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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 17)

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Posted: 25 May 2016 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera30

An Arnav I know, one of eclectic taste in 90s movies and music, can learn a thing or two about angsting from this one I say!! This is how you do it!

The comparison between childlike innocence and obliviousness is spot on. Innocence is endearing in a child because she knows no better. Reality is messy and dealing with it is the only way to be.

The Aman and Arnav dynamic is interesting. Friendship and romantic love are always just one moment of physical awareness away. Gender has never been a barrier to those - or so I believe... Can't wait to see more of them together.

"Watching" this space now my friend.

PS: It was a tough call between green tea and this little jasmine orange brew you have going...Only time will tell if this is more Rocks or intense Holics

I am so late here and you have journeyed further. But I did want to say... 

Two of my very favorite people on this forum - chatting with each other about the story is just 'fangirling' moment. So..

I agree that nuanced dichotomy you laid out here RB - innocence and ignorance are often present together, but there is a subtle subtext that really does differentiate it. Loved it.

I think I like this 'easily bruised' Arnav... 

And Please... I WANT TO SHIP FOR AMAN AND ARNAV. If there is one possible love story that has never been explored it is this one. (I looked folks, there ain't any). But I worry about Aman - He is going to be hurt at such tragic proportions. I will brace myself.

Love this story already RB... Love it in its first reading and first chapter.

And Meera is here.. what else does one need?


--M

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Posted: 25 May 2016 at 10:07am | IP Logged
well written...

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Wow! Wow! Wow!

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Posted: 25 May 2016 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Chapter 2:
Something about watches and time... makes me want to stop and think. How strange and so very tragically funny that we have things that try to measure things that are meaningless when measured. An exercise in sheer arrogance or abject stupidity... Like measure something that is so elusive, slips through our fingers. Isn't it a lot like measuring a rainbow... but what are we trying to measure here? The worthiness of a rainbow? The strength of a quicksand? How futile, yet how rewarding.

--M


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Nice one
Arnav was blamed for his parents demise,but seems like arnav father was very proud of arnav and his tactics.
Lavanya seems like a true frnd and knows arnav a way too well.
A day after at lunch arnav was relaxed seems like khushi had a hand in this one.
Waiting for next

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Chapter 3
There it is again - that insane desire to hold the universe in your palm or in the case, on your wrist. LOL. But it is that triangle that is more interesting than anything else - Arnav, Aman and Lavanya. I see the longing in each, and I see the helplessness all of them. Longing for things unavailable and helplessness for not being able to provide. 

Beautiful RB. I am completely sucked in...

--M

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Unres on Page 16 :) 

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And I un-res-ed as well, page 16. 
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