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SS -Yeh hum kahan aa gaye Part 2 page 6[Updated 22.5]

Trinaa Goldie
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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Promo of my new story

All the four couples are coming back to Ayodhaya from Mithila. They have decided to rest near a small forest. All the couples are resting in their respective tents except one. 
Lakshmila are roaming around the forest. Suddenly Urmila's dupaatta gets struck in a strange machine. What is this? TIME MACHINE.
By mistake they start the machine.
Oh no! Lakshmila now get transported to the future in the 21st century.
What will they now do in this unknown surroundings? What problems are they going to face there?
But wait,How this happen?
Meanwhile, all the others are searching for them, when they find some unknown people there.They have come from future via the time machine. What problems will they create.

And most importantly how will Lakshmila go back to their original time?

Hello guys, I have decided to write a story on this idea, but I dont know whether I should continue or not. If you all want me to continue please tell me. And do give your feedback. Critisisms all always welcome.


Chapter 1- page 2
Chapter 2- page 6

-TrinaSmile


Edited by Trinaa - 15 June 2016 at 3:24am

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 8:22am | IP Logged
HaiSmileSmiletrina
Nice idea please do continue

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Eager to see how Lakshmila be in 21 century and please add their fights romance. And expenditure in today's worldBig smile
Waiting for u r post. 
Rupa Smile

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 9:42am | IP Logged
LOve to read Everything and anything about Lakshmila. Please continue soon trina :)Smile

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Awesome concept TriniBig smile
Please continue writing this storyStar

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Awesome Idea , You should continue

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Interesting :)
Continue soon :)

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 11:06am | IP Logged
I always wanted something like this...it's a good ideaSmile
Please continue

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Amazing concept ClapClap
Write write write Embarrassed
Just one thing: Include IF in this Tongue

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