SwaSan SS: Sweet Deals (Completed) - Page 32

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Such a lovely update!!😊 Res for now.. Will unres soon hopefully..

Unres😛

Hey Nyna!! I'm so sorry I'm late... running super busy nowadays.. I have read n re-read this chapter😃, just didnt get time to sit down n peacefully write a nice comment...

***Sigh****why do you need to apologise - it is great that you have read and are now writing out a comment

Wonderful chapter yaar! Ragini has shown such strength in admitting every single thought that was weighing on her mind all these years, when she was distraught.. After these revelations, she still has clarity of thought, what she wants, what she has.. I loved her stand.. Also Laksh needed that account to know all the repercussions of his past actions, so as his present is well thought out.. Swara, Ragini, laksh all committed their own mistakes, I'm glad the sisters are trying to overcome the guilt and be stronger n smarter.. Hopefully Laksh does the same..😊

Ragini - is strong - all of us face negative emotions and at times do given to them, but it takes to courage to admit to them and try to make amends. And Lakshya so needed to have the truth brought home to him, and who better than Ragini, whom he does love. How does Lakshya make amends, next chapters.

Coming to SwaSan😳😳 Of course they can't stay away from each other!! they have a traitorous soul-heart-connection (and crazy fans😉), who arent going to allow any distance-business😆😆

I liked how they are each other's light n anchor, in a very real, stable way😊😊 Those last two questions, very vital... Can't wait for their answers... 😃😃

Swara and Sanskaar, they not soulmates, they are on soul, one life, how can anybody stay away from one own self.😊 The last two question, well next chapter should have some answers.

Love,

Akshata😊

Dear Friends and my lovely readers,

Res 😊

Nyna dear

Nyna.. darling soo bitterness is ended here.. I lived the whole journey of this part... How the facts hits Maheswari family... I loved Sanskaar here more being a responsible son.. he is doing his best to overcome this situation... they get to know about their son Laksh... who is weared a mask before...

Gadodias state was clearly penned down... mmmawh I left with tears...

Same happened with Mrs.das biography... Reason behind that R.. song..

Is anyone died in baadi... why sisters are shocked...

Update soon..

With love...

Kam...

Nynu

Hey Nyna dearest

As you know from our PM exchange, I have been MIA from the forum for various reasons and hence have been very remiss in even reading and commenting on the wonderful offerings by way of ff's here. This is briefer than I would like but I had to break silence today to write to some and I just wanted to say that your nervousness on 9 is again unwarranted. After all that has come before it, this chapter in my very humble opinion was very necessary. I can see that you are drawing threads together to bring this lovely tale of falling in love sweetly, with bitterness exercised along with it as the journey progressed, to a close soon. There is sadness for that as there always is with good stories soon to end but in the nicest way. For now this chapter I felt was woven with your characteristic flair and really helped bring the next juncture about. I really enjoyed reading how you handled Annapurna, the complexities of her character came out. My personal best bit was the part about Mrs Das and how her journey with the girls, linked to her own past experiences, played out. Liked how Lakshya too wants to take responsibility firmly and Sanskaar ofcourse was the glue on that end that is slowly but surely gelling things together:). Looking forward to 10! Lots of love

Shru xoxo

Hi Nyna...

According to Sunny boy's rule there is no room for sorry and thank you but my sincere apology for not reverting here till 9 chapters. I still remember I read intro and first part in middle of ongoing presentation...res'd my place saying I'll revert as I get back to home but then things got messed up in personal and professional life and I lost track of everything. Sorry for that and thanks for sending me pm inspite of my lateness.

I am actually in love with this tale of yours. So much yo learn through this. Sister's bond that we were promised to be given in the serial and we got ...well lets nt discuss that but you very beautifully portrayed that. Well I too have younger sister so I can very well connect to the possessiveness, care and love you wrote.

They were wrong, mislead, hurt were in pain away from their families but thankfully were together in that bad phase.

Sanskar ! No words for him. You made me fall in love with his character more than I already was. He slowly and steadily stole his princess's heart, while assuring her, supporting her, providing strength to her more on emotional level.

Those kisses they shared...( sigh)...pure bliss!

Lakshya in his immaturity spoiled many lives. Just one sorry can't rewind everything and people can't move on.
Five years ! Long time for changing person and their lives.

Mrs. Das such a sweetheart!She took care of GIRLS in her words because of her own reasons but in 9 th part the way she was the reason Swara and Ragini decided to go vack to baadi.

I liked your way of writing very much. Trust, family, love, bondings , learning from mistakes and still being there for your loved one list continues of what you perfectly portrayed.

Quotes u used in this tale...All in all I loved everything.
For me Swara and Ragini, their love and bond is highlight and most loved part amidst of all other beautiful things.

So Nyna you did brilliant job my dear for penning down this tale. Hats off to you !

Stay blessed
Mukta

Dear Veena, Kamila, Lucky, Shru (🤗 for breaking your self-imposed exile), Mukta and Sneha,

You're taking about res... ahh man I thought to give straight comment... i may forget my res then...