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Dark FF: The Withered Angel|Part 7|12/11 (Page 67)

PremPBSB IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 July 2017 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Interesting teaser...
Arnav determind to know her past...
Waiting ...continue soon...
Thank u for pm & update

coolhi1988 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 22 July 2017 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
Turned curiosity at peak
Wil Arnav get his answers
Update soon
Thanks 4 pm
sonia1096 Goldie

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Posted: 27 July 2017 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Nice teaser
Pdrover IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 July 2017 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
Curious to see Arnav's reaction after finding out her past
Good teaser
sudhareddy IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 July 2017 at 7:15am | IP Logged
I read all parts of this story in one go. "The Withered Angel" is an apt title to the story..
My salute to the original brave lady who gone through all this and got a happy ending..
I am saluting you because it is quiet a strong and bold topic to write on...

Prologue - It's heart wrenching... I got tears reading her past... she has endured so much in such a young age

Part 1 - Poor Khushi is in much pain... You have brilliantly penned Khushi's inner turmoil... No one is there with her in time of need.

Part 2 - Loved Arnav's dairy content... Aww.. he was so smitten by Khushi... glad we got to know what he is thinking about Khushi and he is not lusting her.
Khushi thinks Arnav lusts her... when one have been betrayed by everyone all through her life, it's very hard to believe anyone now... Her pain is like a heart beat that is always with her and that is why she is not able to sleep or rest... She is letting out her pain in the designs she is designing which is proving her excellence in her field

Part 3 - Loved how you penned ...  On one side growing attraction in Arnav towards Khushi and other side the way Khushi is trying herself to separate her work from how and what she feelsClap
Arnav is so impressed with Khushi's confidence and her talent in designing... So both will be working together for show stoppers dress and the way Arnav thought about Khushi about her nonchalance behviour when he told her about them working on show stopper dressTongue

Part 4 -Loved the way you penned Khushi's thoughts while she seeing herself in the mirror
Loved how Khushi stood stroong infront of Varun... I hated Varun words to Khushi in the end but loved the way Khusho showed her martial arts talent in her shakehand to VarunClap

Part 5 - I really felt bad for Arnav the way Khushi talked to Arnav because of her anger on Varun ( I know you will say it is because of what Khushi gone through all her life and the men she met through out her life ... and I also strongly agree with you but when it comes to Arnav my mind gone blankLOL)  ... but loved how Arnav didn't force her to reply and respected her choice of not to answer him
It's very nice to see Arnav is all professional with Khushi... He fully appreciated her ideas and loved her happiness as she achieved her first success...

Part 6- Khushi tried her creation on Arnav's request in absence of the model... Arnav led by his attraction and passion towards Khushi gone close to her and Khushi defending herself is justified
Poor Khushi's daughter birthday... I got tears reading about her giving birth to her daughter alone... I wonder where are her daughters?  Didn't she met them after giving birth to them
...Poor Khushi missed 12 years of her daughter growing time(I guess elder one is 12)

Sneak Peek of part 7 :-

What an teaserBig smile Arnav's POV
Glad Arnav is thinking from Khushi's side and the reason for her behaviour  and he even asked Aman for Khushi's background check
Eagerly waiting and Can't wait to read the update

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Linsie IF-Addictz

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Posted: 07 August 2017 at 7:42am | IP Logged
nice teaser...
time for arnav to digg her past
anaswara93 Goldie

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Posted: 13 August 2017 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Interesting Teaser

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