SwaSan SS: Sweet Deals (Completed) (Page 31)

Nynaeve IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Dear Friends and lovely readers,
I have just updated Chapter 6 and if the previous one was small this is tinyCry I can just hope that the content and the story makes up for the short length. Eagerly awaiting your comments.


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tootiefrootie11 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 11:57am | IP Logged
I KNEW it!!! Nyna dear Hug
I had asked if you recall about how it wasn't that "the other man" Swara had been involved with was Lucky LOL and you threw your red herring of Bipul Kumar ConfusedOuchLOL

I know I am commenting out of synch and very briefly and not in my usual way but am frantically working myself and don't want to wait. The last chapter stood out not just for the revelations about Ragini's past and her rather cute if "normal" love story, but mainly due to Sanskaar's straightforward but super effective proposal (so like the man!). This Sanskaar gives me some Darcy feels and of course you know my obsession there Embarrassed

This chapter- LOVED the reference to kintsugi- am quite fascinated with so many Japanese concepts and that whole conversation between SwaSan was so pure and beautiful, it was just lovely to read ClapClap. Loved the super cute Sanskaar there too and his sense of humour in teasing her about not being a man LOL and then stuffing cup cakes LOLLOL and Swara's attraction and pointless efforts to fight it Embarrassed. Then wham- that ending- uuurgh BK is LM only OuchOuch. This will get interesting so let's see how this is resolved before things can move forward again!

Nice work Nyna xoxo 

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 28 May 2016 at 2:50pm

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Sujayricky IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Res for chapter-6

Nyna that was a shocking update Shocked
I have never thought that lakshya will be bipul oh god it means he cheated her Angry seriously nyna you rocked Cool and we are shocked LOL

Then whole conversation between SwaSan was beautifully written , i just loved it .

Sanskar straightforwardness was superb and i really like that and his sense of humour in teasing her about not being a man was funny LOL and then stuffing cup cakes and Swara's attraction and pointless efforts to fight it. But swara feeling you have written it so perfectly i became speechless Clap and sanskar is so understanding Day Dreaming

Now i think this update was mind blowing
I really can't wait for next part
Update soon
Thanks for pm

Edited by Sujayricky - 28 May 2016 at 1:15pm

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Seriously. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Res for now cappuccino..

Unres.. Yaar..

Nyna.. Hug ... What can I say about this update... Ahh I got a hint when you said bipul Kumar may have his own story.. There striked this hint on my mind... Bk might be Laksh... Then I brushed off that from my mind... Lol... See here my assumption is right... Ahh ha.. Now I'm very excited to read the future updates soon...

Swara reply was expected one... Then Sanskaar explanation to Swara was good.. I never knew about Japanese art... But I love to do mending boken pieces of ceramic glass wears together using glue.. Not gold or silver... I fond of them I never threw broken wears out...

Then Sanskaar he is damn handsome one... Soo Manly... He is not ready to accept her accusation regarding his manliness... LOL ... That was quite obvious one... Swara muffin saved her this time...

Waiting for the progress in their relationship...

With love..


Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 30 May 2016 at 1:43am

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Sujayricky IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 1:16pm | IP Logged

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lucky.m IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
oh god ShockedShocked
what was that ..salt and spice haan this is what you were talking about in last reply ..wicked.Evil Smile..somewhere deep down I had a  lil bit ,very lil  bit doubt but I totally brushed it off ..oh what a twist ..I love it ..Thumbs Up

Lakshya = BipulAngry..whoa I am super excited to see equations from now on..cant wait...Alas I thought I might like laksh in this but guess somethings never changeLOL

and that Japanese concept , never knew about it but its so beautiful nynu and the way you have let sanskaar draw parallels with swara's state ..Thumbs Up awesome lady and I totally loved how you have kept swara's response simple straight with no drama ..yet making lot of sense.

and sanskaar will always be my love ..any chances lakshya aka bipul ka mooh tudavana sunny ke hathonROFLdamn fun it will beWink

lovely and beautiful part nynu ..ClapEmbarrassed


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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
It's awsm nd something different and unique which I have read uptill now'

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
Res Smile Hug Hug

Oh my God, Oh my God!! I did suspect Bipul Kumar was Lakshya's alias...but then I thought I was barking up the wrong tree. Wink But the suspicion just refused to get tamped down completely. LOL Ah well...you know how ambivalent I am about Mr Ambivalent. Wink

Aoow Gaawd, how the plot does thicken, with a twist in the tale!! SO very like Lakshya...to flirt and get infatuated with one sister, to not have the courage to see that relationship through; and to then fall for the other sister. Confused

Will be back for a detailed un res later Nyna...but in meantime, the SwaSan dialogues were AWESOME. Sanskaar's very lovely explanation of why Swara is all the more lovely and admirable for the fact of having made mistakes, and fought her way out of that pain; the link to the concept of wabi sabi that he drew, was simply wonderful. Clap Clap Kudos galore for those very evocative paras there, I just loved them, and fell in love with our Golden couple all over again. Embarrassed

And of course, that playful banter Sanskaar unleashed, asking Swara if she was questioning his masculinity, and to give him just half a chance to reassure her that he was very much all man. EmbarrassedLOL Naughty and slightly brazen Sunny boy was so much fun. Wink Especially the "I can reassure you on so many levels and in so many ways" concept.  Blushing Ahem ahem !! Blushing

That image of Sanskaar munching contentedly on the mini cupcakes Swara baked, while at the same time gamely plodding through the topic in a garbled tone, was an instant classic!! LOL ClapClap

Will be back for more later in the day. Just love you for this sweet, spicy, tangy tale and for that sweet dedication. Wink

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 28 May 2016 at 10:35pm

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