversation (anecdote) between an artist and Feynman :=)

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Nice update

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SANJANA9167

Nice one
Arnav was blamed for his parents demise,but seems like arnav father was very proud of arnav and his tactics.
Lavanya seems like a true frnd and knows arnav a way too well.
A day after at lunch arnav was relaxed seems like khushi had a hand in this one.
Waiting for next


Thanks. I think Arnav needs something new in his life :)

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 6:35am | IP Logged
awesome...
you write beautifully dear...

btw.. the clock ... *thumbs up*..
am going to see if i can build this up... i was in search of a grandfather clock for so long... but this is so much better... :)

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