SwaSan SS: Sweet Deals (Completed) - Page 36

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

RES DEAR

UNRES

Hi dear Nyna 🤗

Dear Harshada🤗🤗

First of all I am so very sorry for being this much late.😭😭

You don't know how guilty I am for delaying so much in replying for this beautiful piece of writing but really could not help it dear.

Past two months went in settling down the messed up things in life and then struggling for recovery from my health issues.

I hope to get forgiven for my delay.

I am upset - because you have said sorry 😭😭😭 (Which is in absolute contravention of Sunny boy's rule and should be followed with no exceptions.) So please no sorry, no thank you and absolutely no asking for forgiveness for delayed comments. As I just mentioned to Nita above, I am aware of how hectic life gets and the fact that you have not only read but are taking time out to write a comment - that itself is a great reward for me.

I read this today at 5 AM...my sleep got broken as it was raining heavily here.

There was no meaning in getting back to sleep and remembered about this.

And read five chapters [5 to 9] in a go.

Once I started reading, there was no way to stop in middle.

 I was kind of lost in this amazingly wonderful world of sweet deals.

I feel absolutely great that my story was engrossing enough to make you read it and not miss sleeping (I am a voracious reader and at times have to be threatened with physical violence to make me go to bed when I read a book) so your words have me floating in the clouds🤪

I just love the quotes used and the titles given by you in this SS😳

I missed commenting from 5 th chapter so will give a short reply about all.

You loved the quotes - I sort of collect them and simply look for an chance to start quoting them, so as it is my story I simply could not resist😳

I really like the conversation in between Swaragini.

Ragini's description about how she fell for her 'special friend'[ aka bipul aka laksh]

The way Swara blurted over Ragini for hiding her relationship from her for almost 10 months, it showed her care and love for Ragini.

I am the one who really like Swaragini in serial as well [ though I never liked when Ragini was negative...but I just love these sisters when both are positive...fighting for each other not with each other...protecting each other]

I loved how Ragini was determined if Swasan doesnt approve her BF, she would break all the ties with him because she knew these two would never take any wrong decision for her.

The sisters' bond in the serial was - as I have oft repeated myself - completely butchered. I do not have any sisters, only one brother, but I am sure that the sibling bond is anything but that which the serial portrayed, especially Ragini turning a tad too negative (her molestation charge against Sanskaar was the one that finally killed all my sympathy for her). And Ragini - as she said, Swara and Sanskaar are her family, and after knowing what they went through, decided to take their approval for her love story.

No words to write something for SWASAN moments 

But that itself says so much🤗

Beautfully described Sanskar's confession...😳...I loved how simply and elegantly Sanskar put forward his feelings for Swara, "I CAN NO LONGER IMAGINE  MY LIFE WITHOUT YOU"

That is Sanskaar - he does have a gift of words and understands exactly what to say, especially when it comes to Swara. I agree that frills and long declarations of love are very thrilling but then something is to be said about those short and sweet speeches which convey the deepest emotions in the least possible words. And then those words do convey everything that Sanskaar feels for and wants from Swara😊

Loved the way Sanskar held his lady love with his soothing yet loving words when she was too feared to get into that phase again which had been proved as a scary nightmare for her...for which she was still repenting...

You took my heart by writing the philosophy of wabi-sabi😳

It was so beautiful reading all what you wrote taking that point.

Sanskar was ready to wait no matter how long swara would take to make up her mind❤️

Sanskar Maheshwari...name itself is enough to make me fall for him again and again.

As I said above, Sanskaar does have a way with words. And he was well aware of how Swara could feel about love and affections as she had made up her mind that she would never have a chance at that love once again after her fiasco with Lakshya. And when Sanskaar tells her about kinstugi - it must have been so lovely to know that one could be beautiful in spite of past scars - often most of us try to convince others that scars do not matter, that mistakes donot count - but to acknowledge that one could be beautiful with scars - that is indeed true love. And the very assurance that she could be loved in spite of her stupid mistake, was just what she needed.

The point when Swara told Sanskar that Ragini not only adored him but considered him as a big brother and a father figure which she always craved for.Your tale made a special place for Sanskar an ragini bond in my heart.

Ragini and Swara both had a father but not much of one, so Sanskaar did become the elder brother /father figure Ragini always craved for. 

Not to miss the hilarious conversation between swasan when he said "Or I am not a man to which I vehemently disagree" 😆 I was all 🤣 by reading that para.

Am so glad you liked it, I simply was on a roll and actually love that bit the most in my story😆

Well I had slight guess about Laksh being Bipul.

