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MaNanTS: Man Mayal! Last Chap/PG28/27th-April-15/PmsLater (Page 29)

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
awsm update...u really made our wait count...
Keep writing such beautiful stories... :)

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Amazing.
Suoerb
Awesome
Beautiful
I think words vl not be enough to appreciate ur work.
It was, inded very beautiful n new concept.
Loved every bit of it

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Amazing.
Superb
Awesome
Beautiful
I think words vl not be enough to appreciate ur work.
It was, inded very beautiful n new concept.
Loved every bit of it

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Hey it was awsm
Really nice concept
Loved it

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
awesome...
as per the amazing staring the ending is also superb...
love this nice story very much...
n tysm fr writing it...

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Wow...such a nice update...Clap . Enjoyed every bit of it.

Cabira is a true cupid...Embarrassed...bohat hi jyada accha kam kia hain usne Manik ko marke...akal thikane lag gaya...LOL. Cabir was right how can't Manik see the longing in her eyes...par sayad iska jabab srif ek hain...k woh Manik hain jisko kuch sidha samajh hi nahi ata...Angry.
Par jo v ho der aye durust aye...!!!

Nandini ka outburst bohat sahi tha...Manik needs to know nandini's plight...!!!
God...kitna pain main thi woh bechari bacchi...CryCry...uska pain to dil tak ho gaya...Broken Heart..!!!

Baba ne sahi faisla kia...na ispar na uspar...!!!
That arya...AngryAngry...such a jerk...!!! Matlab thappadh khane k baad v uska besharmi nahi gaya...he was trying to molest her...!!!Angry.
Thank god Manik time pe aa gaya.

Loved their way of confession...Embarrassed. So emotional but unique...Big smile.

Love the ts totally.
Take care...Embarrassed

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
di...aap kya ho...how can write such a thing...i mean...atleast readers ke bare mein toh soch lete ki how will we comment...koi word hi nahi choda...u left us speechless...dont know ki aapki stories mein kya hota hai lekin it actually works like magic...chahe mein kitna bhi depressed hun,kitna bhi emotional hun...chahe kaise bhi situation kyun na ho...aapki story ka update padhte he chutkiyon mein sab kuch gayab...everything for me becomes right...mere life ka har wrong right ho jata hai...kya likha aapne...ufff!!!mera fav part...


He was standing all alone as she walked him..



"Suniye!" She started nervously and he turned on her voice. 



He had decided already about the discussion happened with Baba. He can't let her go and now he was relaxed. He knew that she can be convinced easily so he smiled as he saw her standing near him..



"Ji khehye!" He said softly and she fidgeted with her dupatta blushing deeply also embarrassed of what she spoke to him earlier.



He was so sweet instead of me being rude he was acting so calmly. She thought...



"Wo main! Maafi mangna chahti the! Mjy wo sab ni bolna chye tha!" She said lowly and Manik shook his head..



"It's ok! Haq hai ap ka..!" He said politely and she was relieved also happy when she heard the word 'haq' was he ready to give her what she wanted? 



Don't keep your hopes high Nandu..



Actually Manik was thankful that she insulted him because of that only he was able to decide what he wanted moreover Cabir was the one who was constantly nagging him for Nandini. He made him realize that whatever he was longing for in those 10 long years was Nandini. Manik surely left her but his mind and heart were not unaware of her. Yes he didn't call her not because he didn't want to but because he felt himself in guilt. What would he talked to her? He didn't had the face to talk to her.



Now today when she insulted him and when Baba asked about the decision the only he realized that yes! Yes! Yes! She was the one whom he wanted..



'Dair aye darust aye'...



Manik stared at her as she opened her lips to say something and then closed them..



"Aur bhi kuch kehna hai ap ko?" Manik asked obediently hiding his smile and Nandini raised her head to meet his eyes before tucking it low again..



"Ji..! Kehna hai..!" She said lowly nodding her head like a scared rabbit and Manik wanted to laugh.



Where was that tigress who was shouting at him in evening..?



"Wo bhi keh dejiye?" He smirked and she gulped the lump trying to find that voice with which she was shouting at him earlier...



"Wo..! Main! Meh-mehndi! Lag-laga loon?" She asked so innocently that Manik really wanted to die on her innocence..



"Laga lijye!" Manik said softly and her cheeks were red tomato. She was so happy. Her heart went wild as she got the permission.. 



"Aur kuch?" He asked after a pause when she didn't left the place..



"Ji..!" She again nodded..



"Boliye!" He asked smiling ear to ear..



"Wo..! Agr ap ijazat dain tou! Ap ka naam bhi likhwa loon apni Mehndi main?" She asked shyly and Manik was so amazed



awww too cute...so full of innocence...its so pure...so sacred...innocent love...awww...lov u di for this...and yeh part bhi i liked very much...awww...even after being away from each other  for 10 yrs...its like donon ek dusre ki dhadkan tak ko pehechante hon, the care they have for eachother...the invisible string which has kept them tied together...its so magical to be able to feel the emotions just from your writing di luv u...and ya the part is this...



"Aray Manik Veer ji..! Arayaman kehty hain mjy!" Arayaman was shameless..



Manik looked at Nandini and she lowered her face. Then he stared back to Arayaman who was smirking. Manik felt the evil eyes of Arayaman on his little innocent wife. 



Without caring for Arayaman's presence he leaned forward and pecked her forehead gently. Nandini felt her forehead burning with the sensation of his lips. Then he slowly left her hand and cupped her left cheek..



"Jaoa! Bua ki baat sun lo! Jaldi ana main intezaar kar raha hoon tmhra!" Manik spoke all the time caressing her cheek and she felt secured from Arayaman's predator eyes under his touch..



"Abhi aati hoon!" She finally smiled at him and he backed off slowly. She almost run from their before turning once giving him a sweet smile and he smiled back..



plzzz di aise he achhe achhe stories likhte rahiye...take mein unhe padhke life time tak cherish kar sakoon...aur mere dil ko sukoon milta rahe...luv u...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
your reader ,

abhilasha






Edited by abhilashaS - 26 April 2016 at 2:09pm

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
Beautiful... Just loved it... Ur mindblowing yaar .. beautifully written... Would be eagerly waiting to read many more stories written by u in future... Good luck.. Tongue

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