Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan


Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan
Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan

MANAN FF DESTINED LOVE STORY #2 last part pg 146 updated (Page 123)

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Important note

Dear friends
I'm using some real pictures of Basilica church of Goa. Other than that the story is totally a fiction. It has nothing to do with real life or real places.
If by chance I'm hurting someone's feeling, than I really want to apologize.
I didn't mean to hurt anyone's feelings. 


Part 23

It was the day of Sangeet, And they all were very excited that they will be on their own to perform not being cautious. No one will be there to judge them though they are THE best but still they want to be themselves. 

After lunch everyone left to their rooms to get ready for the event. Mr. Malhotra asked them to enjoy to the fullest but staying in the premises. 

Manik wanted to see Nandini and he was trying to sneak in her room but right at that moment his dad caught him. 
When Manik was slowly opening the door of her room Rohit pat on his shoulder. 
"Ahem ahem..." Rohit coughed. 
He straightens himself hiding his embarrassment. 
"Woh... dad... I'm just...umm.." he stutters with words. 
"Haha... I can see myself in you  right now... Main bhi aisa hi hua karta tha, don't worry..." he bend closer to his face and whispered. 
"I won't tell anyone..."
Manik hugged his dad on being a typical teasing father. 
"I love you dad...". Manik's eyes became watery. 

"You know I've seen a different side of you since last couple of weeks. And I really loved this side of yours. Because of you all,  I'm living the time of my life. Me and Nandini are very thankful to you..." a tear drop fell on his cheek despite of his struggle to stop it. 
"I love you son... your smile and your happiness matters to me so much... kaash I would have given you this before..." Rohit got emotional too. 
Manik diverts the topic noticing the box in his hands. 
"But Aap yahan, koi khaas kaam hai..." he asked. 
"I came to give this to Nandini. Actually I didn't gave anything to Nandini. I don't know all this rituals but I thought I should give her something from me..." he forwarded the box to show Manik what he brought. 
"Ok dad.. lets go give it to her..."
"Oh and Manik.." before Manik knocked on the door he called him. 
"Yes dad..." 
"The security people are all on their duty. They are watching and covering the house very strictly. You can enjoy the events without any tension..." Rohit assured him. 
"Thanks dad..." Manik was glad that everything was happening as it's supposed to be. 

Manik knock on the door. In few seconds Chachi opened the door. 
"Oh Manik bete... tum..." she was surprised to see him because they were just downstairs together. 
"Woh actually Chachi..." he hesitated and Manik's dad came in front. 
"Actually.. I came to see meet Nandini..." he said. " so I bring manik along..." 
"Aaiye na bhai Saab..." Chachi said and Manik took a breath of relief. 
"Thanks dad..." he whispered into his dad's ears when Chachi gave way to them. 
Amms was also there helping Nandini getting ready. As soon as Nandini saw Rohit she went  and hugged him. 

"I'm sorry I'm disturbing you people... I know you are getting ready, but I have something to give her..." he trace his hands on Nandini's head with affection. 

He pulled out a jewelry box and placed it on Nandini's hand. 
"I did not know the rituals, but I thought of giving you a gift... I hope you like it.." he said. 


Nandini took the box from his hands and opened it. Her mouth was wide opened in an awe. She covered it with her hands. It was a beautiful diamond set. 
"Dad this is beautiful. I loved it..." she hugged him again. Manik was enjoying the way Nandini and his dad building the bond between them. 
"God bless you my child... khush raho..." Rohit blessed both Manik and Nandini.  
"Ok kids... be ready and get down.. tab tak I'll check the arrangements..." saying this Rohit left the room. 

"Nandu I've done almost everything... I'll go get ready now... chaliye amma hum bhi ready ho jaate hai..." Chachi saw that Manik and Nandini want to spend some time together so she excused herself. But before closing the door she banged it with her bangles. 
Both Nandini and Manik startled and turned. 
"Jaldi aana... ziyada der mutt karna..." before she goes she winked at them and closed the door behind her. 

Nandini was dressed in midnight blue lehnga and a matching blouse and dupatta. It feels like the stars came down to enhance her beauty sticking on her clothes. Nandini saw that Manik was wearing almost same color kurta and white pajama to match with her. 



Manik turned to Nandini and was staring at her. His hard eyes taking her in. His face is showing so many emotions at a time. And the most revealed emotion was love. 
Nandini felt self conscious. She lifted her chin and met his gaze. Manik stepped closer to her 

He took her face in his hands and looked into her eyes for a long moment. He wanted to smash his lips into hers and kiss her hard and make her moan his name, but he didn't. He knows that if he starts anything than it's not going to stop. He couldn't control himself. 

But still he moved closer to her, letting her know that he is about to give her a kiss. He wanted her to pull herself away, but she didn't. 
She moved more closer to him willingly. His lips met hers. 

