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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 2)

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 7:06am | IP Logged
New story wohooo!!
Interesting start and that's the best name a watch shop can have:-P I think all watches have stories who cares about the number of scratches or the number of times it stops get it repaired and the story continues...
Loved it!

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by N0306

Love the shop name.. Ha ha. Just a quick question are you nervous or in hurry? just felt like this was not your best shot.. Love the start, characterisation everything... Just felt a little rushed...

But I m super excited to read the story further..did you say novel length.., for that muaaahhh


Not nervous. Not rushed. Nope.

Its intended to be this way.

Sorry, if it was disappointing.

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 8:05am | IP Logged
An Arnav I know, one of eclectic taste in 90s movies and music, can learn a thing or two about angsting from this one I say!! This is how you do it!

The comparison between childlike innocence and obliviousness is spot on. Innocence is endearing in a child because she knows no better. Reality is messy and dealing with it is the only way to be.

The Aman and Arnav dynamic is interesting. Friendship and romantic love are always just one moment of physical awareness away. Gender has never been a barrier to those - or so I believe... Can't wait to see more of them together.

"Watching" this space now my friend.

PS: It was a tough call between green tea and this little jasmine orange brew you have going...Only time will tell if this is more Rocks or intense Holics

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 8:16am | IP Logged
- So from 17 year olds Y2K to 30 year olds Smile   This is different.  A 30 year old rich man, maybe in a one-sided relationship, a close gay buddy who is interested in him but he is not, a sister who chooses to live in a dreamland . 

He seems unsettled, for a lack of better word.  Wonder if  Watching will repair more than his dad's watch.  Jasmine tea calms my frazzled nerves, maybe he needs to drink more of it. Smile

  Waiting for the story to unfold.   

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 8:38am | IP Logged
RB...this seems super interesting! Love the name of the Shop for starters...

Will be here to read more, it just has a feel of your many amazing stories!

Thanks for writing...

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Liked the first chapter. Anjali seems delusional about shyam like always :-). Lavanya seems sensible to avoid the family and not pressurize arnav as of now.

I could not understand arnav yet. Will wait for next chapters... Nicely written

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 10:02am | IP Logged
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I love the title of the book ,
Am waiting to read more

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 10:39am | IP Logged
New story and that to novel length Thumbs Up

The summary was intriguing. So was the first part.

Perfect name for a watch repairing shop. Will it repair more than Arnav's father's watch?

Another perfect in the update was your comparison for innocence and obliviousness. So anjali is the blind one who wants to live in her own build world ignoring the reality. Such cases doesn't make to 'ignorance is a bliss' qoutes. Harsh realities jokt them to wake. Hope she isn't delusional.

Lavanya seems to be sensible one. Is she kn a break feom arnav because of his family?

Aman and Arnav's bond seems interesting. A gay best friend who is falling for Arnav but knows he is in for a heart break.

Looking forward to read more and more.

Edited by rk2127 - 21 April 2016 at 10:39am

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