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Abhigya ss:the revenge of the daughter

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Hi guys,this is my first ever ss.I am not an active member but I love to write stories so I hope all of u love this story too.
         "I will be back for my revenge" those were the last words said by pragya arora before her parents died in front her eyes when she was seven.Now it is time to take her revenge with the arrogant,richest and hottest billionaire in the world Abhishek Prem Mehra.Will she succeed in her mission or and up  falling in the love trap??

Pls give your review on this whether should I continue it or not.pls do give your comments.I will update chapter 1 tomorrow sorry for the bad languageEmbarrassed 

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 8:31am | IP Logged
Of course u should continue
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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Pls pls pls do continue

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Waiting for your upcoming chapters
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Chapter 1
      
        My family and I were having dinner together.we were having so much fun.I was laughing so hard that I dint know it would be the last time I will laugh.suddenly there was a kid noise.My dad told me to go in my room.I followed my dad's instructions.I was waiting for my dad to return when.I heard my dad pleads
   
  Please please just give me some time,I promise I.Will return all the money.
But his pleads weren't heard and the beast shot my mom and dad and left the house leaving me alone.I quickly ran out and hugged my mom and dad while they were breathing their last breath.I ran around asking for help but no one volunteer to.

       No mum,dad u cant leave me.please come back.nooo
Suddenly I jerked awake.I was panting for breath and sobbing silently.this incident always hunts me in my dreams.My life had turn dark.I have no more happiness in my life.My parents were very thing for me but he stole them from.me.after calming myself I went get ready as it was already early morning

   " Finally you are awake"said bulbul my roomie.She has always been there with me.She was the one who stood by my side and have me courage to face life.without her I would be nothing

 I quickly ate my breakfast as I had a job interview today morning

     "Bye pragya,all the best"said bulbul
      
      "Thanks ,see you later"I smiled at her and replied

I quickly started the engine of my beetle.it was the only thing reminded me of my num and dad.I was deeply lost in my thoughts that I dint see a car coming and it crashed in to me thankfully I dint have serious Injuries.I came out stormed to the car which crashed me but what I saw shocked me to core.I guess life have different plans for me

Sorry guys for any grammatical errors.hope u like it



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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Hi Riana,

Chapter 1 - Interesting start Smile Eager to know how the story will proceed.


Edited by nive_kb - 21 April 2016 at 8:36am
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Posted: 05 September 2016 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Interesting start. Loved it.
Continue soon please.
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Interesting concept dear...gonna read your new story! Congrats for your first story !

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