Her mouth was welcoming as always. Her lips were sweet tastes like strawberry because of her lipgloss. Her skin soft under his fingers. 
It was a slow kiss that Nandini moaned in his mouth causing him to grow so hard. 
But he ignored the urge to take her right there. 
His fingers roam on her bare back clutching her skin. 
She could feel his anxiousness through his hands which is not ready to leave her body. 
She broke the kiss before it take them any further. 
He looked at  her lips, they were pink and swollen and her face was looking damn beautiful. She bit her lower lip with anticipation, but he stopped her. 
"Hey, That's my job... don't ruin it.." he dabbed his thumb over her lips and said. 
"Let me touch you Nandini, please..." His pleas killed her and she couldn't stop him anymore. But she has to, otherwise they can't go down soon and it can create a scene. 

She looked at him and nodded. She pulled his face to her and kissed him gliding her fingers behind his neck. 
His hands is all over her body to explore every inch of her. His fingers digged into her waist and pulled her more closer. 
He left her lips and dipped on her neck nibbling and dropped slow and seductive kisses. 
Their intimate moment was broken by the knock on the door. 
"Nandu tum log jaldi ready ho kar neeche aa jao... hum sab wahin wait karenge..." it was Chachi who gave the information and went away. 
Manik rest his forehead with hers. He pulled her for a hug. She was so close to him that she could feel his tightness in between her legs. Every inch of her body was pressed against his. There was no space in between them. 

His face spread in a wide smile. 
"Yeah I know... your touches, your nearness just turned me on. I don't know how I'm gonna go out in this condition..." his voice was raw, he is hiding his face in her neck at the sensitive parts. 
Nandini tighten her grip and held him like that.  She want him to be normal before they go out. 
"Just one more day... only today and tonight then I'm all yours... I won't stop you...ever..." she said softly. 

She make him sit on the bed. 
"Thanks for making my wishes come true..." she said when he sat beside her. 
"Manik Ek baat kahun maanoge..." she asked taking his hands in hers. 
"Hamesha aise hi Mujhe pyaar karna... kabhi bhi mujhe apne se dur mutt karna..." she said very softly. 
"Nandini I will always be there with you...why are you feeling so insecure..." Manik asked looking at her. 
"I'm not insecure, I'm just saying, Ek baat dil mein aayi tou Maine keh diya..." she paused. 
"And... don't get mad... just hear me out ok... agar kabhi main tumse kuch der ke liye dur ho jaaun..." Manik covered her mouth with his palm. 

"Don't talk like that... don't ever talk about getting separated... tumse dur hone se Pehle main apni jaan de doonga..." 
"Hum kabhi bhi alag nahi honge... siwaay maut ke hume koi sl*g nahi kar sakta..."
Nandini smashed herself into his chest. 
"Per tum kabhi bhi kisi bhi haalath main himmat nahi haarna..." Nandini said hugging him tight. 
Manik pulled her with a jerk. 
"Nandini kyun itni depressing baatein kar rahi ho..." Manik thought he didn't even told her about Harshad's runaway. Why is she talking like this. 
"I don't know Bas... I'm skeptical I think... Ek saath itni khushiyon ki aadat nahi hai na... so maybe I'm just worried... kahin hamari khushiyon ko meri hi nazar na lag jaaye..." she said. 
Manik pulled her again to hide her in his arms. As if protecting her from the whole bad world. He hugged her tight. 
"Kuch nahi hoga... hum hamesha saath rahenge aur khush bhi rahenge... samjhi tum... and don't talk rubbish..." he warned her. 
"Ok baba... nahi karungi... calm down..." she could feel his heart beats faster and diverts the topic. 

"Acha Mujhe kuch aur kehna hai... and I promise it's not depressing..." 
He didn't say anything. 
"Manik..." she rest her head on his shoulder. 
"Meri Ek aur wish hai... Kya tum puri karoge..." she asked very innocently. 
"Bolo... agar mere bas mein hoga tou zaroor puri karunga.." he said giving a kiss on her hair. 

"I want to go to the famous church in Goa. I want to visit there before I take vows with you..." hearing her wish Manik stayed still in his place. 

He didn't want Nandini to think that he can't fulfill any of her wishes. That too this small one. But how...
'How am I gonna fulfill your wish Nandini, dad has strictly ordered me not to go out of the house, that no one should leave the premises of the villa. How will I explain you...' Manik thought with so much of resentment. 
"Manik Kya soch rahe ho..." she shook him by his shoulders. 
"Hmm...Kuch nahi..." he answered thoughtfully. 
"Ok I will let you know when we can go according to the situation..." he pressed her shoulders. 

Finally the bride and the groom arrived at the designated venue, which of course is at the back of the house. It was very simply decorated with the seasonal flowers and lights to enhance the scene. A small stage has been set for the bride and groom to be seated. 
The sound of the waves is giving natural music to the atmosphere. And the ocean is adding an extra element to the decorations. 


Manik and Nandini stepped down the deck to join others. As it was only a small family event with few friends involved, all are present there ready to rock n roll on the music. 

"Kya Manik, Ek din aur hai tu sabar nahi kar sakta na... 24/7 tujhe Nandini ke saath rehna hai, haina..." Mukti bombarded with complaints as soon as they entered. 
Manik felt embarrassed in front of all of them but he recovered and said..
"Mukti jab Teri shaadi hogi na... than i will ask you and Abhimanyu that if you both can stay away from each other..." hearing him Mukti turned red feeling the taste of her own medicine. 
Abhimanyu was standing right beside her so he too added something. 
"True that Manik. I totally agree with you. When we get married than I'm gonna take her away from you all for at least 6 months so that no one can bother us..." he put his arm on Mukti's shoulders and pulled her closer. 
"Kyun Mukti main sahi keh raha hoon na." Mukti bend her head down fidgeting with her fingers not to know what should she say. This is the first time it's happening to her that she is being shy.  And everyone got a chance to tease her. 

