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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ruchiritu

Originally posted by Amreen...

Hello guys!!!
Since the moment I saw the promo... these words were taking a shape of a small amateur poetry in ma mind Smile

P.S. : I love poetry Heart

So here I am with my small creation...
Hope u guys will like it...


Yun Naa Tanha Chhod Jaiye...


Hum tum tameem naa sahi...
Baat dil ki chhipi hain nazaro mein kahi..

Hume hai pata, tumhe hai magar...
Haal-E-Dil ki hamare tamaam khabar...

Saath chhodoge yun toh tanha hai mere raaste...
Zindagiaani tameem hogi gar tum ho hamare Vaaste...

*tameem = perfect
*tamaam = complete

Mai shayar toh nhi magar ae ShraMan... jabse dekha maine tumko... Mujhko shayari aa gyi ROFL ROFL

Writing one more...will post soon as soon as I conclude it...
Till then gimme ur reviews on this!!! Embarrassed

Amreen!! Smile


Ya khuda... kya ghazal hai...BOHUT KHOOBB BOHUT KHOOB


Thanks a ton Embarrassed


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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --fero--

Wah wah wah wah
Really nice


Jazakallah (thanks) Embarrassed
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Its really really awesome..

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 7:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amreen...

Originally posted by manognasai

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Wah Wah...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Well written AmreenBig smile</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Btw is this the same Amreen who asked Namik wat his name means on twitter?Embarrassed</font>


Thanks a million Smile
Yo Wink
Main hi hoon vo Tongue
Looks like my Namku has made me very famous ROFL
Haha...So how does ur name spell...Amreen or AamreenLOL
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by manognasai

Originally posted by Amreen...

Originally posted by manognasai

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Wah Wah...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Well written AmreenBig smile</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Btw is this the same Amreen who asked Namik wat his name means on twitter?Embarrassed</font>


Thanks a million Smile
Yo Wink
Main hi hoon vo Tongue
Looks like my Namku has made me very famous ROFL

Haha...So how does ur name spell...Amreen or AamreenLOL


Its Amreen... apne snapchat 2nd QnA session me he called me correctly babe... haven't u listened Embarrassed
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AngellaAbhi

Its really really awesome..

Thankooo!!!
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Now such low response discourages me from further penning more poems!!! Cry

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