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SwaSan SS: Sweet Deals (Completed) (Page 30)

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 12:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jiya194

It's awsm nd something different and unique which I have read uptill now'

Thank you, Jiya, (unless your name is different from your UN). Looking forward to interacting with you.

love,
Nyna

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 12:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by CogitoErgoSum

Res Smile Hug Hug

Oh my God, Oh my God!! I did suspect Bipul Kumar was Lakshya's alias...but then I thought I was barking up the wrong tree. Wink But the suspicion just refused to get tamped down completely. LOL Ah well...you know how ambivalent I am about Mr Ambivalent. Wink

Aoow Gaawd, how the plot does thicken, with a twist in the tale!! SO very like Lakshya...to flirt and get infatuated with one sister, to not have the courage to see that relationship through; and to then fall for the other sister. Confused

Will be back for a detailed un res later Nyna...but in meantime, the SwaSan dialogues were AWESOME. Sanskaar's very lovely explanation of why Swara is all the more lovely and admirable for the fact of having made mistakes, and fought her way out of that pain; the link to the concept of wabi sabi that he drew, was simply wonderful. Clap Clap Kudos galore for those very evocative paras there, I just loved them, and fell in love with our Golden couple all over again. Embarrassed

And of course, that playful banter Sanskaar unleashed, asking Swara if she was questioning his masculinity, and to give him just half a chance to reassure her that he was very much all man. EmbarrassedLOL Naughty and slightly brazen Sunny boy was so much fun. Wink Especially the "I can reassure you on so many levels and in so many ways" concept.  Blushing Ahem ahem !! Blushing

That image of Sanskaar munching contentedly on the mini cupcakes Swara baked, while at the same time gamely plodding through the topic in a garbled tone, was an instant classic!! LOL ClapClap

Will be back for more later in the day. Just love you for this sweet, spicy, tangy tale and for that sweet dedication. Wink

Viji,HeartHeartHeart

First, you do deserve that dedication - a few sort of guessed, most thought that they were mistaken when I introduced Bipul Kumar but you were so spot on, including the reasoning as to how BK would be LM. Guess your ambivalence paid off. Somethings never change. 
As I have mentioned in my earlier replies, I had fallen in love with both the word and the philosophy, if only we could live our lives by that code, and somehow felt it would apply to Swara. Having Sanskaar say them to her, it just makes her realise how irrational all her fears are and that she could be loved even more because those cracks render her more beautiful. (Damn, why does Sanskaar have to be so dreamy and perfect - I seem to be falling for him and after my Aakrand debacle, my heart is quite murderousAngry)

Sunny boy - how can any man take any questioning on his masculinity, and yes Ahem, Ahem!!!ROFL I am sure our imagination can take care of the restWink

I am going to wait for the detailed chapter. Did I tell you this has made my day? Waiting for you to make it all over again.

love,
Nyna

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sneharay

Awesome update.. Clap

Thank you Sneha.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nynaeve

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Beautifully written, even though the end was predictable the way you presented it made even more suspenseful . Please update soon , it's a cliff hanger end

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Ohhh I so felt that laksh would be bipul kumar...!!!ConfusedConfused I was hoping it wouldn't be so... But.. Good twistLOL And the way Sanskar consoled Swara and literally empowered her wasHeart That Japanese story was super.. Learned a few thingsSmile I like Swara's stance of 'slow n steady'.. Now we just have to see how laksh's entry stirs things up.. Nice!!Smile

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 1:12am | IP Logged
Oh my god !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Its laksh AngryCensored
God !! I so hate him 
Now what is gonna happen in the story 
If the last chapter was a mere break for me...as i knew shona would accept that she loves him by the way u described her feelingsSmile
Now the story is revolving around the 4 ppl
Gosh its such a cliffhanger !!!...
Plzz sort ot out asap Confused
Yeah !!
Thanks for the PM
PreranaSmile

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Hey Nyna dear,Smile
Loved SwaSan moments.Embarrassed Loved the way how Sanskar made Swara understand.Wink Finally Shona accepted that she loves Sanskar.Embarrassed
But OMG!!!! What a twist!! So Laksh is Bipul Kumar!AngryConfused Now what will happen in the story??Confused
Plzz update the next part soon.Embarrassed And thanks for the pm.Big smile
With love,
Aheli.

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 11:03am | IP Logged
I knew it .. I  really knew Ragini boyfriend will be the same one Swara met few years ago. I was not 100 percent sure, you can never be that sure when it is not who you are writing the story , but i guessed it,especially when i know ragini never met him during the time Swara loved him . I know i am way behind on my comment but cant keep myself from giving a brief comment after i read the latest update.

I really loved the last few updates Nyna dear, you know my schedule and i am so sorry for not being able to unres or comment longer.. Accept it for now will give my detailed one later  

Sanskar confession and the way he made Swara accept it was so awesome. The whole japanese story  about broken things he told her knowing swara will listen and understand it deeper meaning was too good. I totally get Swara asking for time but it would have been an smooth and nice sailing if not for Lakshya entry.. Let me patiently wait till the next update. 


Nyna dear, i really look forward to reading you updates and your updates are so interesting and awesome .So dont worry about the length of it . Each sentence makes for an amazing reading experience. Sorry about my short comment ..Another one in my sleep deprived state. But just letting you know i read Chapter 6 and absolutely loved it . 

Love

Nita





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