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MANAN FF DESTINED LOVE STORY #2 last part pg 146 updated (Page 121)

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Posted: 17 October 2016 at 11:28am | IP Logged
loved it...amazing update...manik n mukti pranks ...just love it
n about readers n writers leaving forum..nthen i believe wattpad gives gud facilities thts y writers are moving there...u too r updating ur story there..moreover first s]writers from here updates ther...thts y readers also went..it not about where u met..its ur work tht we read...so i say its kkk..as u still hv readers here who r here fr ur stories n appreciating ur work...

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Posted: 17 October 2016 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Don't stop.. plz update soon..

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Posted: 17 October 2016 at 11:34am | IP Logged
THKS FOR THE PM CRYSTAL...

AWESOME ...AWESOME ... UPDATE ...

EXCELLENT ... 

SUPERB ...

STARTING WITH NEYONICA HARSHAD WHY DONT THEY DIE...
AND GO TO HELL...

KYA PROBLEM HAI NEYONICA KO APNE HI BETE SE ????? 
AUR UPARSE USSE JERK HARSHAD KI HELP LE RAHE HAI

THIS IS SO NOT DONE ...BEING IN JAIL HE DIDNT UNDERSTAND HIS PLACE IS THERE ONLY ...HUH...
USS NEYONICA KO BHI JAIL MAIN DAAL DENA CHAHEYE ...

AWWW... MANAN KITNE CUTE HAI YAAR ...
NEEDH MAIN BHI ROMANCE KARNA HOTA HAI MANIK KO ...
YEAH YEAH ...CAN UNDERSTAND AFTER ALL THE LONG 8YEARS NANDINI IS WITH HIM 
SO LOVINGLY HE ASKED FOR A KISS BEFORE LEAVING AND 
AND I LOVED KI NANDU NE NAKHRE NAHI KIYA AUR JALDISE USSE KISS DIYA ...HAYE ...
BUT MANIK ESSE HI CHODNE WALA THA PROPER KISS LEYE BAGIAR HOW CAN HE LEAVE ...

THANK GOD KISSI KO BHI PATA NAHI CHALA MANAN SAATH SOYE THE RAAT MAIN...HEHEHEHE

SUPERB NANDU KI PURI FAMILY BHI AAGAYE ...
SHE JUST HAD TO THINK AND MANIK FULFILLED HER WISH..
KYA PYAAR HAI ...TRULY AMAZING ...

GOSH MUKTI ... HIW CAN SHE SPIKE MANIK KI DRINK ...DIDNT SHE KNEW THAT HE CAN BECOME STUBORN 
LO ABH USKI ZEEDH MAAN NA NA PADEGA ...HEHEHEHEH

OHHH HO ...MR SMART MALHOTRA ...VERY SMART ...
JAAN BUCHKE ACT KAR RAHA AND THA ...AUR CABIR WAS ALSO INVOLVED WITH HIM ...NICE ...

CRYSTAL DONT LOOSE UR INTEREST YAAR ...
THE STORIES R GOING SO WELL .
IM ALWAYS THERE TO CHECK IF U HAVE GIVEN A PROMO OR UPDATE ... I KEEP WAITING FOR UR STORIES TO READ 
SO PLZ CONT HERE ONLY ...


















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Posted: 17 October 2016 at 11:59am | IP Logged
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Waiting for the next update

Edited by 912212221 - 17 October 2016 at 11:59am

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Posted: 17 October 2016 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Amazing update. Smart move by manik to be with nandini. And you know what even I am comfortable here to read stories not on wattpad. So do not stop your writing because of some people as you write really well. So please update the next part soon will be waiting for it.

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Posted: 17 October 2016 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
No no no don't stop!
We love ur story!

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Posted: 17 October 2016 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sneha_glamarous

thanks a ton for the pm...

The path was echoed by the sound of her heals and
disturbing the sleep of the other prisoners. They shift
there positions and swear under their breath and went
back to sleep...
. hushhh nyeonika can't do even one work properly... wherever she goes she creates problems for everyone... n here she went to central jail n there too disturbed sleep of prisoners...


"But I shot in his heart.." he was shocked with the
revelation.
... how he can die...when his life lies in nandini...?

He said some stuff in a whispering tone that only they can here. " abhi itna hi... tomorrow is my hearing just
arrange something for me and take me back to
Mumbai... I'll handle from there..." Harshad smirked
dangerously that even Nyonika was influenced by his
confidence.
... now what he is upto...??? omg he will come out... no nooo he shouldn't come out...!!! This is danger...!!! but whatever he will do he n she can't do anything to manan...when they weren't able to do so in last 8 years then what he will do in one more chance...