"Arey Cabir,look here... our very own Mukti... sharma rahi hai..." Manik called Cabir. 
Cabir came and joined the teasing team. 
"Oh ho ho... yeh Mukti ho hi nahi sakti... Mukti, where did you hide our friend... what did you do to her..." Cabir was annoying her more.
"Cabir chup kar..." Mukti's voice came out of her mouth as a whisper. 
"Dekha iske moohn mein tou zabaan bhi nahi hai... I'm pretty sure now...this is not our Mukti.' Cabir couldn't stop. 
"Bas karo Cabir..." it was Nandini who tried to stop Cabir. Because she can see that Mukti is being uncomfortable. As Abhimanyu and his father are both watching her and enjoying her uneasiness. 
Aliya came and diverted them. 
"Ok guys... let's start the program. So as it's a very casual and family event. One by one each couple will come in the middle,  sing and dance whatever they want..." she turned towards the older people and said. 
"Uncles and aunties you are also invited to dance and sing whatever you want."  

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(Try to hear the songs while reading to have the feel and lemme know if the sites are working or not)

The dresses for all. 






There's no stage or any audience but the only people were the family. So everyone got seated wherever they find places. 
It was not evening yet and the almost setting sun is making the ambience more lively and beautiful.

Suddenly the music starts and Dhruv dragged Aliya holding her hand and started clapping on the music. Till now Dhruv is the only one who didn't accepted his love to Aliya and she also didn't came forward with her feelings. 
Dhruv find this as an opportunity to go for it. 

Tenu main love karda  Bematlab karda 
Baahon mein aa soniye bas aaj raat ke liye
Saadi taan desi hai ada Sade te ho jaane de fida 

Baahon mein aa soniye bas aaj raat ke liye
Saadi taan desi hai adaa
Saade te hoja ni fida
Baahon mein aa soniye bas aaj raat ke liye

Aliya laughed and joined Dhruv with her chirpiness and her liveliness. She sang and dance too wth the steps balancing with Dhruv's. 

Subah hone na de saath khone na de
Ek doosre ko hum khone na 
Tu mera hero o o o o
Tu mera hero o o o o

Dhruv felt elected hearing Aliya. He smiled widely and pinched her cheeks showing lots of love through his eyes. 

Haay... mainu tu hot lagdi
Lakhaan da note lagdi
Mauqa mila hai abhi
Hoga naa phir yeh kabhi
Saanu tu dudge kar le ...Ae ae...
Maza too much kar le ...ae ae...

Holding her hands he make her take circles with him. 

Baahon mein aa soniye
Bas aaj raat ke liye
Subah hone na de
Saath khone na de
Ek doosre ko hum sone na de
Tu mera hero (O o o...)
Tu mera hero (O o o...)

 Aliya went closer to him and glide her hands around his neck and took steps on both her side. 

Baahon mein aa soniye
Bas aaj raat ke liye
Subah hone na de
Saath khone na de
Ek doosre ko hum sone na de
Tu mera hero (O o o...)
Tu mera hero (O o...)

After they finished. Mukti stands up and hooked her phone in the speakers. The surrounding suddenly jumped up with the fast beat music. The uncles and aunties popped open their eyes hearing it. But they smiled later as it's the time where everyone wants to enjoy. 

Mukti started swinging her hands and called Abhimanyu with her eyes. Abhimanyu whole heartedly came up in the middle of the floor and started swaying his hips. 

He was not use to this kind of music  or any kind of music, but he wants to enhance himself and give Mukti his company. 

Darwaaze ko kundi maaro
Koi na bach ke jaane paaye
DJ ko samjha do,
music ghalti se bhi ruk na jaaye
Thaka thaka jo feel kare wo jaake dou RedBull gatak le
Aur jisko dance nahi karna
Woh jaake apni bhains charaye

Abhimanyu didn't know how to dance but he is trying his level best to match Mukti's steps. 

Bas aaj ki raat hai
Kal se wohi siyaape hain
Jee bhar ke naach lo
Na ghar waale na maape hain
Sab pe apna raaz hai
Darne ki kya baat hai
Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai
(Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai)

Aliya Dhruv Cabir Rishab ran to the dance floor and started grooving all together.

Arey abhi toh party shuru hui hai..
Arey abhi toh party shuru hui hai..
Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai

The older clan was enjoying to the fullest seeing them having fun and having a blast. 

Cabir noticed the worried face of Manik and came to him. 
"Itna zabardast musical atmosphere bana hua hai and all are having fun aur Teri shakal per bara kyun baje hue hai..." he looked at him and said. 
"What happened, pareshaan kyun hai..." he asked. 
"Woh..." he looked around and moved away from everyone pulling Cabir's arm. 
"Nandini ki Ek wish hai... she wanted to go to the famous church of Goa..." Manik explained. Cabir looked at his face with a surprise. 

