MaNanTS: Man Mayal! Last Chap/PG28/27th-April-15/PmsLater - Page 29

Superb!!!superb!!!superb!!!loveeddd ittt seriously m in love with man mayal's nandini to heights...,she is sooo sooo innocent awww u won't believe when in  the story she was blushing i was blushing as well reading this 😳. Manik's realisation of love,manik's possessiveness towards nandini,manik's aggressiveness towards aryaman wooohooo amazing ek do punches or pdne chahiye the us jerk ko huh...n end wala scene omg damn beautiful mujhe tou pta hi nii chla kb story ended...,little bit sad also as it ended so soon bt as a writer u r more sincere n knows more what to do with the story sooo its OK n I respect my writer more than I love her...;-) n lastly yesss I can never forget this nandini ever...❤️ keep smiling

Wohhooo!! Ming blowing update!!

Seriously just luvd this nandini!! N maanik...haayee!! I knw he did wrong but finallyyy Cabira made him realised that he luvs nandini!! Manbir was awesome!!

That aryaman huhhh!! Gandaa!!

do chaar laaten or padni chahiye thi!!
N last me Manan!!! Uff blush blush!!
Damn good it was!!

whole story was FANtasticc!! Bole toh ek dum jhakaaas!!

but it ended!!! *sigh*
kher koi ni..its completely OK...

uh r an amazing write!! Luv oll d stories of yours!!
keep writing!!
stay blessed
take care!!

Excellent update...

Lovely story real captive maine dono update sath mai padhe bahut maza aaye . Loved nandini ka daatna tabhi manik ko realise hua kya galti ki hai usne. Aur end mai sab acha ho gaya both confessed .loved it keep it up and keep smiling. 

awsome simply superb update...

this was last update😲
only two shots😒

update was awesome
i rally wished that cabir should punch manik...and you granted my wish 😃
manik rally needed some buddhi...which cabir gave him through punches😉
finally manik's mind came on it's place
bua also helped cabir
nandini's outburst was very much required
when his father asked him to leave her...he felt the importance of her in his life😊
mehendi scene was too cute...
and the way manik was acting...ji kahiye😆
and when he said "haq hai aapka" hayee...
manik liked her mehendi
and aryamann😡
but somewhere he too acted as cupid in bringing manan back
but how dare he touch her😡
manik should have kiled him..
loved the ending

pls try give an epilogue...pretty pleasee..

Thanks for updating
It was beautiful
Loved how cabir supported Nandu n gave manik piece of his mind
N glad manik also realized it and at the end everything got fine
Loved it it was a beautiful story
N loved this kinda Urdu/ Punjabi language touch
That was awesome

awesome ts 

Awesome update. Manbir's convo was rocking. Cabir rocked. Manan's moments were well penned. Way nandini treated Manik's wounds and nandini's tears were well penned. Manan's confrontation was well penned. Hats off. Nandini's words were well penned. U nailed it. Wow manik realised his love for nandini. Mehandi part was amazing. Manik's teasing session was fabulous. Wow manik saved nandini.manan are together. Lovely ending. Thanks for pm.