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MaNanTS: Man Mayal! Last Chap/PG28/27th-April-15/PmsLater (Page 40)

shoana Goldie

Joined: 22 May 2015
Posts: 1451

Posted: 27 April 2016 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
this was last updateShocked
only two shotsDisapprove

update was awesome
i rally wished that cabir should punch manik...and you granted my wish Big smile
manik rally needed some buddhi...which cabir gave him through punchesWink
finally manik's mind came on it's place
bua also helped cabir
nandini's outburst was very much required
when his father asked him to leave her...he felt the importance of her in his lifeSmile
mehendi scene was too cute...
and the way manik was acting...ji kahiyeLOL
and when he said "haq hai aapka" hayee...Day Dreaming
manik liked her mehendi
and aryamannAngry
but somewhere he too acted as cupid in bringing manan back
but how dare he touch herAngry
manik should have kiled him..
loved the ending

pls try give an epilogue...pretty pleasee..

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mananluvpani Groupbie

Joined: 10 December 2015
Posts: 173

Posted: 28 April 2016 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Superbbb concept...

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parimala94 Senior Member

Joined: 10 August 2015
Posts: 943

Posted: 28 April 2016 at 9:13am | IP Logged
nica story it was...Day Dreaming

kishubedi IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3422

Posted: 28 April 2016 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
Thanks for updating
It was beautiful
Loved how cabir supported Nandu n gave manik piece of his mind
N glad manik also realized it and at the end everything got fine
Loved it it was a beautiful story
N loved this kinda Urdu/ Punjabi language touch
That was awesome

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aahanaK Senior Member

Joined: 24 May 2015
Posts: 354

Posted: 29 April 2016 at 6:34am | IP Logged
awesome ts 
it was beautiful
the pain,the guilt,the love,the loging
everything was perfect
cabir ne ekdum sahi kiya 
manik ki pitaai krke

thnks for pm

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archu_asok Goldie

Joined: 02 November 2015
Posts: 2350

Posted: 30 April 2016 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Awesome update. Manbir's convo was rocking. Cabir rocked. Manan's moments were well penned. Way nandini treated Manik's wounds and nandini's tears were well penned. Manan's confrontation was well penned. Hats off. Nandini's words were well penned. U nailed it. Wow manik realised his love for nandini. Mehandi part was amazing. Manik's teasing session was fabulous. Wow manik saved nandini.manan are together. Lovely ending. Thanks for pm.
Keep smiling
Stay blessedSmile
Swift007 Groupbie

Joined: 15 February 2016
Posts: 92

Posted: 30 April 2016 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Every bit of it was penned so nicely
Manbir's converstion
Manan room moments
Their stammering while talking to each other
Manik' realization
Mehandi scene
Then Manik saving Nandini
Declaring her as her wife infront of everyone
U nailed it ...
Happy ending
Thankxx for PM
God Bless YouLOL

MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 30 April 2016 at 7:07am | IP Logged

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