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ShraMan : Yun Naa Tanha Chhod Jaiye...

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Hello guys!!!
Since the moment I saw the promo... these words were taking a shape of a small amateur poetry in ma mind Smile

P.S. : I love poetry Heart

So here I am with my small creation...
Hope u guys will like it...


Yun Naa Tanha Chhod Jaiye...


Hum tum tameem naa sahi...
Baat dil ki chhipi hain nazaro mein kahi..

Hume hai pata, tumhe hai magar...
Haal-E-Dil ki hamare tamaam khabar...

Saath chhodoge yun toh tanha hai mere raaste...
Zindagiaani tameem hogi gar tum ho hamare Vaaste...

*tameem = perfect
*tamaam = complete

Mai shayar toh nhi magar ae ShraMan... jabse dekha maine tumko... Mujhko shayari aa gyi ROFL ROFL

Writing one more...will post soon as soon as I conclude it...
Till then gimme ur reviews on this!!! Embarrassed

Amreen!! Smile

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Really nice amreenClapStar
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 6:29am | IP Logged
edited

Edited by Amreen... - 21 April 2016 at 6:33am
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 6:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asyaarshilover

Really nice amreenClapStar


Thanks a lot!! Embarrassed
Mujhe laga koi kuch kahega ya nhi ROFL
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Wah Wah...
Well written AmreenBig smile
Btw is this the same Amreen who asked Namik wat his name means on twitter?Embarrassed
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by manognasai

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Wah Wah...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Well written AmreenBig smile</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Btw is this the same Amreen who asked Namik wat his name means on twitter?Embarrassed</font>


Thanks a million Smile
Yo Wink
Main hi hoon vo Tongue
Looks like my Namku has made me very famous ROFL
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amreen...

Hello guys!!!
Since the moment I saw the promo... these words were taking a shape of a small amateur poetry in ma mind Smile

P.S. : I love poetry Heart

So here I am with my small creation...
Hope u guys will like it...


Yun Naa Tanha Chhod Jaiye...


Hum tum tameem naa sahi...
Baat dil ki chhipi hain nazaro mein kahi..

Hume hai pata, tumhe hai magar...
Haal-E-Dil ki hamare tamaam khabar...

Saath chhodoge yun toh tanha hai mere raaste...
Zindagiaani tameem hogi gar tum ho hamare Vaaste...

*tameem = perfect
*tamaam = complete

Mai shayar toh nhi magar ae ShraMan... jabse dekha maine tumko... Mujhko shayari aa gyi ROFL ROFL

Writing one more...will post soon as soon as I conclude it...
Till then gimme ur reviews on this!!! Embarrassed

Amreen!! Smile


Ya khuda... kya ghazal hai...BOHUT KHOOBB BOHUT KHOOB

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Wah wah wah wah
Really nice

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