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Posted: 21 July 2017 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
It was one hell of a journey. The journey has been emotional for most part. And beautifully written ... The final chapter was the perfect end to this story. Loved it . 
Waiting for you to write something new.  .
Lots of love 

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Posted: 21 July 2017 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
I'm not blessed with words to express my opinion on this story, but I do hope you'll find time to write and we'll get to read.

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Posted: 21 July 2017 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
Loved the ending Clap
Thank you for the pm Big smile

Edited by Lily30 - 21 July 2017 at 4:40pm

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Posted: 21 July 2017 at 6:23pm | IP Logged
I sad you ended it but you are a very talented story teller I love the depth of emotion your characters bring out they are very real and have the inacquadices everyone has. No one is born perfect and the trails we all go through to learn to live with our own epectatins of ourselves is shown beautifully I am a parent of a child whose autistic and I seen him cope with the overwhelming anxiety that pervades his life and the scene where arnav has a panic attack but khushie helps him cope through it is so true please do keep writing

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Posted: 21 July 2017 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
HI,
 I am in love with this story. I feel in this modern day and age, our life is so much like that of Arnav or Khushi. 
I definetly am inspired to follow Arnav's footsteps.
I have read almost all your stories/sga.
Please do enlighten us with another of ur creativity soon.

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Posted: 21 July 2017 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
Super duper awesome!
Loved and enjoyed this story! :)

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Posted: 21 July 2017 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much for putting ur time and energy into this! You are an amazing writer.. don't stop writing, ever! You don't have to share always but keep nurturing this talent of yours!

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Posted: 22 July 2017 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Initially when you had said that you were going to end the story , i wanted you to give a few more chapters about Arnav and Khushi life , then I realised this story didn't need mundane details , the reader had to gauze the  rest from what you had given us . That this story was not just about 
Arnav -Khushi romance , or about family bondings of Anjali and Arnav , or even about the 3 best friends A+A+L yet it is all of that too.
This story was about how for some people time stands still yet does not , For  Arnav life's Bindu (nucleus ) starts and stops from when he takes over the company , the  resultant angst initially against the world , then against his parents and dadi and Anjali is the factor that governs all his actions and relationships. It is about how he manages to overthrow this mantle , get rid of  the angst and become 
Whole again.
It is about how Khushi overpowers her fears against possessive men and leaves her cloistered life for newer pastures .
It is about how in the end sometimes families do manage to regain earlier bonds.
It is about friendships that can last a lifetime despite minor upheavals like unrequited same sex love, or brief physical entanglements.
Maybe a little more about Khushi would have been nice .need to know more about her progress
Likes Suman a lot.



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