SwaSan SS: Sweet Deals (Completed) (Page 42)

Nynaeve IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 June 2016 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by raaz19

Hi nynaeva...wow finally you updated and what an update it was...Party
Really enjoyed reading ragani point of view at last...felt relief when she finally admitted that she had been selfish and that she felt her sisters pain...nice twist with bit letting lakhs speak finally he heard what he made swara go through...Thumbs Up

Dear Raz, I am so thrilled that  you were actually waiting for my update and that you loved it quite a bit. It was relief to hear Ragini admit she was selfish, yes she was, but why did you feel like that. Even Swara was quite selfish, she never thought once about her family when she decided to run away from homeWink . But Ragini giving it to Lakshya, was needed, he had to understand that because of his cowardice, he played a major role in the turmoil they went through.

It was an emotional yet sweet chapter with light swansan moments truly the right blend of one of your sweet treats in one...coming back to the kiss it was nice seeing swara final letting her guard down and letting sanskaar in...seems like he is blending to her soul nicely and even breaking down does barrier which she seems to have been battling to deal with a long time...Wink

You are so right, this kiss did indeed break down all the barriers between them especially the confusion that Swara seemed to have, loves him, loves him not.LOL Sanskaar, was quite sanskaari but how long could he resist, when she appeared to be wanting it as much as him.Wink

Epic closure at the end with the conversation of finally tackling them meeting there parents and what they should do with ragani and lakhs...but why have you left swansan again with a will they won't they scenario poor romeo...Blushing

Will they, won't they scenarioD'ohlet me see - but then what do want them to do - the next logical step is to get married, for which they would need the parents' consent. So they really do not have much of a choice.

A pleasure to read and thanks for the pm always appreciated...Hug

The pleasure is always mineHug

And yes like you said the current track is lacking direction in terms for the passion...hope cvs focus on the old swansan magic or my I say that they take not of your sweet blend...

So if I may ask what direction will they hed next...eagerly waiting...love ya family?  LOL

I am a greedy one - love or family or...wait for the next chapterBig smile

Sorry if I don't make sense...that what swansan makes is like...If you know what I mean Day Dreaming

That I can understand - as I quoted once "sometimes following your heart means losing your mind" so true when it comes to us following SwaSan.Day Dreaming

Take care 

Dear Raz,

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coolgal270 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
I m so sorry nyna for not unres d previous res... Ab se pakka i will be regular in d forum and will unres.. *kaan pakding*

Ps: loved d update..i m loving d swaragini bond here...its beautiful and its real... 
Ps1: thanks for d PM! Much appreciated..

Lots of love, sumi!

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Krishnabhisarik Senior Member

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Such a lovely update!!Smile Res for now.. Will unres soon hopefully..
Hey Nyna!! I'm so sorry I'm late... running super busy nowadays.. I have read n re-read this chapterBig smile, just didnt get time to sit down n peacefully write a nice comment...

Wonderful chapter yaar! Ragini has shown such strength in admitting every single thought that was weighing on her mind all these years, when she was distraught.. After these revelations, she still has clarity of thought, what she wants, what she has.. I loved her stand.. Also Laksh needed that account to know all the repercussions of his past actions, so as his present is well thought out.. Swara, Ragini, laksh all committed their own mistakes, I'm glad the sisters are trying to overcome the guilt and be stronger n smarter.. Hopefully Laksh does the same..Smile

Coming to SwaSanEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Of course they can't stay away from each other!! they have a traitorous soul-heart-connection (and crazy fansWink), who arent going to allow any distance-businessLOLLOL
I liked how they are each other's light n anchor, in a very real, stable waySmileSmile Those last two questions, very vital... Can't wait for their answers... Big smileBig smile

Edited by Krishnabhisarik - 23 June 2016 at 1:55pm

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by CogitoErgoSum

Originally posted by CogitoErgoSum

Originally posted by Nynaeve

Originally posted by CogitoErgoSum

Res for chap 8 Smile

That was faster than light - I did not even finish typing my message on the threadLOL love you so much for this


I was haunting your thread SmileLOL

Nynu---I shall be back for a detailed revert tomorrow, Pakka.

But in the meantime----My dear, have you decided to give me palpitations? Embarrassed That kiss between SwaSan...Blushing Day DreamingHeart I was sort of fearing there might be a momentary strain in their relationship since the weak kneed Mr Bipul turned out to be none other than (Aaaooowww Gaawwwddd, as I suspected!), Sanskaar's cousin--Lakshya Maheshwari. LOL

But you reassured me, and how. I was SO happy to see Swara's self doubts about the strength of her own feelings fly out of the window. Or rather, be consigned by her to where they deserved--in the nearest dustbin. Wink No more "I need time to decide for sure what I feel, no kissing till then" rule. Embarrassed Blushing Well, she did recollect at the end that she had said that a few hours before, but then she also recognized that she felt so warm and comfortable nestled in his arms. Big smileWink

Ragini's talk with Lakshya---lovely. Amazing. I always was fascinated by Ragini's character in the serial, which had so many layers and shades to it. Unfortunately the CVs kinda never did justice to her character portrayal...but at least we are getting it here!