"Manik manik... get up..." Nandini shook him by his
shoulder which was completely on her chest with all
his weight on her. His leg was wrapped around her
waist that she couldn't move an inch.
...awww i love the way he was cuddling to her in sleep... but nandini body must have got stiffen due to his entire body weight on her...

Oh ho... you didn't let me sleep in the night too... let
me sleep.." he settled his face more into her neck and
said.
... really...??? last night toh she didn't did anything naughty also then how come she didn't let him sleep..??
sirf ek gaana gaane ko toh kha tha...ufff sona hai toh kinna drama karta hai...heheee

ek sharat...obviously he will demand of kiss only...!!! n chotu kiss se kam nahi chalega...haina manik??
omg their kiss was so hawttt... u described it so passionately...

"Kya yaar... apni wife ke saath time spend karne par bhi
paabandi hai... this is not fair.. I don't want to agree on
this condition..." his eyes were still closed and he was
mumbling in his sleepy position.
... he looks so cute when he cribs to spend time with nandini...n when he is in sleepy mode then he looks way more cuter...!!

"Waise... Nandini why do I get a feeling that you were
not next to us in the night..." as Aliya says her doubt
Mukti too added...
... omg girls almost caught her...but nandini is also not less than anyone... she lied it efficiently...

"No no please... don't do any such thing.. warna wo
tumhara dost hai na... wo chup nahi rahega... so bas
itna punishment kafi hai..." Nandini said suddenly.
... agar ab khuch aur punishment dene ki sochi bhi nah then volcano will erupt...


khuch khuch chal rha hai manik n cabir k beech mein...most probably a surprise for her...


right now I'm able to finish first part only...next part in next break after finishing off studies...





I'm back again...heheee

"Nandini two three days mein tumhari shaadi hai Aur
tum bilkul bhi dulhan Nahi lag rahi ho... jao kuch ache
se kapde pehno Aur apna huliya bhi sudharo..." navya
said studying her not so good clothes and a little
messy hair...HAHAAA...EVERY BRIDE HAS TO LOOK GOOD... IN EVERY FRAME SHE HAS TO LOOK JUST PERFECT...JUST LIKE SOME MOVIE IS SCREENING... SOKE UTHO TAB BHI U HAVE TO LOOK GOOD...NAVYA IS RIGHT IN HER PLACE...U SHOULD LOOK GOOD...BEAUTIFUL TOH U ARE BEFORE ONLY...

WOAH... MANAN ARE GETTING MARRIED THRICE WITHIN A YEAR...THAT IS SHO CUTE...

NANDINI WAS DEFINITELY MISSING HER CHACHA, CHACHI & HER LITTLE BROTHER RISHABH... N HERE SHE WAS MISSING THEM THERE HE BROUGHT THEM IN FRONT OF HER EYES...

"Chal main tujh se baat nahi kar rahi... tu ne tou hume
yaad bhi nahi kiya.. woh tou Manik ki wajah se hum yahan aaye hai... warna.. tu yeh shaadi bhi hamare baghair kar Leti hai na.." Chachi faked her anger and
blurted out ...AWWW CHACHIG AAP BHI NAH...APNE SONE MUNDE KI TAREEF KARNA NAHI BHULTI HO...


MANIK'S SURPRISE WAS JUST AWESOME... WHEN A MAN FULFILL YOUR SAID WISHES YOU BECOMES SO HAPPY N WHEN HE FULFILL YOUR'S UNSAID WISHES TOO THEN GIRL YOU ARE DAMMN LUCKY... MANIK IS EVERY GIRL'S DREAM...



"Mukti why are you avoiding me... I'm seriously
waiting for you... I really want to give us a chance... ab
tak you were busy in your life, but now, from where I
see you are settled and your friends are also moving on
in there lives... I want to start a life with you... please
think about it..." Abhimanyu all of a sudden get very
serious with his tone..
.. IT'S GOOD TO READ ABOUT PARALLEL STORY TRACK ALSO...WOULD LOVE TO SEE THEIR LOVE STORY ALSO...!!
NOW WHEN NANDINI HAS SEEN THE CHARM IN THE COUPLE DEFINITELY SHE GONNA HELP THEM OUT...



ohhh hooo so trio; mukti, aliya n dhruv are planning to spike manikz drink...hawww... if he would get drunk then it would be your loss only girls as he will demand to spend night with nandini. when he is in sane state then also he isnt able to live without her n finds out the way n now in drunk state...definitely he will spend the time with her n that too openly...I GUESS THIS IS GONNA BACKFIRE ON YOU ONLY...



