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SwaSan SS: Sweet Deals (Completed) (Page 28)

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Krishnabhisarik

Eeeks!!!! Omg omg omgBig smileBig smileBig smile Res for now.. Will unres tomorrow morningBig smile
Unres!
Yo! Lovely update NynaHug
The part where Ragini had sworn she doesn't want another Marwari in her life, so natural, giving the examples she's had.. But but but, fate is pretty funny coz she falls fast and hard for a special MarwariWink.. I do hope he helps breaking her prejudicesConfused The reasons why she is afraid to confide at first were so simple and real.. And also endearing.. Their past life has left them a bit scarred,no? Loved that line about Swara n Sanskar being her only family.. And her 'falling-in-love' story was sooo cuteLOL
So nicely you have written about their bond.. Swara being shocked, then curious, then furiousTongue, skeptical, worried, and once she calms down... Right into 'full details gossip mode'LOLLOL
The proposal... HaayeDay Dreaming So direct n heartfelt... M glad there was no fluff n fuss.. Just simple n honest, thus, extremely romanticDay Dreaming Loved it!!Big smile
Love,
AkshataSmile

Dear Akshata,

Ragini not wanting another Marwadi in her life- completely wrong statistically (her sample is too small to be representative of the communityWink but then she never had any access to any other person). 
And fate - it has a weird sense of humour, usually gives you what you like the leastDead 
Yes, the past has left them quite scarred, Swara afraid of that very word and Ragini not too confident either, which is why she says that she wants them to approve of him. 

Sanskaar's proposal had to be like him, direct, honest and to the point. He means every word he says which would be romantic too. (actually, we are so enamoured by Sanskaar that anything he does or says would be romanticLOL)

love,
Nyna


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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sneharay

Awesome update..
Ragini's love story is nice
Sanskaar confesses his feeling
Update soon
Waiting for next part

Dear Sneha,

Ragini's love story is quite cute, right and Sanskaar had to confess, how was he going to wait for Swara to make up her mind. 
Will update the next part soon.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 25 May 2016 at 3:45am | IP Logged
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Sorry I am lateConfused

One more delicious treat.Embarrassed. I wouldn't mind biting such yummy biscuits more oftenWink

Lets start with my fav part . the confession or should I say confession cum proposal , whatever it is ,like always sanskaar takes my heart awayHeart ..I totally loved his seedhi baat no bakwaas andaaz Embarrassed and on that kiss.. ok It was not a proper kiss but it wasEmbarrassed

It was a such beautifully done scene nynu ..It has got such a nice feel around it ..ClapStar

Swaragini bond in your ss is just so good to read after all that crap we were put across under the name of behna pyaar ..loved how swara's protective instincts kicked for ragini after hearing about laksh, typical sister LOLjust like ragini was at time of swara sanskaar camerediere 

Ragini and lakshya.. their story was simple and cute  and sanskaar and laksh are acquaintances...hmm well that leaves me a bit curios and how that might play a role in future proceedings..ShockedShocked

I love how this sweet treat is turning out to be more delicious with each update choclate, sugar honey , biscuit ..EmbarrassedClap Cant wait for the next one..

Love Loads
Lucky

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Posted: 25 May 2016 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lucky.m

nynuHugHug
Sorry I am lateConfused

One more delicious treat.Embarrassed. I wouldn't mind biting such yummy biscuits more oftenWink

Yummy biscuits, ehHug

Lets start with my fav part . the confession or should I say confession cum proposal , whatever it is ,like always sanskaar takes my heart awayHeart ..I totally loved his seedhi baat no bakwaas andaaz Embarrassed and on that kiss.. ok It was not a proper kiss but it wasEmbarrassed

Proposal - did you know that in the first draft I had actually included the line - "Will you marry me?" - that was the last line. I was not too sure so deleted it in the final edit. Guess the impact remained.Wink

It was a such beautifully done scene nynu ..It has got such a nice feel around it ..ClapStar

Swaragini bond in your ss is just so good to read after all that crap we were put across under the name of behna pyaar ..loved how swara's protective instincts kicked for ragini after hearing about laksh, typical sister LOLjust like ragini was at time of swara sanskaar camerediere 

Sisters bond - yes the serial ruined that bond completely. It actually makes you feel it is better not to have a sisterDead

Ragini and lakshya.. their story was simple and cute  and sanskaar and laksh are acquaintances...hmm well that leaves me a bit curios and how that might play a role in future proceedings..ShockedShocked

Lakshya and Ragini - cute story right? And how would Sanskaar and Lakshya acquaintance play in the future - will tell in the next two chapters


I love how this sweet treat is turning out to be more delicious with each update choclate, sugar honey , biscuit ..EmbarrassedClap Cant wait for the next one..