"I know we are not supposed to go outside this villa... but she asked with such innocence that I don't know what I should do... how should I fulfill her wish..." 
Cabir went into a deep thought. He already learnt about Harshad's disappearance in the morning when the security service agents came and took charge. 
"Kya soch raha hai..." Manik asked him seeing lost. 
"Church he jaana hai na koi night club ya bar tou nahi Jana..." Cabir said and shocked Manik. 
"Yaar we can't live in this fear and stop enjoying our lives... we will find something. Aur Waise bhi Nandini ki wish ho Aur Manik Malhotra poori na kare  aisa ho sakta hai Kya... Nahi naa... we will figure something out... now you enjoy the show..." no one but Cabir can only find the solutions to his problems. 
Manik took a breath of relief. 

"Ok bhai hume dance wance tou nahi aata Haan gaana ga sakte hai.. per tum log hansna nahi theek hai..." Chachi came on the floor and said. 
"Chachi three cheers for you from me... go ahead... hum sab enjoy karenge..." Manik showed a thumbs up to her. 
"Pakka na koi hansega tou nahi..." 
"Nooo..." every one said in sync. 
"Theek hai... Waise toh main punjabi hoon but Mumbai mein kaafi din rehna ke baad Maine yeh Marathi geet seekha hai.. socha tha Nandini ki shaadi mein gaaungi... so here it is..." Chachi said. 

Navrai majhi laadachi ladachi ga
Avad hila chandrachi chandrachi ga
Navrai majhi navsaachee navsaachee ga
Apsara jashi indrachi indrachi ga

Chachi tried to take circles waving her hands in the air rolling it. She didn't hesitated or shied away making all the slow Dancing steps..

Navrai chali sharmaati ghabraati woh
Piya ke ghar ithlaati balkhaati woh,
Surmai naina chalkaati chalkaati woh,
Piya ke ghar bharmaati, sakuchati woh!

Nandini knows some Marathi. She got off from her seat and watched Chachi. But Chachi came to her and dragged her in the middle. Everyone saw this and Manik thought that the decision of calling all Nandini's relatives was worth it at last. 

Chunar mein iski, Sitaare
Saare chamkeele chamkeele chamkeele
Kangan mein iske (ho) bahaare
Aaj hariyaale, hariyaale, hariyaale

Navrai maajhi laadachi laadachi ga
Avad hila chandrachi chandrachi ga
Navrai maajhi navsaachee navsaachee ga
Apsara jashi indrachi indrachi ga...ga...ga...ga!

 Navya and Mukti joined them too seeing the enthusiasm of Nandini and Chachi. 

Sunyoji isko, Rakhyo jatan se
O Badi naazuk hain naazuk hain naazuk
kali hai anmol... kali hai anmol...

Aaoji aao... thumkha lagaoon...
Zara behako ji behako ji behako
Khushiyon ke baaje dhol
Khushiyon ke baaje dhol

Chachi stopped dancing and hugged Nandini and her eyes started shedding tears. Nandini too got emotional. Aliya and Mukti joined in and it became a group hug. 

Aankhon mein iske (ho ho) ishaare (ho ho..)
Bade nakhreele nakhreele nakhreele
Sapno ke lakho (ho ho) nazaare (ho ho..)
Saare rangeele rangeele rangeele

 Cabir and Navya didn't perform yet because of Navya's condition. She couldn't take that much of strain on herself. Navya called Cabir and said something in his ears. Cabir took a chair and brought it in the middle of the place and make Navya sat on it. He knows Navya's and Nandini's bond towards each other. 

Cabir started the music. In college days Navya was also a good singer. She can still win several hearts if she can continue with her talent. But she preferred to extend family first. 
[Hoye hoye hoye
Hoye hoye hoye] - 3times

 Navya asked Mukti and Aliya to come and join her. Both Aliya and Mukti grabbed a chair and sat beside her. 

Saiyaan ched dewe,
Nanad chutki leve,
Sasural genda phool,
Saas gaari deve,
Dewar samjha leve,
Sasural genda phool,
Chora babul ka angana,
Bhaave deraa piya ka ho,
Saas gaari deve,
Dewar samjha leve,
Sasural genda phool,
Saiyaan hai vypaari,
Chale hain pardes,
Sooratiyaan niharu, jiyara bhaari howe,
Sasural genda phool...

Nandini smiled wide hearing them sing. She couldn't control herself from getting up and going to them. She went to Navya and gave a hug. She also gave a kiss on her forehead on her attempt to sing for her wedding. 

Chora babul ka angana,
Bhaave deraa piya ka ho,
Bushirt pahine, khayee ke bida paan,
Poore Raipur se alag hai,
Saiyaan ji ki shaan,
Sasural genda phool,
Saiyaan ched dewe,
Nanad chutki leve,
Sasural genda phool,
Saas gaari deve,
Dewarji samjha leve,
Sasural genda phool,
Chora babul ka angana,
Bhaave deraa piya ka ho..

Mukti and Aliya and Nandini got up and dance a little and also makes Navya to stand and grove a little. Navya didn't do more but she clapped her hands according to the beats. 

