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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 4:31am | IP Logged
You write so well!!!!!  I could feel every single word and emotion written. Amazing! 

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Amazing OS.. I'm speechless after reading, absolutely loved how you have described the contrasting lives of Sonakshi and Dev and her feelings for him were also beautifully described by you.. Even though words were subtle you could just make out the same torment Dev was going through as Sonakshi.. 
Lovely writing, wish you'd continue this one and let us know what happens after the kiss and through the kiss and Dev's thoughts before and after the kiss.. Yikes, greedy me.. But please really consider continuing this one it'll be a great story.. 

It's a good thing that you got this idea off your chest, else we wouldn't get to read something so awesome.. 

Continue this if you can (please do continue it).. Write another one soon and continue writing it.. 

Love, 
Kashmi 

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Awesome os...beautifully written... Clap
pls continue this... Smile
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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Awesome.
Really gripping OS.
Loved it Smile
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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Samee16

You write so well!!!!!  I could feel every single word and emotion written. Amazing! 

Thank you. It was after so long that I felt like writing something. Glad you liked it.

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Autumn_Hue

Amazing OS.. I'm speechless after reading, absolutely loved how you have described the contrasting lives of Sonakshi and Dev and her feelings for him were also beautifully described by you.. Even though words were subtle you could just make out the same torment Dev was going through as Sonakshi.. 
Lovely writing, wish you'd continue this one and let us know what happens after the kiss and through the kiss and Dev's thoughts before and after the kiss.. Yikes, greedy me.. But please really consider continuing this one it'll be a great story.. 

It's a good thing that you got this idea off your chest, else we wouldn't get to read something so awesome.. 

Continue this if you can (please do continue it).. Write another one soon and continue writing it.. 

Love, 
Kashmi 

Hi Kashmi.. Thanks for so much praise. This story has so much potential and I sincerely hope it does not get lost between Mami and Khatri. Dev and Sonakshi's story cannot be childish/ filmy. Unless their emotions are tangled and passion is involved, I cannot see Dev commit. He is hard nut to crack. Let me see if I can get into his head. I am very bad with full fanfiction (no discipline) but OS I think I can manage it.

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by INSHRA4U

Awesome os...beautifully written... Clap
pls continue this... Smile

Thanks a lot. I'll try.

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