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*New* AsYa TS : The Ties Of Heartbeatsl completed l Last part pg13 (Page 13)

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Posted: 01 May 2016 at 11:12am | IP Logged
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Posted: 01 May 2016 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Riddhu Hug
So finally almost ek saal Baad m here to unres EmbarrassedLOL
But better late then never { I know it's very very late Star}
But you know partly m late coz tu toh apni team wali h toh I knew u won't mind if I make others happy first. But I also know that everyone has a limit of being patient and i truly m sorry coz I know u were waiting fr me on this particular one coz it is my  bday gift n I like an idiot is making an entry now Ouch
But ki kara jb busy Rahi TB toh u know n free home Bhi I hv so many pending stuffs ki bs LOL 
And Mene lazy bum wali adat Bhi aj kl seekh li h SleepyLOL so m in a mess but still Abhi I can't see u wait more so here I am Nd with my akhiyo ka waar I apologise for holding this TS at the back fr so long 



And ryt now I m missing u on this forum so much Ouch
I mean seriously ldkiii !! Angry after reading this like 
There could hv been stories going on written by u n ppl going crazy begging u fr updates on this forum...you should come and re read this TS ur self first n know that how amazingly u write. I don't know why u dheela pading or thinking ki writing wagairah B u se naa Hobe.bilkul Hobe ! Multiple times Hobe ,( Meera style) 
I just wish to see you on this forum with more write-ups Big smile
Coz u do wonders why u write Nd realize this AngryLOL



Coming to the update I have this habit of starting frm the end .
And in the end I was in tears.it was like an amazing end jaha pyar ki jeet hui and silly n rashid came as farishtey in asya ki.life Day Dreaming aur asad addressed them as parents hayeee...some bonds are just made to happen 
The song oo khuda omg Kya feel ara h yr
How could you even write that!! (Me khud itna Sundar na likh baati yr) 
Such intense...emotional...action ...saddening scenes jo like h Allah sooo beautiful.
Tremendous effort seriously ( aake padh ye kinda accha u wroteAngry
U hv a way with words yr riddhu I mean everything that u write is always beautiful chahe fir wo sad updates hi kyu naa ho [ HOTA H WOH BEAUTIFUL ... Now dnt gimme that shit ki Mai Markham maring...kyuki m known in this forum to speak my heart so m just saying n u urself know ki Kya mehnat lgi hogi ye likhne me n kesa approach rahahoga so just accept and let me appreciate ] 

But I want to do one thing ! Jitni duniya bhr ki gaaliyaan Hoti h sb directed at Farhan Nd gaffur and all those men jo ek Akeli ldki ko mil krke maar re the...when she was weak n taking advantage of her...disgusting how can a father witness his own daughter being hit by other man Angry
It drained me Nd I m just imagining how did u write this yr...that violence at home n zoya 
Being beaten fr meeting asad...that made me cry n brought a feeling of helplessness yr I dnt know shayad I was too much into it while reading or this was indeed so captivating in a manner ki esa lgta h Aap wahaaa ho...but Kuch kr nh paare ho Nd such harsh realities of life pta nh India m kaha kaha practice Hoti hongi . It's all heartbreaking.

But when they runs away poora mangalpuri essence aata h Smile
And it is just like a Barbie movies 
Prince high standard  ka n princess in love n family conditions n then they together make it thru Big smile

Teko ek Badi wali Huggies n kissy fr this brilliantly penned update Hug

And m unable to post shin Chan gifs to irk u Confused
That is kinda spoiling ur jhallofy ka mood
Also I typed this review and WHY WHY DID I ACTUALLY REFRESHED THE PG CryCry
San jo likha did gaya Nd then I tried writing again Pr Mann nh hua gussa ara tha khud Pr fr not copying the matter kyuki wo Wala comment zada accha I wrote
Still in between my Mumma k taunts I tried to post as original one as I can 
Lastly I am planning to reblog this entire TS on my blog (only to show off how amazing gifts I get on my bday LOL
Love you riddhu fr such an amazing different n ur first attempt at writing such successfully!! 
Mwuaaah Heart 






Edited by suearmaniac - 01 April 2017 at 9:43am

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Posted: 02 May 2016 at 6:41am | IP Logged
It was Amazing Dear ...!!!
So Heart Touching ... Full Of Emotions ...!!!
And A Beautiful Ending ...!!!
Very Very Well Written ...!!!
Loved It ...!!!
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Amazing
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Posted: 02 May 2016 at 8:04am | IP Logged
This was amazing dear
Loved it to the core
Was extremely heart touching
How they both stood up fro their love and finally their love won against all odds
And the last part, made me smile to no end
They named their daughter ahaana
Reminded me of their first meeting
It was seriously a treat to read this flawless work
Please do write more on asya Smile
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Posted: 02 May 2016 at 8:23am | IP Logged
It was Amazing  ...
So Heart Touching and Warming part ... rula diya mujhe
Very Very Well Written ...
Loved It ...

Full Of Emotions ...
And A Beautiful Ending ... perfect.

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Posted: 02 May 2016 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Emotional..
Heart wrenching..
Poor asya..
Yes these things happens in some places...
Feeling bad for them..u really done Justice..
Thank u

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