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A Second Chance! - Chapter 1, Pg 2 [24/04]

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:29pm | IP Logged

"She is no more!"

 

The doctor's words echoed in his ears. Tears brimmed in his eyes.

 

"It's not a time to joke, doc!" He muttered, unsure of what is happening around him and wondering if he's having a nightmare.

 

"I'm sorry, Mayank!" The doctor consolingly tapped on his shoulder and walked away.

 

Mayank numbly headed towards the window to glance at her once. She appeared lifeless, but he could imagine a serene smile on her face, as if she finally found peace from all her pain she was going through since the last few months. However, he could not prevent himself from being tearful. All the moments they had spend together in the past ten years flashed before his eyes.

 

Just then an 8-year-old girl held his hand. "Dad, where is mum?" she asked innocently, and frowned on noticing her father crying. "Dad, what's wrong?"

 

Mayank hugged his daughter and wailed miserably. "She left us, Aliya!"

 

Aliya understood that the day her mother discussed about last night has come. "Aliya, you will have to take care of your dad after I go. He will be very heartbroken, but you'll have to be strong." Her mother's words rang in her mind. She pulled her father near the seat and made him sit down. Wiping his tears off, she embraced him. "I am here, dad! I'll be always with you."

 

Mayank closed his eyes and silently shed tears. "Mayank, promise me that after I am gone, you'll read this letter, not before that." He remembered her words. Breaking the hug, he asked Aaliya to go outside and play, while he would be there shortly after meeting the doctor. Aaliya nodded and ran towards the exit.

 

**

 

Sitting on the bed in his home, Mayank numbly started reading the letter...

 

Dear Mayank,

I know you must be crying so much right now, but trust me, your tears are hurting me much more than all the pain I went through in the last few months. So stop crying first!

 

Mayank immediately wiped off his tears, and read further...

 

I know it is hard for you to live without me, but you'll have to for our Aaliya. You'll have to be both her mum and her dad. And when I'll see both of you happy, I'll be happy as well. Trust me on that!

 

Staring outside the window, Mayank saw Aaliya running and playing around. A small smile crept on his lips.

 

You smiled, right, seeing Aaliya playing around? Just keep that smile on your face for her and for me. And one thing... I told you once that you'll know my last wish at the right time. So the time is finally here, and keep in mind that you promised me to fulfill whatever I ask from you. Don't back off now, alright? Or else my soul will be restless.

 

"I'll do anything for you. Just ask once!" Mayank whispered, while his tears dried up on his stubble.

 

Marry my best friend Nupur. I am sure that she will keep you and Aaliya happy. I have asked her the same, and she agreed. Don't refuse please.

 

The letter fell off from Mayank's hands. He was motionless, and did not know what to say or how to react. He picked up the letter and continued reading...

 

I'll always love you no matter where I am, but since I am not with you anymore, I want you to get someone's love and be happy forever. Nupur is an amazing person, and had been with me through thick and thin since we were in school. She's my best friend, and I am sure she will love you a lot, even more than me. She will give our daughter the love of a mother. I can assure you that she won't let you and Aaliya feel my absence. Please give her a chance. Please, Mayank!

 

Yours,

Piya :)

 

"Mayank!" Nupur knocked at the door hesitantly. Mayank stared at her, and then at Aaliya. He brushed off his tears, and appeared as if he did not have any emotions left in him anymore. "Get ready! We will get married today." He walked away, leaving Nupur astonished at the sudden turn of events. She did not think that Mayank would be ready to marry her on the day he lost his love.

 

Nupur's phone rang, and looking at the screen, she gets tensed. "I told you not to contact me anymore," she determinedly exclaimed.

 

"You can't do this to me, Nupur. We loved each other! I am your boyfriend, god damn it!" Dhruv angrily stated.

 

Nupur's eyes shined with tears. "I am sorry for everything, Dhruv, but Piya meant the world to me. I can do anything to fulfill her wish. I am getting married to Mayank today. Forget me please." she disconnected the call, and silently cried.



Edited by _SilentSoul_ - 24 April 2016 at 8:27pm

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
Hello everyone,
Hope all are doing well. It's been ages! Big smile I started writing after four long years, and it really feels good to be back. By the way, I'm Bidzie. I used to read and write FFs a couple of years ago.

So, here's a prologue of my new story. No new concept for sure, but I will try my best to make it as unique as I can, so hope you will like it. I also hope that my writing skills did not deteriorate. LOL

Happy reading :)




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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
You write beautifully. The words and the aura was built up so perfectly. Didnt even realise when the part was over. Loved it absolutely and intrigued to read further!
Welcome back! Heart

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
welcome back 
wonderful start 

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
First of all , Welcome back :) 


Coming to the FF ... great start :) loved the prologue ...Would be interesting to see how these 2 ppl let go off their past to welcome their future together :) Plus its always great reading stories on Mayur :)


Do continue soon :)

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Beautiful start

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 2:58am | IP Logged
nice prologue

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Nice story concept.
though i never read any fiction based on mayank and nupur.
i always stuck on one thing that is arshi.
But i would love to read this fiction further.
because its my one of favorite jodi.

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