[Hoye hoye hoye
Hoye hoye hoye] - 
Ohh ohh oho..oho..
Oo ..hey hey...o hey...
[Hoye hoye hoye
Hoye hoye hoye] -

All the girls hugged each other. Everyone applauded.

"Yaar dulha Aur dulhan ko bhi tou saath Lao... let them enjoy each other. Yeh uski shaam tou hai..." Abhimanyu's dad said. 
"Yes of course... Manik and Nandini it's your turn now..." rohit Malhotra added too.
All of a sudden Nandini felt shy and her cheeks turned dark red in shade. 

Manik came towards her and asked her hand. She slide her fingers in his big palms smoothly. They walked in the middle and stand looking at each other. The music started. It's a very melodious music that can go deep into the hearts. 

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahoon
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahoon

He placed her left hand on his right shoulder and held her right hand in hand in left. His right hand glide automatically on her bare waist. That started to waltz in sync. The music was guiding them and their bodies were moving accordingly. 

Kisi zabaan mein bhi woh lafz hi nahi

Ki jin mein tum ho kya tumhein mein bata sakun

Main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen
Kaynaat mein nai hai kahin
Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon

Nandini's heart was racing ready to skip a few beats. The way he's their hips and their bodies were moving, it looks the most natural thing in the world.anik inched himself closer to her. Taking the opportunity Nandini forgot about the whole world and looped her arms around his neck. 

Shokhiyon mein dooobi yeh aadayein
Chehre se jhalki hui hain
Zulf ki ghani ghani ghatayein
Shaan se dhalki hui hain
Lehrata aachal hai jaise badal
Bhaahon mein bhari hai jaise chandani
Roop ki chandni 

Every word coming out of his mouth is drowned in his extreme love and his devotion. Even the family who were listening to them felt that. Nandini felt lucky yet again seeing him so engrossed in her. So in love with her. 

Main agar kahoon yeh dilkashi
Hai nahi kahin na hogi kabhi
Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon

Nandini couldn't stop herself by singing her heart out after hearing his melodious voice. 

Tum hue meherbaan
To hai yeh dastan
Abb tumhara mera ek hai karwaan
Tum jahan mein wahan

His both hands were resting on her waist as a natural action. He studied her for a long time. 

Main agar kahoon humsafar meri
Apsara ho tum ya koi pari
Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahoon
Kisi zabaan mein bhi woh lafz hi nahi
Ki jin mein tum ho kya tumhein mein bata sakun

He cupped her face in his hands and kissed her forehead. Everyone who were watching were awed by the dept of their love. The purity and the simplicity they share with each other. The bond which is so delicate but strong which they have in between them. 

Main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen
Kaynaat mein nai hai kahin
Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon


Manik hugged her after the song finished. They were so lost in each other that they forgot about the surroundings and where they are and that they are in the middle of their family and friends. Both of them came out of their dreamland when the heard the applause. 
Nandini moved away from Manik bending her head down. 

"Wow that was some romantic and very touching song you too..." Cabir said and Mukti came and hugged both of them. 
"I love you both... the love I see in your eyes for each other, I really salute you. You really are made for each other..." Mukti's eyes became moist. 
Abhimanyu came and hugged them both along with Mukti. 

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Now that the program was done they all have their food and went inside to take rest. Tomorrow is the big day for everyone. 

Cabir came to Manik's room. Manik was already waiting for him. 
"What happened...all the arrangements are done..." he asked. 
"Yeah... you Nandini be ready before sunrise..." Cabir whispered searching around to see if anybody is watching. 
"Thanks yaar... I wouldn't have done this without your help..." Manik hugged him tight. 
"Tu mera yaar hai, bhai hai  mera...tere liye nahi tou aur kiske liye itna bada risk lunga..." Cabir said. 
"Acha ab tum log aaraam karo subah time per ready ho jaana.." Cabir said and walked away from there. 

Manik sneaked into the girls room and took Nandini out from there. As everyone was tired so Mukti and Aliya was also sound asleep.

"Kya hua Manik... why are you sneaking again..it's just the matter of one more night... tum thoda..." Manik cut her off by placing his index finger on her lips. 

"Kitna Bolti ho tum..." he removed his finger. 
"Tomorrow before sunset we have to leave. We are going to Basilica church... early in the morning.." he said. 
"Whaaat..." Nandini screamed and jumped on him. Hugging him by his neck. Her feet Leaving the ground..
"Sshh..." he make her quiet. 
"It's our little secret...only you me and Cabir are going... so keep your voice low..." he said hugging her while still lifting her from the ground. 
"Why..." she got down to look into his eyes. 
"Because... I didn't tell anyone else.. and when our elders get to know that we are going out on our wedding day then they will make a fuss out of it.. so we will go and come back before they even wake up... samjhi..." he pinched her nose. 
"Ohhh like that..." she still is very excited hugged him. 

'I'm sorry Nandini... I'm lying to you... Kya karun, if I let anyone else know about this then dad will get to know... and right now I don't want to say or explain anything to anyone... bad let's hope that we will come back safely...' he thought. 

Early in the morning before 
sunrise Manik Nandini and Cabir sneaked out of the villa without making any noise. They were in their car but they didn't started it. 
They both dragged it out of the drive way so that no one can know. 

