A Second Chance! - Chapter 1, Pg 2 [24/04] - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
I always read stories on Arshi ..but prologue looks good..so i m gonna read this one.


PS-I watched few epis of Mjht so i know basic characters but not all ..Was dhruv a part of show too??
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46

I always read stories on Arshi ..but prologue looks good..so i m gonna read this one.


PS-I watched few epis of Mjht so i know basic characters but not all ..Was dhruv a part of show too??

Dhruv was Nupur's obsessive lover in the show, but Piya is my own fictional character. Thank you for reading πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Why they got married on the same day .they could have waited fr few days ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Okay and he is present here too..hmmm..


btw story is a SS or FF ?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46

Okay and he is present here too..hmmm..


btw story is a SS or FF ?

Most probably an SS... Mayank married Nupur the same day cuz he promised Piya that he would do anything she wants. It was that promise and the anguish of losing his love that he wasn't in a state of thinking anything else. Did I make sense? πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update , Bidushy :) you portrayed the feelings of Nupur and Mayank so well...:)
Waiting for the nxt update :) Thanks fr the PM dear πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous start. Nupur got married with mayank to fulfill her friend wishes. she has sacrificed her love for priya. interesting story. now wanna see how will they lead their life. very nice start. keep it up
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Posted: 8 years ago
I like that its fast paced, and also u write very well. 
Nupur - Mayank relationship dynamics are very different and interesting. Looking forward! πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful!
Pls add to pm list!