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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 13)

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kishmish

"Watching and making a Watch" ... Khushi seems like a genius ... 
The Solar System on your wrist ... Wow ... What a brilliant piece of work that watch is ... 

There's something awfully wrong between Anjali and Arnav ... I wonder what ... 

Love the threesome ... at least they are there for each other in these trying times ... 
Payal seems overprotective of Khushi but maybe she needs that overprotective eye on her ... 

Thank you KB ... 


Every character here has some issues. If they didn't have any issues we won't be reading about them. :)


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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sur_10

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This Black Sheep' house is a nice idea - but I wonder why they aren't even completely truthful with each other. I guess it becomes a part of character after a while and later an inability. Liked they way Lavanya cut off Arnav's monologue though :P

This watch idea was amazing. Easily one of the most beautiful things I have seen. 


HAHA! I knew there would be someone who will see irony in ME writing about a monologue and Lavanya cutting it off.

Oh, they are truthful. Just because they don't yammer about it all the time doesn't mean they don't know. Talking about Aman's feeling in open would be cruel especially when it isn't reciprocated. That's why neither Arnav nor La talk about it in open.

Looks like subtly isn't working here. LOL

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
- The car ride, the conversations would be of younger folks not of 30 year olds...I guess  the dynamics changes when you are outcasts even for your own family .
 
Arnav does not drive ...sprawled on the back seat watching scenery... is suppose to be relaxing... made me sad ...wonder what has happened in this man's life. 

I need a  lavender/chamomile tea when I read your update :)  

You have these tidbits  ... Shyam having a tall glass of milk.. makes one smile. .. or Khushi working on the revolution watch makes you  hope.

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
Its a trademark of your work to delve into the things that the characters take up: be it Arnav's shift to being vegan or Kushi's exploratory work to build the planetary watch; and I can't wait for it.


It appears as if the palpable sadness in the individual lives of the three friends, is what binds them, in the moment. Hope there is more coming for them.

Great updates, RB! Love how the character sketches are shaping up.. I'm falling for Aman already!


Edited by -Mitra - 09 May 2016 at 2:56pm

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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 7:40am | IP Logged
The detailing of every character here is so brilliant:)

Love the concept of the solar system on your wrist... Can the world get any smaller!!!

Khushi's achievements will be something.. Waiting for her and Arnav to meet next..soon hopefully..

Love to read this one RB.. It's great:)))

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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Hello RB

Beautiful update
Loved the chemistry of these three friends,
Loved the bonding and understanding of the sisters.
Brilliantly written update.
Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 10:01am | IP Logged
I love your writing style. There's a depth to it which helps us gain perspective of how the characters are truly feeling. Wonderfully written.
Thanks for the PM!
Update again soon!

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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Absolutely love what you have written.
It's very unique with a pinch of everything... Mostly true.

Thanks
Sri

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