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And I love you Nyna for writing this. Res. More when my papers are done with. It was awesome!
Originally posted by: Sakura24And I love you Nyna for writing this. Res. More when my papers are done with. It was awesome!
Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11Nyna dearest, I still need to comment on 4 too but am behind - am so sorry! I was so so happy to read you posted 5, I seriously need something nice SwaSan related to read today! I will comment late but will def do so! Love,
Shru xoxo
Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98Hi dear Nyna!!!!😊
Chapter 5 is so awesome!!👏
The bonding and the conversation between Swara and Ragini was so beautiful and sweet.😊 I think that the 'special friend' of Ragini is Laksh.😉
And the Swasan moments were so amazing.😳 Sanskar daydreaming about Swara. Awww! Finally he confessed that he loves Swara.😃 Hope that Swara also confess soon.😉
Plzz update the next part soon.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃
With love and lots of hugs!!!!🤗🤗
Aheli.
Originally posted by: KrishnabhisarikEeeks!!!! Omg omg omg😃😃😃 Res for now.. Will unres tomorrow morning😃
Unres!Yo! Lovely update Nyna🤗The part where Ragini had sworn she doesn't want another Marwari in her life, so natural, giving the examples she's had.. But but but, fate is pretty funny coz she falls fast and hard for a special Marwari😉.. I do hope he helps breaking her prejudices😕 The reasons why she is afraid to confide at first were so simple and real.. And also endearing.. Their past life has left them a bit scarred,no? Loved that line about Swara n Sanskar being her only family.. And her 'falling-in-love' story was sooo cute😆So nicely you have written about their bond.. Swara being shocked, then curious, then furious😛, skeptical, worried, and once she calms down... Right into 'full details gossip mode'😆😆The proposal... Haaye So direct n heartfelt... M glad there was no fluff n fuss.. Just simple n honest, thus, extremely romantic Loved it!!😃Love,Akshata😊
Originally posted by: sneharayAwesome update..
Ragini's love story is nice
Sanskaar confesses his feeling
Update soon
Waiting for next part
Originally posted by: lucky.mnynu🤗🤗
Sorry I am late😕One more delicious treat.😳. I wouldn't mind biting such yummy biscuits more often😉Yummy biscuits, eh🤗Lets start with my fav part . the confession or should I say confession cum proposal , whatever it is ,like always sanskaar takes my heart away❤️ ..I totally loved his seedhi baat no bakwaas andaaz 😳 and on that kiss.. ok It was not a proper kiss but it was😳Proposal - did you know that in the first draft I had actually included the line - "Will you marry me?" - that was the last line. I was not too sure so deleted it in the final edit. Guess the impact remained.😉It was a such beautifully done scene nynu ..It has got such a nice feel around it ..👏⭐️Swaragini bond in your ss is just so good to read after all that crap we were put across under the name of behna pyaar ..loved how swara's protective instincts kicked for ragini after hearing about laksh, typical sister 😆just like ragini was at time of swara sanskaar camerediereSisters bond - yes the serial ruined that bond completely. It actually makes you feel it is better not to have a sister🤢Ragini and lakshya.. their story was simple and cute and sanskaar and laksh are acquaintances...hmm well that leaves me a bit curios and how that might play a role in future proceedings..😲😲Lakshya and Ragini - cute story right? And how would Sanskaar and Lakshya acquaintance play in the future - will tell in the next two chaptersI love how this sweet treat is turning out to be more delicious with each update choclate, sugar honey , biscuit ..😳👏 Cant wait for the next one..Beware, Sweetheart, it could be a tad spicy or salty or...😈Love LoadsLucky
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