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Karn duryodhan - kavach kundal Daan os

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 7:03am | IP Logged
His guys my name is Shweta and I have never written an os on Surya Putra karn this is the first time so please forgive me if anything is unsatisfying or if it's not that good I love karna and Duryodhan friendship so just a short os for their friendship and it's completely fictional 

The scene which I am writing is the time after kavach kundal Daan of karn and how duryodhan reacts to it 


Karn was in a very pathetic condition.  He lost a lot of blood and the doctors said that it's very difficult to save him 

Duryodhan comes running 

(it's in hindi) 

Dr : Mitra (mourning) Yeh Yeh kya hua Mitra... En paandavo ne chal Kiya Hai mere Mitra ke saath dekho tho kya Haal Kar diya mere Mitra ka 
Kr: nahi Mitra esmai paandavo ka koi dosh nahi 
Dr: enka bachaav karne ki koi aavashakta nahi Hai Mitra 
Yeh paandav chali Hai aur kehte Hai humne enke saath chal Kiya... Kyu paandav yadi tumhe pratishod he Lena Tha tho mujse lete mere Priya Mitra ne tumhara kya bigaada Tha are usne to sadev tumhara saath diya Hai are sadev bachaya Hai tumhe... Yudhistir tum tho dharma Raj Ho na tho Yeh kaisa dharm Hai Yeh kaisa nyaay Hai bolo... Vasudev karn tho aapka mitra haina tho app ne uske saath itna bad annyaye kaise hone diya... App as uske prano ki rakhsha Kyu nahi karte... Dekhiye na woh Kitni peeda Mai Hai... Mera Mitra...
Kr: Mitra (unable to speak)   meri baat sumo mujhe lagta Hai ki Mai tumhe diya hua vachan nahi nibha paaonga Mitra.. Aisa prateet Ho raha Hai ki Yeh meri antim bhet Hai tumhe 
Dr: nahi Mitra Aisa mat kaho yadi tum Chale jaaoge tho Mai bina yudh lade sab kuch haar jaonga Mitra... Tum Ho tho Mai hoon Mitra aisi baatein bhi karne ki anumati Mai tumhe nahi DE sakta Mitra Yeh tumhare yuvraj ka aadesh Hai... 
(karna pulses go low) 
Dr: Acha theek Hai aadesh nahi tho Kam se Kam Mera nivedan samakhkar sweekar Kar lo... Tumne mujhe vachan diya Tha na ki tum mujhe chodkar nahi jaaoge tum Aise apna vachan nahi tod sakte Mitra 
Kr: Jane se pehle Mai Tumse kuch poochna chahta hoon Mitra. 
Dr: kripa karke aisi baatein mat Karo mitra
Kr: mere prashn ka uttar dho mitra
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Kr: Tumhe mujhse koi shikayat nahi Hai na
Dr: nahi Mitra tum mere liye sab kuch Ho Mitra... Matashree aur pitashree ke pashchaat yahi Mai kisi se sabse aadik prem karta hoon woh tum Ho Mai Tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga 
(Karn smiles and then faints) 

Dr: Mitra Mitra aankhen kholo tum mere saath aisa nahi Kar sakte mitra
He looks at vasudev

Vasudev mere Mitra ke prano ki rakhsha kijiye use bachaiye Vasudev... Woh aapka bhi Mitra Hai na... 

Duryodhan thinks for a while 

Mai Yeh yudh rok dhoonga... Yahi chahte the na app Mai woh sab karunga jo aap kahenge... En paandavo ko indraprast bhi dedunga bas mere Mitra ke pran bacha lijiye. 

Shakuni: mere hone waale samrat tum Yeh kya Kar Rahe ho es karna ke like tum En paandavo ko indraprast lautaoge... Chalo yaha se humain yudh ki tayari Karni hai

Dr : Mera Mitra Jeevan aur mrityu ke beech joojh raha Hai mama shree aur aap chahte Hai ki Mai uske saath chod du

Sh: haa mere honewale samrat waise bhi kavach aur kundal ke bina eske hone ya na hone se koi laabh nahi 

Duryodhan gets very angry 

Dr: mama aap yaha se Chale jaiye esse pehle ki Mai bhool jao ki aap Kaun Hai... Mera Mitra Mera abhimaan Hai aur uske kavach kundal hone na hone se mujhe koi antar nahi padta Mai apne Mitra ke Jeevan ke liye kuch bhi Kar sakta hoon samjhe aap ab jaiye 

Dr: Vasudev aap khade khade dekh kya Rahe Hai bachaiye mere Mitra ke pran Mai paandavo ko unka sab kuch lautadunga 

Vasudev : dekh raha hoon gandhari nandhan ki apne ahenkaar ke Karan kisi ke samakhsh nahi jhookne wala Duryodhan aaj apne Mitra ke liye kaise jhook gaya 

Dr: kyuki Mera Mitra hi Mera dhan Hai Vasudev yadi wahi mere pass nahi hoga tho rajya aur sampati ka Mai kya karunga 

Vasudev gets impressed by his words 

Yudhistir : Tumhe kuch bhi Dene ki aavashakta nahi Hai Duryodhan nakul aur sehdev ang Raj to theek Kar denge 

Nakul sehdev treat karna after which he becomes absolutely alright 

Kr: Mitra Mai theek hoon
Duryodhan  hugs karna and cries a lot 

Dr: Chalo Mitra humai es shivir Mai aur nahi rukna chahiye aur waise bhi mujhe Tumse bohot baatein Karni Hai 

They leave and Krishna tells the others 

Vs: chahe Duryodhan Kitna bhi ahenkari ho use Acha Mitra aur koi nahi ho sakta and karna aur Duryodhan ki mitrata ki prasansha sansaar yugo yugo tak karega 

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