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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 19)

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 1:07am | IP Logged
You know what, I'm completely loving this clock idea you have chosen. I sort of underestimated in the beginning as just another theme, but his HAS to be one of the best till date.
Sometimes, I wonder why doesn't Arnav leave. The business isn't good for him, the family isn't good for him - it sounds like a silly idea but if something is just constantly eating you up, isn't leaving a good idea?
Waiting to see what mortal peril would be for these guys. :P

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 2:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sur_10

Sometimes, I wonder why doesn't Arnav leave. The business isn't good for him, the family isn't good for him - it sounds like a silly idea but if something is just constantly eating you up, isn't leaving a good idea?

"...an unhealthy ideation for martyrdom..." I am beginning to see the light now. 

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Hello RB
WOW,What a piece of writing dear friend.
Beautifully written
Thank u for pm and lovely update.

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Loved it

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vgedin

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~Edit~ 

When your own let you down, there are those lucky to find kindness in friends and even strangers.

I do not want to think of Anjali or Nani, because they make me so, so angry. I will think of Lavanya and Aman and Khushi - who offer warmth, compassion and kindness without any strings. Without expectations. 

He has demons to fight, a world of hurt to bear and weight of life to carry on his shoulders - but he is not alone. And that is what matters. The rest may or may not change, but he has people who will ensure the axis to his universe is stable. He will not fall. 

Falling in love - now that is another matter altogether.

For now I cannot wait for Khushi to make that clock! 

PS - An Arnav who has read Harry Potter and enjoyed will find his way to my heart effortlessly Embarrassed



Arnav has read HP, yes. I edited out some dialogues that had A and K fan girling over HP.

He has demons and perhaps himself to fight.

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Very nice chapter. OMG... Arnav's whole family blames him for his parents death!! But for how long will they continue this... It's already fourteen years for God's sake.

His father's and mr. Jha seem to be doing illegal stuff. Will wait for the future chapters to read more about it...

I checked the clock link you have given. It looks amazing. Wow .. The boy from duke is a genius who created the clock in reality. Wow...

Very nicely written. I enjoyed reading it.

PS: I like the way Arnav is relaxed around khushi and smiles more often.

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 7:31am | IP Logged

There is nothing worse in the world than being held responsible for the death

of your own parents and that too by your own sibling and family ...

"Grief is not as heavy as guilt ... but it takes more away from you" but

if the two are combined then its burden can create havoc in your mind ...

More than a decade of not being able to mourn the loss of your parents in

peace over that blamed for being the cause of their death are bound to put

any person in depression and Arnav is after all just a human being ... how long

will he be able to carry this guilt along ...

Thank God for the good friendship between Lavanya , Aman and him ... but

for them he would have been a mental case ...

Humans have this tendency to be more loving towards a person whom they

feel is weaker not realising that the other could be hurting too ...

Thank God that Dadi has finally seen the light and realised what Arnav is

going through ...

Finding solace in the company of a total outsider is not uncommon so am not

surpised one bit that he finally landed up at "Watching" ...

So we shall be seeing them spending more time together because of the clock

she is planning on making for him to gift Aman ... J

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mirabell

Me me me me me
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There are no coincidences in life. Bas. *wink* *wink*

How beautifully you write heartache, with such economy of words and with an abundance of silence. A man with a moral compass finding solace in a watch shop seems perfectly cliched... if you just left the two of them together. But no.. you make is more interesting by bringing two others in to the frey. Hearts beating asynchronously while breaths ease around each other. This is no ordinary love story. From a triangle to a square... with a linear or nonlinear scale of time? Why do I see geometry in this now?

--M
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Its not exactly a triangle really, is it? Tongue

Love comes in many forms. The three would probably die for each other, live for each other and devolve for each other. Their love for each other can easily turn into romantic one. Why they don't do it - we'll find out.

I doubt if you can call this a love story. LOL

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