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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] (Page 110)

Greyasr Senior Member
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Posted: 24 July 2017 at 10:27am | IP Logged
This story simply made me cry feeling each ones struggle with themselves trying to overcome thier issues while being there for each other, love feelings unreciprocated still being ok with it moving on... Evrything u nailed it and u are one awesome writer hats off...
If its not too much to ask please please continue writing
Once again kudos!!!


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Posted: 24 July 2017 at 10:42am | IP Logged
In the end all is well. We can't expect things to fall in place. Lot of damaged and broken hearts, anc it will take time and effort to fix and heal.
Once broken it never heals and never goes back to
Normal. We just learn to live with it

Amazing story, you have penned and created Arshi world in a totally different perspective

I loved it. The style and the concept it fresh and different in a good way.

Keep writing you are an amazing writer.

I hope you would pick the pen soon.

Till then take care

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Posted: 25 July 2017 at 5:50pm | IP Logged
This story is awesome.  Your work has so much depth.

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Posted: 26 July 2017 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
This was an Arnav's story.. his journey.  The ending with the three close friends..as Arnav recalls the twelve months away from them. Appropriate. Apt.  Amazing that you used that to tell what the two did for a year in Japan.
 Khushi has helped him heal... let go of the past baggage.  And he has(is) helping her with her issues/abuse.  Lack of physical relationship between the two makes sense and even if they never have physical intimacy .. the two are helping each other heal.  The end where she finally fixes his watch...or that he is not stuck in time...let go of past...he finally has the ability to move forward 
Liked all the small details. Lavanya needed them to be away for her to fully move on  and now she has accepted them as  acouple.

Anjali change was a surprise but loved how she got rid of Shyam and the healing of relationship between the two siblings is a work in progress.

Thank you for sharing an amazing tale. Economy of words and thoughts -you deliver a punch and skip drama ! Loved it.


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Posted: 27 July 2017 at 3:22am | IP Logged
What a beautiful way to end such a unique story. 
It's was memorable jeourney to read their life fe story.

 They were made for each other and glad that they found each other. Yes it's time for them to move ahead and take next step in their life.

Thansk for writing such a beautiful story RB.
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Posted: 27 July 2017 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Finally read through the last three chapters... I'm glad that you completed this one, there is a certain satisfaction in watching your characters evolve. I guess happy endings are not overrated after all. The way you described Arnav and Khushi's vacation was beautiful... something of a wish list honestly. Thanks for such a beautiful story.
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Posted: 27 July 2017 at 8:27pm | IP Logged
Chapter 21 - 
what is one to say of a woman who is trying to let go of the anger within herself? I'm glad she is trying to make amends but will it ever be enough? But, I suppose forgiveness isn't about the weight of your apology being equal to the weight of your crimes - I suppose apologies are just a promise to try to do better, and move on from the incident. 

I'm glad she apologized to Aman. 

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Posted: 27 July 2017 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
the end:
Their vacation sounds so... perfect. Like just a place where they can heal. It's amazing. I am so glad all of them got the closure they wanted. 

This story was a beautiful read, even though, admittedly, I was late to the ride. Thank you for sharing it with us. Much love, and good luck. I hope that in the coming years, you get to read more and more books.

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