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Arnav Khushi SS: She will be loved [Complete]

whimsical Senior Member

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 12:14am | IP Logged


Part 1 - In the next post 

Part 9


(Send me a buddy request if you would like to receive PMs whenever I update the series. I have written out quite a few parts already, and I plan to post an update once every 2-3 days if I get a good response Big smile)

Edited by whimsical - 05 January 2017 at 12:27am

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whimsical Senior Member

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 12:15am | IP Logged

                                                        Part 1 

Khushi eyed the silvery liquid swirling in the small shot glass, with mild interest. As though there was anything that could capture her interest anymore. 


"Tequila," she had ordered smoothly, like a pro, quite liking the way the word rolled over her tongue. 


It was mostly the sound of the word that had made her single out tequila, rather than the other alcoholic drinks. She had a definite penchant for words that sounded interesting. 


Smirnoff was next, whatever that was. Or vodka, pronounced the way Russians would say it. 


Or better still - a vodka martini, shaken not stirred, a la James Bond. 


Khushi smiled mirthlessly at the thought.


"Cheers," she muttered to herself, before she gulped down the drink. 


The peppery taste burned through her throat, making her cough and splutter, and making her eyes water. She took off her thick spectacles and dried the corners of her eyes. 

As unpleasant as it was, however, she welcomed the sensation. The bittersweet, slightly woody, aftertaste. The tingling warmth. The feeling that she was a different person. 


She wanted to be a different person. 


You know, the kind who dumped others. Not the one who got dumped. 


She looked up at the bartender, and found an amused smile playing on his lips. A knowing smirk. Condescension, surely. What a jerk!


Her nostrils flared.


"What?" she spat irritably, feeling like a different person once again. 


Not the kind who was overly polite and was only able to shout at people in her head. The powerful kind who could be rude to people and not even feel bad about it.


"First time?" Jerk bartender asked. 


It was more of a remark than a question. She almost lashed out at him again, but she felt too drained. 


Lately, it was all she had been feeling. Exhausted from crying herself to sleep every night, from feeling worthless every day. Just drained.


She ignored him and turned to the bartender next to him, a blonde girl who looked bored out of her mind. 


"Vodka martini, stirred, not shaken," she ordered.


"Surely you mean shaken, not stirred," Jerk bartender offered, uninvited, having seen through her bluff. 


He was right, she realised. She had managed to muddle up her the dialogue from James Bond, even after mentally practising it thrice.  


"N-no, I meant stirred," Khushi insisted, her words deliberate and slow as though she were talking to a dimwitted child. 


Whatever was his problem anyway?


"Sure," he said smoothly, indicating to the blonde bartender that he would take the order.


A few moments later, a triangular cup appeared on the table before her, adorned with a swirl of lemon rind and containing a blackish liquid.


It tasted like Coke, mixed with what might have been cherry syrup.


"This is Coke, right?" she asked the bartender after a few sips. 


"Haven't you had vodka martini before?" he asked by way of reply, his words dripping with sarcasm.


She imagined herself emptying the entire contents of the glass on his head.


"I know that this is not what I ordered. Do you think I am an idiot?"


"Kind of," he replied shamelessly, "Why else would you be moping around over some guy?"

"Wh-what?" she stuttered, taken off guard. 

"I heard you over the phone earlier, telling some Payal, whoever that was, that you were not depressed over some guy dumping you and that you were having a great time at a bar."

He did not look even remotely abashed. The small smile playing on his lips was clearly one of amusement. 

"How dare you eavesdrop on my conversation?" she hissed.

"You lied, didn't you? Or is this what you call having a great time?"

"It would be, if you were not so utterly incompetent at your job and getting me what I ordered."

"You really think alcohol is what you need? Because I don't think so," he said. His tone was matter-of-factly, but he was looking at her intently... in a way that made him seem oddly familiar, as though she knew him from somewhere.

She brushed away the thought.


He was right, in any case. 


The nerve. 


"What gives you the authority to decide for me?" she said.


"I've been here long enough to know that alcohol is not a cure for sadness."


He looked sincere, for once, and she smiled slightly, in spite of herself, "If you did this to all your customers, you'd be one broke bartender. Okay so tell me, what is the cure?"


"Friendship," he said, extending his hand out to her. 


The word stung, like a taunt. 


Like so many other things, it reminded her of him.


I don't know what I'd do without you.

You know me so well.

You are, like, my best friend.

You are everything.

I love you yaar.



Part 2

Edited by whimsical - 21 April 2016 at 3:59am

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anjs IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 1:33am | IP Logged
interesting...i hope the 'he' in question is not ASR...i dont mind the bar-tender being Arnav though...never read him as a bar-tender before...

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sirimiri IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Loved the first part.
Khushi is heart broken.
Who broke her heart?
And why?
Hope to get the answers in the next update.
Continue soon.

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kowshira9 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Intresting,who isthis he

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lechuarshi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Tootta dil...

Who is HE??
And who is that bartender??
So many will wait for story to unfold.. Wink

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Richelle Goldie

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:39am | IP Logged
Interesting!!Loved it!

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Downhill IF-Addictz

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 5:24am | IP Logged
simply superb
loved it,

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