I seriously do hate Laksh here for the deeds he had done.

Laksh's revelations made me hate him even more.

He left a girl after igniting rays of hope and expectations in her😡 

The way she stood up for her sister despite of the fact that she loved Laksh.

Well, that was a small attempt from my side to build up some suspense - but then I guess it was not difficult to identify that impulsive and immature person as Lakshya. Ragini, there was no way she could choose Lakshya over Swara.

Chapter 7 made me absolutely adore Swaragini's bond and especially ragini here.

Ragini took a knife for Laksh saying he did not deserve to live after what he had done👏😆

Sanskar he once again took my heart by saying Swaragini might forgive him but he would not.Such a perfect he is as a person😳Well done Ragini...I love her for this

Ragini - well she was always the more passionate one - so there was no way she could keep calm after all those conflicting emotions that Lakshya caused in her - she knew she loved him and hated herself for that because she knew how much Swara suffered - so she did resort to that attempt. Sanskaar - a cool guy - with a very capable head on his shoulders - he knew that she would regret it the most and that rather than resort to a physical restraint (Which Swara had already done) decided to appeal to her sense of reasoning. It worked, did it not?

Such a lovely swasan moments and described so very beautifully.

The way swara ran into sanskar's arms and broke down in front of him and the way he held her protectively without stopping her, letting her to cry out all what she had inside but at the same time not letting her to lose herself in that process...he stood like a firm support for her

I am kind of person who likes reading this little little moments.A big hug to you for writing this 🤗

You are so right - it is such small moments that lead to large decisions, when a simple gesture can convey what a thousand words do not. She need to have one last cry and who better a support for her than him? Sanskaar simply holding her and letting her cry - it gave a strong message to Swara - he would always be there for her. Am so glad that you could read into it and get back with such a lovely comment❤️

Our darling Sanskar, blaming himself and our sweetheart swara, made sure to not let him feel guilty for something he had no role in.

"Wow what a transformation!!! my wet bedraggled kitten seems to have metamorphosed into the bengal tigress that she should be" what a line Nyna🤗

Swasan's one more kiss ☺️

Swara is a bengal tigress - she just need Sanskaar reminding her of it. And Sanskaar is such a gentleman, so much in love with her, he will take any blame rather than have her feel sorry. But Swara is no less in love with him, how can she let him do that - the kiss😳😳 - it did stop the need for further words, right?

Wonderfully written Raginis's self realization that she could have done better years before because of which they might had not forced to live the way they had to, her guilt about the way Swara had to live her life in that bakery while she herself went on living the one she wanted to

Ragini - well - every person does have a chance to introspect and make amends, but Swara's selflessness did make it a little difficult for Ragini to make amends, so she does carry a sizeable amount of guilt. Finally Lakshya's truth gives her a chance to come out.

Annapurna Maheshwari 😕  So her karma is coming back to her... Well the one have to repent their deeds here only ...today or tomorrow.

Mrs Das's story was extremely touching and heartbreaking at the same time. Reading this chapter, did clear about the mystery of character Mrs. Das.

The flashback was a revelation of what happened to gadodiya family.Liked Dadi's character here, for thinking it might be her strict behavior her granddaughters left because of.

Sharmishtha believed her daughter's were alive😊

Finally Mrs Das convienced swaragini to get back to their home with assurance of being their for them always.

It was so beautiful when Swara said she wished Sanskar was there😳

And ragini's statement about the sanskar and mrs das who sort of dragged them back there😆

Karma - well - it is indeed payback time for Annapurna. As you said, you pay the price for your deeds in this material world itself.

Mrs Das story - it was a sad one right - there is no greater sorry than to bury your child but in her case she never even had a chance to seek forgiveness. It must have been a very heavy burden to carry. And yes, about the Gadodias, they did believe the sisters to be dead, most of them - that was the only way I could have them not search for Swara and Ragini.  And as I said for the above point, every person does need to do some introspection, the shock of getting the news of her granddaughters' death and overhearing some of the people did convince her that her unnecessary strictness might have been a reason for the girls to leave home. 

Swara now needs Sanskaar with her always and Ragini -she was right, was she not - it was Sanskaar and Mrs. Das who did convince the girls to go home

You are an amazing amazing writer Nyna.👏

I must say your choice of words about describing anything was so strong that it literally made me to visualize everything right in front of my eyes.😳

Reading the above lines - I am overwhelmed and thrilled😳😳😳

I am yet to read 10 th chapter. Will read and comment as soon as I can.