But they didn't notice that two pairs of eyes were watching them.  They reached the church in no time as it was no traffic at all. And it was a Sunday also. 


"Yaar this is indeed a very beautiful 
church... tum dono... go inside, pay your visits and come back quick. So that we can leave as soon as possible..." Cabir said keeping an eye on the surroundings. 
"Why Cabir... you are not coming..." Nandini asked. 
"I will definitely come,.. but later... we have to leave fast so you guys go ahead...and please be fast it's Sunday and people will start come for Sunday mass. " he said. 

"Thanks once again yaar..." Manik hugged him. 
Nandini don't understand what's going on between them... but it's doesn't look normal. And there's something fishy that they are hiding from her. 

'Ok koi nahi ... once I come back I will ask them...Manik can't hide anything from me...' she thought. 

" Nandini let's go..."Manik said.
She nodded and they both walked side by side inside the church. 
 When they stepped inside, they were in an awe. 
The interiors were more beautiful and elegant. It was a very old church.  The ambience is breathtakingly beautiful. 


Nandini walked in the front and taking a candle she light it up and came in the front. She bend down on her knee and joined her hands together in front. Bending her head down she started praying. 

Manik is mesmerized by her devotion towards God. She  have an unbelievable trust towards the God. 

He lift his face and looked around. It was empty. At this time of the day no one will come to the church. 
"He went to take a look around. Few steps away from Nandini. 
But still he is keeping an eye on her. For a few minutes he got lost in the interiors. But he straightens himself and looked back at Nandini. 

But she was not there. He thought that maybe she went to place the candle in the booth. He came running towards the candles stand but she was no where to be seen. 

"Nandiniii" he screamed going in circles. But she was not there. 
He was going berserk. He was running around inside the church searching for her like maniac.. Climbing the stairs skipping two steps at a time. 
"Nandiniii" he yelled again. 

"Maniiik.." he heard Cabir's voice echoing from the entrance of the church. 
"Manik...what happened..." Cabir called him. 
"Nandini..." ran down the stairs again skipping two steps at a time. 
"Nandini ko dekha hai..." he asked him holding his shoulders. 
"Woh Abhi Abhi mere saamne pray kar rahi thi..." he was at a verge of crying. 
"But very next second he disappeared Cabir... she is gone... pata nahi kahan gaayab ho gayi..." he said pulling his hair back. His senses were almost giving up. He couldn't keep up his calm anymore. His face gone pale drained out of blood. 

"Where can she be gone.. she was right here... oh God... oh God... no... nooo..." he screamed and sank on his knees with a thud covering his face with his palms. 
"Don't do this to me...  don't please... not now... we already have been through a lot... please..." he was feeling so helpless and also mad. He couldn't take enough care of her, he just wasn't careful enough to protect her. 

Cabir grabbed him forcefully by his shoulder and hugged him. 
"Manik... woh kahin nahi gayi hogi... yahin kahin hogi..." Cabir is making a very lame try to explain him when he too knows she couldn't be here because he was right outside and he didn't saw her come out or leave. 

"Tu Pehle apne aap ko sambhal Manik... aise kaise kahin jaayegi woh... just relax ok... calm down..." Cabir is trying hard to make him stand. 
"How can I calm down Cabir... how can I..." he yelled his lungs out. 
"When I knew that something like this was bound to happen, I still took the biggest risk of bringing her here... how do you think I should calm myself... I'm responsible for this irresponsibility... this happens because of me..." he stared crying in Cabir's arm. 

"Ok... this is not the time to break down... get up get up... we have to think where can she be..." Cabir patted his back. 
"What do you mean... you still asking where she can be... when you know who is after this" Manik was exhausted by the disappearance of Nandini.

"Yes... I know..." it was Cabir's turn to yell now. " you want me to give up and accept the defeat... no Manik I will not... and I won't let you give up too... not now at least... we have to find Nandini...before he took her too far from us...let us inform uncle Malhotra and commissioner uncle... before it's too late..." but before Cabir makes a call, Manik's phone started ringing. 
He wiped his face with his sleeve and picked up the phone. 

"Hello..." he said with a very heavy voice. 
"Manik Malhotra is crying... wow... that's a scene I want to watch..." the vicious  voice he can recognize anywhere in the world. 
"Harshaaad..." he screamed his lungs out..." where is she... agar usse Ek bhi kharosh aayi tou... I will rip you apart...do you understand... I will cut your body into pieces ...". Manik yelled in the phone that Harshad has to take the phone away from his ear. 

"Relax Manik relax... Abhi se itni energy waste kar raha hai..., save it for later, you will need it..." Harshad taunt him. 
"Right now she is sleeping peacefully in front of me...don't worry I won't hurt her until I feel that you are following my rules..." 

Manik stand up from his place and got two and two together. 
'But how did he reach here with so much of tight security...' he thought. 

"Ab meri baat dhyaan se sun..." Harshad's voice bring him back. 
"I know all over around you there's very tight security. But if you want to see Nandini alive than you have to follow my rules. Otherwise you know me, if I can shoot you directly at your heart than it will take me just a mere second to kill her..." 

