SwaSan SS: Sweet Deals (Completed) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Hey Nyna.. Please pm me your next update.. Coz busy babes.. You know y..

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nyna sweety...😊

Sweetest yummiest update...😉

 Sooo starting with Sansku leaving note..swara safely kept it n reread it n smiling...she was desperately waiting for him n he came... how they both become friends...sansku first move paid off...both became comfortable with each other company.. they talk.. attracted to each other...loved ur writing...nicely written...👏

Ragini part was good..she is worried for her sister.. she is careful that her sister does not suffer any heartbreak..😕.well enjoying alot...this SS is refreshing...😃

Waiting for next..update soon..😊

Talia

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Res.. You know my schedule Nyna dear.. Will read it asap and comment as well.But cant skip Res when i saw you have posted an new SS.. 

Unres..

Hi Nyna Dearest 

       I dont think i can apologize enough for such a delay except blame my current busy life as much as i can 😆.. While i felt real bad that i didnt read it for this long, it was such fun to read both the chapter together that i can hardly wait for the next one .. 😊.. You were an brilliant writer Nyna dear.👏  Words cant express how much i liked this SS so far❤️.. I love Coffee too.. 

😳😳😳 - And you love coffee too - we could have a coffee lovers club 😊

        

        I really want to write an detailed comment on the SS but i dont think i can do justice to it, somehow i feel writing about that SS will make it less than what it is due to my poor penman ship and i dont want that ... In short i am kind of worried i wont be able to give the credit it deserve if i decided to go in detail while commenting about it .. 

 You know i always say this to you that your comments describe my updates much better than my updates, that so true, your comments were always better than my updates and i dont feel i can write such a worthy comment for your SS ...So here i go you have been warned before hand 😆

And where in the whole world did you get this weird feeling that you have cannot write - I admire your writing and you admire mine😃 - Maybe we should also form a Mutual Admiration Society. And please do not embarrass me by saying that you cannot say anything worthy  - I simply love reading your updates and your comments

          

        Ragini and Swara relationship is really lovely and while you have hinted about the past ,about how a single incident changed their life forever , i am curious to know about it .. While Swara was working i was wondering why Ragini was not helping her sister ,only to find out later she works somewhere else 😆..  I am liking the Mrs Das character ..

The incident - coming up in Chapter 3 - and am glad that you liked Ragini and Swara's bond (the serial truly ruined the sister bond😉) 

Sanskar is  perfect in your SS dear😳, and i really love his small notes and how it lead to such a beautiful friendship between both of them. I loved that there first three visits where few days apart each time leading to them thinking about the notes and the other person all the time 😊.. Also i love that SwaSan bonded over time and formed a close friendship . So Sanskar family is pretty much the same, we got Dadi in Ragini and Swara life who else i wonder..  As i said i dont think word can express how much i loved this last two chapters and the way you are shaping up the characters..

 Sanskaar is perfect on his own - there is no way he can be otherwise😊 And yes his family is the same as the serial. Regarding Swara and Ragini - chapter 3 should answer those queries.

And i dont think i can try now in my sleep driven state . But do update soon as i cant seem to wait too read the next chapter .. 

 Ah! that explains why you felt you could not write  - you truly are sleep driven. Take rest and care. I am almost done with Chapter 3, will update.

 Love,

Nita 🤗

Dear readers and my lovely friends, I have updated Chapter 3 and am quite a bit apprehensive about it. I just hope it does live up to at least some of the expectations.

Love,

Nyna