Beware, Sweetheart, it could be a tad spicy or salty or...Evil Smile

Love Loads
Lucky


Dear Lucky,

Replied in blue above,

love,
Nyna

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Posted: 25 May 2016 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by CogitoErgoSum

Hi Nynu Hug

Caught up in a jam of work...but in the meantime, a quick post to say I really liked Chapter 5. Bite the Biscuit LOL Wink You are really a whiz at these "themed" chapter titles. LOL


Viji sweetheart, you really must be caught up in work - one in the night. And you take the time to comment on my work - I simply love you.Hug And call me a whiz
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A very tasty nibble of crunchy biscuit this was. Your description of Lakshya as this kind of dreamy dude, obsessed with the books he was reading, was fun. Smile I think Lakshya is getting far more layers in Fan fictions than he ever did in the serial. Wink Ragini's explanation as to why she did not confide earlier in Swara; Swara's concern and slight distress over Ragini's news---were handled very subtly. The sibling bond, again, came through so well.

Lakshya, in the serial, for all his faults, was such a single dimensional character, maybe that is why he irritates us so muchWink. Ragini not telling Swara, yes, part of it was her fear if she could be making a mistake falling in love and partly because she knew that Swara would go into that protective mode.

So Lakshya is an acquaintance of Sanskaar's? Ragini has come to know this, but Sanskaar does not yet know of Ragini's and Lakshya's relationship, have I got that right?

Yes, she knows both are Maheshwaris but Sanskaar does not know of it yet - I think that will come up in the next chapter.

Ragini saying that Swara and Sanskaar are her family, the ones most important to her, was so very moving. As for her matter of fact diagnosis, that Swara would never be able to keep anything from Sanskaar---that was fun. Wink LOL Very true, too! Even Swara was half hearted in trying to contradict that.

For Ragini, it is only Swara and Sanskaar now, she too has given up any hopes of being reconciled with their family and has decided to hold on to them. Swara, ***sigh*** when has she ever been able to keep anything from Sanskaar, but I feel this is the most endearing trait of hers (even Sanskaar would like it though in future it might be difficult for her to plan any surprise for him)

That ending SwaSan scene...was pure delightful hot chocolate! Embarrassed Day Dreaming With added chocolate powder, too! Sanskaar was so direct and sincere in the way he told Swara what he felt. Intense without being overwhelming, loving and romantic without resorting to purple prose. Very nice touch. Day Dreaming

Sanskaar's confession - short and direct (100% pure chocolate with a hint of orangeWink ever tried it out - I do not recall the brand but you do get roasted almonds coated with this combination - chocolate nirvanaDay Dreaming). I am so glad you liked it, I did write a slightly more flowery one but edited it out on the second reading. Smile

Lots of Love,

---Viji


Dearest Viji,

Replied in blue above,

love,
Nyna

PS: How is the TS coming up? Hopefully, you have moved it up from  ''possible' tag to a 'potential WIP' list!

Hey Nyna Hug

No progress yet on writing my next 3S yaar. To tell the truth, I've kind of lost the flow on that one after I fell ill. I had more or less finished writing notes for the 1st part before I got sick, and had the outline for the next 2 planned...but now it just won't translate on paper (word doc Wink), despite my best attempts. Confused Confused I'm seriously bugged, but kya kare. 

Tell you what, once you finish this scrumptious sweet deals SS, please roll out the Aakrand--Archini and Anubandh--Agrini fic. Wink In exchange, I'll promise to fast track my 3S to a potential WIP. What say? Smile

When is part 6 planned for this one BTW? Will it be called Kaapi Nirvana? EmbarrassedDay Dreaming A continuation of that blissful SwaSan moment, maybe? 