Will be back for more tomorrow, Nynu Hug

Loads of Love,



Am back for a slightly more detailed take (I had started off my last comment as a brief one, but then I was so in love with the chapter I rather went on for a bit there, too. Embarrassed LOL)

I've already mentioned how dreamy, romantic and utterly, tenderly wonderful the SwaSan kiss was, na? Embarrassed BlushingDay Dreaming Well, let me say it again. LOL It was so beautifully described, it was literally poetic.

The entire chapter was like a double serving of delicious dessert for me Wink Trick or treat, indeed---with the emphasis on the double treat!!
Day Dreaming Not only was the serving of SwaSan so deliciously satisfying, it was such a pleasure to see a strong, purposeful Ragini giving a earful to Lakshya.

He needed to hear this, the horrendous consequences of his weak kneed and jelly spined chicanery. And it was wonderful to see things from Ragini's perspective, too. Swara had been suffering from that burden of guilt, of separation from their family for so long---and she blamed herself for dragging Ragini with her. How poignant it was, to see that Ragini, from her side, was also carrying so much guilt.

So many what if's plagued Ragini's mind---if only she had shown her parents the letter written by Swara. If only she had called them while they were at the railway station. If only she had put her foot down, and insisted Swara return home...

It was a decision both sisters almost took in a daze, with Swara hurt and wounded by "Bipul's" betrayal. With the passing of time, with the fruition of the wonderful love she has now found with Sanskaar, she has realized that what she felt for Bipul was merely a powerful infatuation. But at the time, she was shattered.

Ragini, on the other hand, now faces an immense crisis of conscience, a conundrum which has literally wrung her heart. She had indeed fallen in love with Lakshya, considered him the man she wanted to spend the rest of her life with. But now knowing that this was the gutless man whose indecisive callousness was the reason her sister and herself took this step of leaving home----must have shattered her. How can she reconcile the love and regard in her heart, with the abysmal weakness of the man? Very eager to see how you take this forward, how Lakshya shows that he is indeed a changed man. Its a massive pity though, that he made no attempt to find out where Swara had gone...Confused

The ending scene between SwaSan was just so wonderful, again. Smile Swara feeling jolts of warm tingliness going through her, comfortable and secure in Sanskaar's arms. Embarrassed And Sanskaar, obviously, sending that, smiling that lovely smile of his and burying his face in her luxuriant hair. EmbarrassedBlushing So very romantic...And his matter of fact, sensible response to her statement "we need to talk" was priceless. LOLWink

Waiting for Chap 9, darling. Hug

Loads of Love,


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krishuuuuuuuuuu Goldie

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Posted: 18 June 2016 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Nyna baby..
Chapter 8 was stupendous...Heart

Swasan part was lovely...sansku was guilty which he should not be..but atleast swara realised she was little stupid n half responsible ... running from house for her infatuation...but all clear now..that kiss was love...magicalDay Dreaming

Felt bad for raglak...ragini poured her heart outto lakhshya..what she felt..what she did...loved her pov...she should let lakshya talk to..give him a chance...but may be some other time...after she cooldown..amazingly written part...Thumbs Up

Loved climax how thoughtful of sansku to think about raglak n swaragini home returning...loved it..Clap

Waiting for more...


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iam_aheli_98 Goldie

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Posted: 19 June 2016 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Hi Nyna,Smile
Sorry for the late reply coz I was out of town for 1 week.Embarrassed
Awesome update.Clap Loved both the SwaSan and RagLak parts.Big smile
Loved the update so much!!!Big smileBig smile and thanks for the pm.Big smile
With love,

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Nynaeve IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 June 2016 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
Dear Viji, Sumi, Talia and Aheli,
I have read your lovely comments quite a few times but seem hard-pressed to find the time to reply, this week already promises to be hectic. I will do so, even if it means sneaking time from lunch. Please do bear with me.

Seriously. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 June 2016 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
Hey Nyna... Hug .. sweetest dearest... simply my darling girl... first of all sorry for late comment...

As usual dear I loved it... soo finally everything is normal in between swasan I hope soo... Raglak... I think k Laksh needed that... I liked Ragini how she answered him... that it won't be difficult for him.. that he has done once before... walking out of someone life just like that... the pain was visibled throughout... she was jealous of her own sister...

     Then the kiss it was a bliss dear... I loved the way you penned it down... it's different... soo swaragini going to meet their parents...

Waiting for next...

With love...


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