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Twinj FF: The Runaways - Pg 13

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So guys my first FF. Please excuse my mistakes. Here is the part 1. Pls do comment and tell me how it was.

Chapter 1

Kunj POV

I ran as fast as I could so that I could catch a bus. Running from my own wedding wasn't that easy. Had to jump out of my window. Had to run past the security. My father even sent search parties after me. As he wanted me to get married to Alisha by hook or crook. 

But I didn't want to get married not now at least. I reached the bus stop and stopped to catch my breath. 

I caught my breath looked up and saw a girl running towards me she was all dressed in a wedding attire. A pink lehenga and totally decked up with jewellery. She was really beautiful even from a distance. 

She comes running and crashes straight into me. "Ouch!" We both shout at the same time. She holds my shoulder with one of her hand and keeps her other hand on her waist and tries to catch her breath.

"Sorry!" She says taking her hand off my shoulder. "It's okay" I say dusting off my sherwani.

She looks at me from head to toe and smiles and says "Even you ran away from your wedding didn't you". "How do you know?" I ask her. "Duh! No one wears a sherwani to catch a bus" she says smiling again.

 "I am Kunj Sarna by the way" I tell her. "Twinkle Taneja" she says. Then a bus comes. 

She enters the bus. "Aren't you coming Kunj Sarna" she says looking back at me. I enter the bus. It was quite empty with just four to five people. They stare at us. She goes and sits. I sit on the seat behind her.

 "So where are you going Miss Twinkle Taneja" I couldn't help asking. "I don't know yet, What about you?" She asks. I tell her that even I don't know. There was an awkward silence for some time. 

After some time Two ladies in the front were giggling "Sharmao mat baatein karo na" one of the lady tells us . Me and Twinkle get confused."Nayi Shaadi hui na isiliye sharma rahe honge " the other lady says. Me and Twinkle look at each other and understand exactly how this looks.

To be continued
Part 2 - pg 5
Part 3- pg 9


Edited by harshi2000 - 05 June 2016 at 3:45am

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 7:42am | IP Logged
aweesssommeee
 
gawwwd that was lovely
awesome ideaaa
okay I neeed a part two right nowww
shittt that was great
I loved the idea, it was cute
I love such stuff, both running,well this story is gonna rock all the way
pat on the back
yayyy I loved loved this part
sakshi


Edited by ..queen.. - 19 April 2016 at 7:44am

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Beautiful
Loved it!
Continue soon

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..queen..

aweesssommeee
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<div>gawwwd that was lovely

awesome ideaaa

okay I neeed a part two right nowww

shittt that was great

I loved the idea, it was cute

I love such stuff, both running,well this story is gonna rock all the way

pat on the back

yayyy I loved loved this part

sakshi


Thank you I am glad that you liked it
Will work on part 2 . Thank you so much for reading

Edited by harshi2000 - 19 April 2016 at 7:49am
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Originally posted by SweetSau

Beautiful
Loved it!
Continue soon

Thanks for reading
will continue soon

Edited by harshi2000 - 19 April 2016 at 7:57am
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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 8:10am | IP Logged
OOO...this is intriguing!!!
amazingBig smileBig smileBig smile
Such a unique story line, eager to see where this leads off too!!

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Yoo this is so interesting! Both runaways, both together; I really love where this is going! Excited for the next part buddy! :D

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awesome. looking forward ;D
well done Harshi

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