But Manik tried to kiss her feeling her so close to him.. ...heheee what else can we expect from majnu manik.. nandini inni pass ho n woh chance pe dance i mean kiss na kare aisa ho hi ni sakta...

loved the way he was twirling her, shaking her face...making her dance with him., pulling n pinching her cheeks...awww...just loved it...

Mukti also danced swirling around Abhimanyu and and
shaking her bootie and getting excited. But to her
surprise even Abhimanyu joined her avoiding all the
ignorance from her.
... mukti tried to play with him but instead her he played along with her...heheee... hayeee cheek kiss bhi kar diya...




"Nothing
yaar... I think Manik is drunk.. and waise hi woh apne hosh mein mushkil se koi baat manta hai, ab pata nahi
how will I handle him..."
Nandini said getting more
worried...NOW NANDINI SAID CORRECTLY... HE IN SANE STATE ONLY DON'T AGREE WITH HER LOGICS N INSANE STATE TOH DEFINITELY SHE IS GONNA HAVE HARD TIME...


"Aaj bhi tum mere saath sleep karogi naa..."
... AWWW..HE MUST BE LOOKING SHO CUTE...


"Sshh... it's our little secret... Manik mimicked just like Nandini.

"Acha Hume nahi bataoge..." Mukti insist to know...

"bata doon..."Manik pulled Nandini to him and asked. Nandini said no glaring with her eyes.

"Nooo... warna Nandini naraaz ho jaayegi..." he puts his finger on his lips again shooing himself.

Everyone giggles on his behavior. He
is looking exactly like a cute kid...
... this was just awwwdorable... specially the line when he puts his finger on his lips again shooing himself...



"What's so funny Navya, tumne joke maara, Mujhe bhi sunao..." Manik asked getting excited
... hayeee..main mari jawa iss munde pe...


As soon as Manik
heard he grabbed Nandini's arm and hold her tightly.
Like he was not letting her go.
..HE WAA ACTUALLY LOOKING LIKE A BABY WHO DOESN'T WANNA LEAVE HER MOMMY WHO IS SENDING HIM TO SCHOOL...I JUST CAN'T GET OVER HIS CUTENESS...


CABIR CAME TO KNOW ABOUT THEIR PRANK...N HE EXPLAINED MUKTI IN SO VERY CALM WAY N SHE AGREED TOO... N NOW I THINK MANIK N CABIR KNEW BEFORE ONLY AND ARE PRETENDING TO BE DRUNK SO THAT HE CAN SPEND TIME WITH HER...LET'S SEE WHETHER I'M RIGHT OR NOT...?



seems like now every couple would be sorted out... This night seems to be lucky not only for manan but also for rest of the couples...CABIR you are smart boy...you took the initiative to sort out it their problems... how sweet of you...!!



"What... everything is fair in love and war... and I
cannot just let you sleep in a separate room away from
me... samjhi tum..." he smirked
.. SO manik knew it...n was doing drama...hawww..naughty boy... always finds out the way...n cabir also knew it...these two are just superb...



"Nandini tum naraaz tou nahi ho naa..." he asked
playing with her hair...
HOW ONE CAN GET ANGRY FROM SUCH A CUTE HUSBAND WHO TAKES SO MUCH EFFORT TO BE WITH HIS WIFE... WHO MAKES HER FEEL SO LUCKY N GIVES SO MUCH IMPORTANCE TO HER...!!HAAN TELL TELL??


IT WAS REALLY VERY GOOD CHAPTER... N STRESS BUSTER IN BETWEEN THE EXAMS..

YOU JUST MADE MY NIGHT...NOW I CAN SLEEPWELL...

N YEAH PLEASE I REQUEST YOU AGAIN DON'T LOSE INTERESTS IN WRITING I DESPERATELY WAITS FOR YOUR STORY TO GET UPDATED...N KEEP ON CHECKING ON N OFF TO SEE WHETHER YOU UPDATED OR NOT...

PLEASE PLAESE DO CONTINUE...!!




Edited by sneha_glamarous - 17 October 2016 at 1:31pm

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Posted: 17 October 2016 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
I like the way Manik speak to Nandhini about sleeping with her when he act to drunk
I found so cute their conversation
Waiting for nxt update
Hope Neonika n Harshad won't get success I their nxt plan

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