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Originally posted by Nynaeve

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Hey Nyna Hug

No progress yet on writing my next 3S yaar. To tell the truth, I've kind of lost the flow on that one after I fell ill. I had more or less finished writing notes for the 1st part before I got sick, and had the outline for the next 2 planned...but now it just won't translate on paper (word doc Wink), despite my best attempts. Confused Confused I'm seriously bugged, but kya kare. 

Tell you what, once you finish this scrumptious sweet deals SS, please roll out the Aakrand--Archini and Anubandh--Agrini fic. Wink In exchange, I'll promise to fast track my 3S to a potential WIP. What say? Smile

When is part 6 planned for this one BTW? Will it be called Kaapi Nirvana? EmbarrassedDay Dreaming A continuation of that blissful SwaSan moment, maybe? 


Dear Viji,

My Aakrand- Archini-Anubandh-Agrini tale is the one that has run amok.Cry 

I tried my best, I really did, I even had a meeting between, I, me, myself and all the characters of the tale. Lovely meeting room with wide windows and a long rosewood table. (Now as our good friend Albus Dumbledore says, "Just because it is happening in my head , why on Earth should it mean it is not real?"). Where was I ? - yes, the meeting. 

One side of the table, all of the mes - the creative meD'oh, the dreamy me Day Dreaming, the realistic me (trying not to fall asleep Sleepy), the optimistic me (already visualising how many pages the finished SS would be Dancing) the pessimistic me (staring at clock wondering how long it would take for the meeting to come to the inevitable end Ermm) a couple of other mes  (I cannot identify them for now) and finally the belligerent me (with a mean looking axe that had a very shiny sharp edge)Angry

On the other side, the lovely and the not so lovely, the nice and the mean characters, along with a few unnamed ones, a few horses and a cat (!!!where the devil did the cat spring from, I remember a reference to a panther, guess my writing skills were at an all time low when I described that panther Confused) and at the centre seat - none other than our Aakrand (damn, did I have to make him so irrestible, I think I am drooling a little on him - 
 okay, drooling a lot.

He calls the meeting to order (the temerity of him) and raises the question - "Just what do you plan to do with us?" 

"Write a story, what else do I do with you, take you home?" (that was the sarcastic me - how could I forget her - which promptly got a reply from the dreamy me - "pleeease, I can take him"). 

One raised eyebrow and he continues in a condescending way, "Let me understand, you have already written a draft as to how the story has to go and have determined the end - so why this wild goose chase, kill off whom so ever you want, right away and leave the rest of us alone, we can manage quite well without stumbling our way through your inane quest. And who says every story needs a quest or an adventure?"

Silence - for once all of me is silent- pin drop silence.

Then the googling me (that was the other one I failed to identify earlier) says - "but how can you have a tale without a quest, it is needed to develop the character's arc, that is what every writer worth his/her salt says. I know, I have googled every possible aspect of story writing. A quest is needed for a character's development."

He shakes his head - "it is needed to prove your idea of the character to the readers, you know me and the readers know me -even if they give us weird nicknames - SwaSan and RagYa. CensoredScrap the quest, tear up your notes. We are not going to be put through the hoops  for an ending that has been predetermined by you. So we take our leave of you" 

And before we could recover, they simply filed out of the room. He, ever the gentleman, was the last to leave and gives me a wink.Wink

This time, the long silence was broken by a thud - it was the belligerent me, who had fallen on her axe, wrong side up, yet again.

And that is my sad taleCryCry - I pondered for  another SS (drafted it for a few pages), scribbled several lines for an OS before I started Sweet Deals (now you know the secret- why this SS is and would be a sweet and cliched tale with very little angst - I was drowning myself in coffee and chocolate).

I still have not worked up the courage to revisit those pages - maybe once I am done with this SS and am able to get through the current ML track I shall dare to step into their world again.  Dead

So please do not link fast tracking your 3S to my Aakrand tale (I have to first find out where in the whole universe he has disappeared to, I imbued him with exceptional camouflage skillsAngryAngry)

Chapter 6 is almost done - but it will not be Kappa NirvanaSmile - that would necessitate a trip to purgatory and hell before reaching heaven and proceeding on to Nirvana. Maybe a little salty sweetness or a sweet tanginessWink

love,
Nyna

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 2:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolgal270

Res..
Wao..totally loved it... Had a smile on my face throughout he last chp..
Will unres soon! Lots of love

Dear Sumi,

Long time, no see. Missed you. Will wait for you.

love,
Nyna

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