"Harshaaad..." Manik screamed the h*ll out of his lungs. 
"Agar usse kuch bhi hua naa tou I will find you and I will give a dreadful death trust me..." Manik yelled again. 
Cabir was rubbing Manik back to make him relax. But it's not helping. 
"I know Cabir is right there with you... but I will call you in few hours and let you know the location, but only if you come alone and not informing about it to anyone not even to your so called security, than I will spare her... warns uska Ek haath aur Ek leg todne mein I don't have a problem..."

" if I can sneak into the security and take her than imagine how much I'm capable of doing... I'm not warning you I'm just telling you... think about what I said and wait for my call..." before Manik could react more he hang up the call. 
"Hello... hellooo... Harshad..." but there was no answer. 

"Aaahhh." Manik throws the phone with frustration and anger filled in him. 
"Manik... manik sambhaal apne aapko... Kya kaha usne..." Cabirs having a real hard time handling him. 
He kneeled down again on his knees and breakdown. 
"He said that I have to wait for his call and that I should not inform anyone... otherwise..." his voiced clogs in his throat. 
"Otherwise what..." Cabir screamed too. 
"He will kill her... he will freaking kill her damn it..." 
"Mazaakh hai Kya... aise kaise he will kill her..." Cabir said. 
"He can Cabir... I know he can... his hands will not shake doing it. I know that. Did you forgot about the Delhi performance... he can do it..." he said and covered his face and cried screaming helplessly. 

Cabir stayed with him like that. As they don't have any other choice. 
Then he remembered something. In the morning when the security guards are in and introduced themselves. They only meet Cabir Manik and his dad. 
They gave a tracking devices to every one which was attacked to their phone without letting anyone knows. 
Cabir took an extra device that looks like a small sticker. He liked the way it looks. So he asked an extra from them. 

"Manik Nandini ko phone kar..." Cabir said. 
Manik wiped his face with his sleeves and search for his phone. It was lying down away from him on the floor in two pieces. 
"Damn damn..." he rubbed and picked up the peices. 
He tried to fix it and luckily it was fixed. 
He called Nandini's phone. 
"It's ringing..." but the phone was ringing somewhere very close to them. They can hear the phone. 

They looked around and found the phone lying under the benches. 
"Oh no..." Cabir said. "Now we cannot figure out where she is..." Cabir traced his hand on his face with worry. Manik is not thinking properly. So he has to do something now. 

He already messaged the head of the security police about the disappearance of Nandini and they came towards them with some more cops with them. 
"What's going on..." the inspector general asked. 
Cabir narrated the whole scenario. And turning towards manik. 

"Manik please yaar... yeh waqt himmat harne ka nahi hai... please tell us what did Harshad said..." Cabir literally begged before him. 
Manik pulling himself together said the whole conversation. 
"You don't have to worry we will handle from here..."inspector said. 
"Nooo..." Manik interrupted the inspector. 
"I will go alone... no one is coming with me... warna... warna woh meri Nandini ko... nooo I'm going alone..." Manik was pacing with his hands on his face and steps not knowing where he's going. 

"Mr. Malhotra you have to trust us... we are dealing with a very dangerous person here... he can harm anyone... you have to let us take charge..." inspector tries to explain him. 
"I said noo...main akela jaaunga... main apni Nandini ko khud hi bacha ke laaunga... I don't want to take any risk this time..." he said. 
Nandini's words echoed in his ears.
""""Hamesha aise hi Mujhe pyaar karna... kabhi bhi mujhe apne se dur mutt karna..." 
"Manik tum kabhi bhi kisi bhi haalath main himmat nahi haarna...""""

"Ok ok Manik... if you want to go after her yourself than you have to relax and put yourself together... and don't worry about them I will handle them..." Cabir pointed towards the cops. 

Manik just nodded his head like a child trying very hard controlling his tears that's is already spilling on his cheeks. 

He was crying silently without any voice. He is devastated from inside but he has to be strong. For himself, for his love and most importantly for Nandini. He can't lose now not at this time. He has to prove that he can protect her. 

'Damn damn.. its hurting so much... it's not fair it's not at all fair... I'm not gonna let myself break... no..." he said himself consoling. Wiping off his tears which is running nonstop. 

Cabir went to the cops and said. 
"Inspector... right now Manik is not in his senses. I have an idea. Nandini doesn't have her phone or any other device on her. We have to let Manik go..." 
"What are you crazy... Mr Cabir.. we can't take that chance. Mr. Malhotra is too vulnerable right now.. what if his life will be in danger..." inspector disagree with Cabir. 
"Listen to me first. Than you can take the decision.." 
Cabir looked at them. 
"We have no idea where Harshad is taking her. We have to wait for his call. Till he calls, you can do your inquiry. We will wire Manik without letting him know and let him go after Harshad... so that we can follow the traces..." 
"And I know my friend... Nandini is his heartbeat his lifeline... when it comes to her safety he will never risk anything... he will be in his senses without any doubt... you can trust me on that..."

"only thing is we have to keep him away from Harshad because once he find out where Harshad took her and his whereabouts, he will not leave Harshad alive... he will kill him without any doubt..." Cabir give all the details. 
"And one more thing. Harshad is after something... until he gets that he will not harm Nandini... so we can buy this time to search around..." inspector got really impressed with Cabir's thinking skill. 
"I'm really impressed with your ability sir.. even in this situation you are thinking straight..." he said. 

