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SwaSan SS: Sweet Deals (Completed) (Page 25)

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Posted: 23 May 2016 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by CogitoErgoSum

Hi Nynu Hug

Caught up in a jam of work...but in the meantime, a quick post to say I really liked Chapter 5. Bite the Biscuit LOL Wink You are really a whiz at these "themed" chapter titles. LOL


Viji sweetheart, you really must be caught up in work - one in the night. And you take the time to comment on my work - I simply love you.Hug And call me a whiz
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A very tasty nibble of crunchy biscuit this was. Your description of Lakshya as this kind of dreamy dude, obsessed with the books he was reading, was fun. Smile I think Lakshya is getting far more layers in Fan fictions than he ever did in the serial. Wink Ragini's explanation as to why she did not confide earlier in Swara; Swara's concern and slight distress over Ragini's news---were handled very subtly. The sibling bond, again, came through so well.

Lakshya, in the serial, for all his faults, was such a single dimensional character, maybe that is why he irritates us so muchWink. Ragini not telling Swara, yes, part of it was her fear if she could be making a mistake falling in love and partly because she knew that Swara would go into that protective mode.

So Lakshya is an acquaintance of Sanskaar's? Ragini has come to know this, but Sanskaar does not yet know of Ragini's and Lakshya's relationship, have I got that right?

Yes, she knows both are Maheshwaris but Sanskaar does not know of it yet - I think that will come up in the next chapter.

Ragini saying that Swara and Sanskaar are her family, the ones most important to her, was so very moving. As for her matter of fact diagnosis, that Swara would never be able to keep anything from Sanskaar---that was fun. Wink LOL Very true, too! Even Swara was half hearted in trying to contradict that.

For Ragini, it is only Swara and Sanskaar now, she too has given up any hopes of being reconciled with their family and has decided to hold on to them. Swara, ***sigh*** when has she ever been able to keep anything from Sanskaar, but I feel this is the most endearing trait of hers (even Sanskaar would like it though in future it might be difficult for her to plan any surprise for him)

That ending SwaSan scene...was pure delightful hot chocolate! Embarrassed Day Dreaming With added chocolate powder, too! Sanskaar was so direct and sincere in the way he told Swara what he felt. Intense without being overwhelming, loving and romantic without resorting to purple prose. Very nice touch. Day Dreaming

Sanskaar's confession - short and direct (100% pure chocolate with a hint of orangeWink ever tried it out - I do not recall the brand but you do get roasted almonds coated with this combination - chocolate nirvanaDay Dreaming). I am so glad you liked it, I did write a slightly more flowery one but edited it out on the second reading. Smile

Lots of Love,

---Viji


Dearest Viji,

Replied in blue above,

love,
Nyna

PS: How is the TS coming up? Hopefully, you have moved it up from  ''possible' tag to a 'potential WIP' list!

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Posted: 23 May 2016 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Res...

Unres cappuccino...

Nyna... Hug ... Loved it man... I really loved Ragini perception regarding her baba and Dadaji... Soo it's Laksh or someone... If Laksh then he is not marwari then... Confused LOL ...

Swara her anger has a valid point if anyone disturb us when we are dreaming about our love... Why can't we give them a Angry bite... Ah... Soo dreamy Swara... Sanskaar and Ragini bf known each other interesting... He may be his cousin naa.. My guess...

That kiss and Sanskaar confession must say one the best confession I have seen and read... Wonderful.. Bold and Manly... Mmmawh Nyna... Sorry babes for late unres...

Waiting for Swara response...

With love...

Kam...

Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 26 May 2016 at 3:58am

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Posted: 23 May 2016 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
And I love you Nyna for writing this. Res. More when my papers are done with. It was awesome!

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sakura24

And I love you Nyna for writing this. Res. More when my papers are done with. It was awesome!

HugHugHug for you and this is meBlushingBlushingBlushing (awesome???? - I am the colour of an exceptionally ripe tomato - if I had a couple of kgs more on my frame I would look like one tooWink)
Please focus on your papers, I will wait.

love,
Nyna

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 3:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tootiefrootie11

Nyna dearest, I still need to comment on 4 too but am behind - am so sorry! I was so so happy to read you posted 5, I seriously need something nice SwaSan related to read today! I will comment late but will def do so!  Love,
Shru xoxo 

Dear Shru,

Take your time, I am still recovering from DK CryCry

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Hi dear Nyna!!!!Smile
Chapter 5 is so awesome!!Clap
The bonding and the conversation between Swara and Ragini was so beautiful and sweet.Smile I think that the 'special friend' of Ragini is Laksh.Wink
And the Swasan moments were so amazing.Embarrassed Sanskar daydreaming about Swara.Day Dreaming Awww! Finally he confessed that he loves Swara.Big smileDancing Hope that Swara also confess soon.Wink
Plzz update the next part soon.Embarrassed And thanks for the pm.Big smile
With love and lots of hugs!!!!HugHug
Aheli.

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Awesome update..
Ragini's love story is nice
Sanskaar confesses his feeling
Update soon
Waiting for next part

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by iam_aheli_98

Hi dear Nyna!!!!Smile
Chapter 5 is so awesome!!Clap
The bonding and the conversation between Swara and Ragini was so beautiful and sweet.Smile I think that the 'special friend' of Ragini is Laksh.Wink
And the Swasan moments were so amazing.Embarrassed Sanskar daydreaming about Swara.Day Dreaming Awww! Finally he confessed that he loves Swara.Big smileDancing Hope that Swara also confess soon.Wink
Plzz update the next part soon.Embarrassed And thanks for the pm.Big smile
With love and lots of hugs!!!!HugHug
Aheli.

Dear Aheli,HugHug

Swara and Ragini - I am thrilled that their bonding is so well received. I am sure that is what sisters are in real life. 
Ragini's friend being Lakshya - seems there is no surprise there.LOL

Sanskaar daydreaming about Swara - poor guy what else can he do-  in love with a girl who is somewhat terrified of that very word. Finally, he decides the enough is enough - Swara is the one confused, not him so there is nothing to stop him from telling her. Swara's confession D'ohI am not too sure - she is still one confused soul.
Next part - soonSmile

love,
Nyna


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