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MaNanTS: Man Mayal! Last Chap/PG28/27th-April-15/PmsLater (Page 38)

sanikagokhale Senior Member

Joined: 07 June 2015
Posts: 745

Posted: 27 April 2016 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Awesome story
So beautifully penned by you!
Loved it to core!
You are an awesome writerClapBig smile

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Sofiafarooq Goldie

Joined: 26 August 2015
Posts: 2168

Posted: 27 April 2016 at 8:01am | IP Logged
It's amazing dear.
What a cute story.
In two shorts u give us an amazing story.
Totally loved it.
There was a scene which I think is the heart of the story where she got permission to apply mehndi of his name. That was my faviourite scene and u wrote that scene so beautifully. That scene was Very sweet humble cute and their convo in that scene. Awesome.
I must say u have excellent command at Urdu.
After reading all stories in typical English It was realy good change. Mixture of Urdu English Hindi and Punjabi.
I will love to read such nice stuff again.

Edited by Sofiafarooq - 27 April 2016 at 8:01am

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dreamy_doll15 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 24 May 2015
Posts: 4490

Posted: 27 April 2016 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Wow..Mawara.That was amazing. Amazing update. Totally loved it..WOW. .Accha hua nandini ne sunaya. .Huh is idiot k liye jaruri Tha. .Cabir always cupid Rahega. So finally sach pata pda . Cabir ki bat se samjh toaaya. So finally manik realize Jo ki bhot jaruri thaa. Amazing ha. .Haww . Aryaman is a jerk Seriously can't he understand. Such a desperate attempt That was...Idiot. BUT FINALLY MANAN ARE TOGETHER. Manan all scenes were so beautifully penned. that all scene I seriously loved to the core... YIPEE. Their happy life. .their love story is seriously Different but yet that was Beautiful..Totally amazing. Mawara ThaT was Such a touching story.Loved it. .Keep writing more ha. Dil khush ho jata h . Stay blessed Keep smiling.

Edited by gtilwani45 - 27 April 2016 at 8:04am

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hilizbabe Senior Member

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Posts: 200

Posted: 27 April 2016 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Beautiful Story..Thumbs Up

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sreesri Goldie

Joined: 15 August 2015
Posts: 1814

Posted: 27 April 2016 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Amazing update..
Cabir punched manik..
Manik realization..
Manan romance..
Aryaman huh  
Luvd it

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manik11 Senior Member

Joined: 21 August 2015
Posts: 539

Posted: 27 April 2016 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Hiii dear...muze laga three shot hai... you killed it...fabulous update...It was just awsm...u penned it very beautifully... ohh my bira love you...Cabir played his role very well of being a cupid... finally manik realise his mistake...loved nandu taking stand for herself...the way usne manik ko sunaya amazing...Manan moments were cute... ... for the first time they were so close to each other...manik teasing nandu hahahaa...Loved the way manik kissed nandini infront of aryaman...Aryaman tried to misbehave with nanidini... ... but manik reaches on time...Finally manan were together ... it was just amazing...if u can make it ss...keep writing... take care ...

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KYYian Goldie

Joined: 04 September 2015
Posts: 1285

Posted: 27 April 2016 at 8:44am | IP Logged
amazing part

Manik finally tealized what he wants in his life..

nandini poor girl..she had to suffer a lot but she proved that she is brave

my god I was so much tensed while opening d page but when Manik confessed to cabir that nandini is his wife, I felt relived..

so much happiness

finally HEA

so beautiful ending

n I must say u amzingly wrote Punjabi launguage...so sweet to read...

mawara..u r awesome simply awesome

what a story it was!!!

I ll miss it.

keep writing more

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01asdfg Senior Member

Joined: 30 October 2015
Posts: 329

Posted: 27 April 2016 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Beautiful written
Loved it

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