"We are talking about my brother like friend here inspector... aur uski jaan Nandini mein atki hui hai... so I have to be sane in all the situations. I can't afford to lose my sanity at any time...". 
Inspector patted Cabir's back. 
"We will find her. Don't worry..." he said. 
"We sure will..." Cabir answers. 

End of part 23

I know it's shocking. 
But trust me it's gonna be more interesting and emotional. 

So how do you like it. 
Let me know. 

Because of your request and liking of this story I thought of increasing one more chapter in it. 

So it's gonna be two more chapters and then epilogue. 

So my lovely people start commenting. 

Thank you all so much for your support. 

Take care and stay blessed 
And always keep smiling. 

Love you all

Note:  I'm giving you few lines from next chapter. If I get good response than I will update the next chapter soon. 


" she trusted you... she has blind faith in you... and you... you let her down... usse agar kuch ho Gaya naa.. than I will never ever step into your house in my life...". He looked unbelievably. 

"Uske badle mein meri jaan le lo, but please usse theek kardo...main uske bina jee nahin paaunga... mar jaaunga... agar woh theek nahi hui toh... than I will take my life away... here right in front of you... do you understand..." he yelled. 

"You have to understand, I'm not giving you any other option... you have to give her back to me...". 

Edited by Redcrystal - 11 December 2016 at 7:33am

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Yayieee... I am first...TongueSmile

Hufff.. itna kuch ho gaya na...
In a single update...

Update was Mind blowing... Amazing ...as well as Shocking... and Emotional too..

U know first half is so entertaining and funny...
But second half (means last part...p) is shocking and emotional... mujhe bhi emotional kar diya yrr...

To start with the start...
Oh hooo... Romeo Manik wants to spend time with his Juliet... 

Oppsss... Manik 's dad caught him... hehe...

Manik baba was so embarrassed in front of his dad... too cute...

Loved Manik and his dad 's convo part... really his dad love him so much...

Aww... Manik 's dad and chachi helping him...

I really liked Mr.Malhotra and Nandini 's bond...
Then His dad gave her a gift...
That part was really amazing...

Hayeee... Manan moments... 
OMG... he just can't control around her...Wink
their moments were so romantic and lovely...
Loved their talks...and romance  ...Embarrassed Embarrassed

Then...Manan convo part...
That part was heart touching..
Nandini was so worried and nandini ki baat sunker Manik become so shattered...

Moving on..
Nandini 's wish...and how can Manik not full fill it...
But first he was in dilemma ...
Then he told cabir...
Cabira ne kya idea diya...
Bira was always their for  Manik  not matter what..
Indeed he is a best friend any one could have...

Then at sangeet venue ...
Mukti was teasing manik...
But poor mukti khud hi target ban gayi...hehe...
Mukti being shy and all...
Yeh tou kisi ne socha bhi nhi hoga... hahaLOL
Everyone was enjoying her state...

sangeet outfits were really very nice...
Venue and church pics were too good...

Songs were superb honey pot...
Good choice...
I really enjoyed each and every performance...

Especially chachi's and Manan performance were superb..
Well penned meri jaan...Smile

Then they reached church...
At that time both were so happy...but  little did they know ki unki khushi do pal ki thi...Cry

In the blink of an eye Nandini was gone...
U know I was shocked too...
How harshad sneaked in...AngryConfused
That devil... Huhhh...

U know I can't see Manik in that condition...  yrr I can't stop my tears...Cry Cry

U know when I was reading na the whole situation tou ky2 mei Nandini ke kidnap wala epi mei manik ki situation yaad aa gyi...Cry

But harshad beware...Angry
Don't  underestimate Manik Molhotra... He would do anything to see his girl save ... Anything meant any damn thing...

That lines in  the next update... Manik is saying to God... For sure...
Nandini Critical condition mei tou nhi hai na...

Yrr I am so worried and scare ab kya hoga... 
I don't know what to say or not... just fingers crossed...

Tell me one thing ... Meri sweet si honey jaise sweetie pie kab se dhamaka queen ban gayi... bolo...Big smile
Tell me...Wink

Anyways... I am excited as well as nervous  for next update...

 As always You penned each and every thing sooo beautifully honey...
U did an amazing and fabulous job...

Keep it up...
Keep smiling...
Stay blessed...
Lots and lots of love..

Edited by Cute_Inaya - 13 December 2016 at 8:25am

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Res ...THODA  jaldi HOGAYE

















Edited by Vandyandy - 11 December 2016 at 10:48am

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When will u  update completely 

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Amazing & beautiful update...
family time was superb... chachi n manik convo was superb... 
Haldi & mehendi ceremony was fab... 
manan's haldi part was amazing ... loved d way dey applied haldi to each other...Day Dreaming
mukti n abhi confession was awesome...
manik cares for nandu so much...manan moments were blissful...Day Dreaming
manik & his dad convo was fab... harshad is out Angry
exited for next part...

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Awesome update dear 
Too emotional 
Cont soon... 

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