I would not deny saying I am currently in love with this tale🤗

And I love you for loving my tale and for the lovely ones that you write🤗🤗

Love

-HARSHADA

Originally posted by: Bennet.Lizzy

Res.. 😳

Going to bed with a smile. Will wake up and unres happily:)

That line makes me go☺️☺️☺️☺️ each time I read it

Unres

Dear Nyna,😳

I love your Dragon. She vaguely reminds me of 'old Smaug' smart witty and could see through everything. But I love for a much different reason. She just laid out everything  on the table there and made things extremely easy for Swasan. She is a co-shipper in other words. So I love her.

My dragon - yes she is a fire breathing, scaly thick hided one in appearances, but hides a large heart of gold. And based on her own bitter experience of handling the love of young people, she surely did not want anyone, parent or child to go through that experience. So she is going to be a SwaSan shipper, no two ways about it.

The surprise was expected nyna, but to have everyone there was not. It was quite a pleasant scene thanks to Sanskaar and Mrs Das who made sure to make it "in as few tears as possible" 

Sanskaar and Mrs. Das left no stone unturned to ensure the girls got the best welcome possible, all the families as well as most of the members of the Baadi, their family  being there was the only thingk they wanted, but having everyone there, it was like the whole world had turned out for their welcome.😆

Shomi did rock though! She breathed fire for quite a few minutes there! I could imagine Durga Prasad taking a step back in shock and shame. Always wanted to see how they could have a face off on screen and this just fulfilled my wishes. They both have some sort of fierceness to their characters that it sets the very pages ablaze when such people come into the scene . Well played off by you as usual .

Shomi took over the mantle of the breathing dragon - hearing what DP had to say brought out the fact that their daughters had indeed runway from home for a guy, and it also brought to fore the dark possibility that they were dead - she was almost at the breaking point. And yes, DP must have taken quite a few steps back - he knew her fury was justified and that nothing he said or did would abate her anger

But then Sanskaar just grabbed the moment as he rightly stepped in, having caught the anguish of a mother. He understood what she just needed and gave her the same in a clam voice. He just knows how to break those tough walls the Bose ladies build around them, doesn't he? That was one thing that stood out to me in the whole story. And I so loved it. His patient and measured approach to every problem. The guy is cool :D

Sanskaar ****sigh****one of these days he is going to be death of me. As it is, the one in the serial itself is enough to make us go weak in the knees, and he seems to getting even more irresistible with each fic that is written on him. And his persona is so strong, that even if you want to water him down, you are unable to do so. With such magnetism, how could the Bose ladies stand a chance, Swara, Ragini and now Sharmishta, each in different ways, but equally bowled over by him😆 

The other thing I love here is the spine Ragini never failed to show. She has a certain resilience that needs to appreciated, especially when it comes to the ways in which she handled lakshya. Also, a little appreciation goes in favour of lakshya for his repentance, especially when he said he would like to stay away to not cause any discomfort to Swasan. 

Sanskaar and Ragini - cvs really need to take a leaf from your fic here. Of all the fics I have read I guess I like this the most when it comes to these two. They have been amazing since the start of their friendship, may it be while playing guardian angels or while giving each other a shoulder to lean on. The best moment they both had however was in this chapter when she just walked to him and to,d him that she doesn't want to be a reason if delay in the already long story Swasan set out on. 

Ragini - does it make me a bad shipper if I admit that I like the layers she has - I mean as a SwaSan shipper, I do love Swara, but Ragini always managed to fascinate me, a little bit more. And true to her layered personality, she had to be true to all her emotions, she admits that she does not doubt either her love for Lakshya or his love for her, her grudge is wholly on the account that he dumped her sister. Yes, Lakshya too is on his way to redemption, he had decided that their relationship now depends wholly on Ragini, so the next best course would be to move to Mumbai, so that his presence does not cause Swara any discomfort. (which though taken with his usual impulsiveness, would turn out the best decision - both Sanskaar and Swara would find it easier to forgive him - Swara already seems to have done so) and Ragini would be forced to consider this in deciding whether to forgive him or not. The other thing, which he did not know when he made that decision was that Ragini would also be in Mumbai for a couple of months - could go a long way in trying to smooth his way - if he plays his cards right this time.😉

Sanskaar and Ragini - true friends - and she loves both of them and knows that they could adopt the ideal but stupid course of waiting for her to make up her mind - and that would have been painful for all concerned. At least with Sanskaar and Swara engaged, the only thing she and everyone would have to worry about is RagLak.

An over all good piece again. Couldn't wait for the next one!

Next one - maximum by tomorrow - and that is the final one😊

Love

N