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Posted: 03 August 2016 at 4:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dev_Dhakad

It ws coool...
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                            Part-7
Ab Sab perh ki or dekhte hain. . pr vaha koi nahi hota or fer teeno ki or...
Pr teeno bahno ko kuch samaj nahi aata...
Durga:aap perh pr kisko dhund rahe ho... 
Shivanya:haan!!!
Radhika:or kisko,,, Shilpa aur Anu  ko...

Du-shi-geet:kya???? Pr voh toh room mein hain humare saath nahi...

An Sab chilate hain:KYA????

Shivaya:shhh... Aap Sab es tarah kyu chilaye??? Jaise voh dono baagh gayi ho... Yahi hogi, kaha jaayegi...
Durga:haan!!!hume yaha chord kr nahi jaayegi voh dono...
Geet:haan!! Saying this she turn back to pick kairi's,,, but she accidently throw her kairi on maan... Due to this he lost his balance and forward his hand to hold something,, but he hold feet,, but as she is not ready for this she also loose her balance and after few sec. Their position is like man on grass nd geet on him...
For few mins. Maan is all lost in geet,, in her beauty...maan baas geet ko dekhe jaa raha hain aaur yaha geet wo toh baas apne aap main hii gum hain...aur aise main geet ki najar maan ki upar parthi hain aur usse dekhte hi wo uspe sawaloo ki wochar kaar deti hain...
App ne mujhey  kyun giraya...haa kiya samajhte hain app apne apko??
Geet ke chillane se maan Wapas hakikat main kadam rakhte hain aur use chillate dekh use bhi gusssa ata hain wo bolta hain App aise chilla kyun rahii hain..koyii problem hain apko???
Jaab maan geet yeh bolte hain Samrat maan k bich aa jate hain aur maan se bolta hain rehne de Bhai...
Maan: nehi bhai main tumse baad main baat karta hoo..pehle toh ise dekhleta hoo..haa kiya problem hain aapko??
Geet: mujhey kiya problem hogi...
maan: wo toh apko pata hoga ki apko kiya problem hain...waise maine suna hain jin logo k kaan main kaam sunaiye deta hain wo log hii aise chilla chillake baate karte hain...
Geet aur jorse: kiya??kiya kaha tumne meri kaaan main problem hain...
Maan : Assa apke kaan main problem hain???Maine kaab kaha apne hii toh bata ya..aur wo bhii abhi abhi...
Geet: tumne mujhey giraya kyun???
Maan: maine tumeh gira diya!! Nahi tumne mujhpe Kairii mara..jisse main gir gaya...aur pher jaab mainne tumeh uth ne main madad ki toh uthte hii tumne mujhey daakka diya...
Geet: Assa maine tumpe kairii mara!!maine tumeh dhakka diya??? 
Abb shivanya geet ki Baato ki bich bol parthi. hain...geet chup ho jaa..Par yaha maan bol partha hain..
Maan: toh nehi mara..mere mu pe laga tha kairi...
Geet: Assa kiya mara... paar tum Aise hii hoo..hawa se gir jate ho??...ek kairi kiya laga muh pai mujhey lekar gir gaye...
Arjun: main hawase nehii gira tha kairi mere mu pe laga tha jisse main dis balanced hoo gaya tha...Waise tumeh lekar girne ka mujhey koi shok nehi tha..paar assa huya ki main tumeh lekar gira...tumnehii mara tha naa kairii mujhey...
Geet: tuum...
Maan:kiya???
 
Abb geet ki papa un dono ki bich ake geet se bolte hain beta kiya hoo raha hain..aise ajnabiyo se jhagra nehi karte...aur taabhi geet Ko achanak se yaad aata hain ki iss ladke ko wo nehi jante toh eye ladka eha kiya kar raha hain...aur wo bolti hain...
Geet: Koun hoo tum???
Maan:maan...
Geet: maan?? Koun maan?? hum kisi maan ko nehi jaante.. chori karne aye hoo??Ajkal chor daku ke naam bhi maan hote hain..Strange!!!!!
Maan: Kiya kaha main chor??tum...
Feet: Maine pucha hamare ghar main kiya kar rahe hoo!!!!!!
Maan: Waise tumse itne Intelligence  ki umeed nehi thi mujhey...shukar hain kuch toh jaanti hoo...
Geet: tumneh mere Intelligence dekha hii kaha..jaab police bulayungii nah tab samjh ayega tumeh...
Maan:acha bolao police mein bhi dekho kya krti hai police...
Abb maan ki baato k bich maan ki maa Aur jaya aa jaate hain aur maan ko Rokte gain...
Naina: baas maan...aab bohot hoa...
Maan: Maa eye ladki pagal hain...kiya samjhti hain aapne apko..
Jaya: wo bacchi hain...
Maan: bacchi hain..kahase bacchi dikhti hain aapko...
Abb geet Bas Shocked hoke unn logoko dekhte rehte hain..usse kuch samajh nehi aata ki kiya ho raha hain..eye log koun hain kahase aaye hain..aur eha kiya kaar rahe hain..Aur taabhi shivanya aur durga  Uske paas jake khari hote hain aur nichi awaz main usse  bolte hain eye shayad hamare ghar main mehmaan hain...
Geet: kiya mehman...kaab aye...
Durga: paata nehi...
Geet: mehman hain..abb toh main gayii..mamma toh mujhey kaaccha chaba jayenge...
Durga pichese aake: Kaccha nehi chabayenge..ppehle tumpe chilenge.Baad main namak lagayenge..pher boil karenge pher khayenge...
Durga: Tuu Mujhey aur maaat dara...
Abb Samne se pallavi chillake Bolparthi hain  wo tujhey dara nehi rahii hain..hakikat se samna kara rahi hain..aab tera wo hi haal hone wala hain...
Geet: Mamma maine kiya jaan bujhke kiya..mujhey thori pata tha ki eye hamare ghaar ki mehman hain...[maan ki taraf gussese paar mu pe haasi liye dekhke]Agar mujhey pata hota toh  main inke saath aise karti kiya..nehi karti...kabhi nehi karti...aur mamma aap mujhey nehi dant sakte meri ekele ki galti thori nah hain..galti inka bhi toh hain...aur aapne durga  maa ki kasam khayii hain ki aap mujhey aaj nehi dantoge...
Pallavi: Assa???
Naina pallavi ke bich aa jati hain aur pallavi se bolte hain : Bhabi choriye nah..eye saab toh koyii bhi jaanbujke nehi karega...app choriye eye saab...
Pallavi maan ki taraf jate hain aur maan se kehte hain..Beta I am so sorry..meri  jo beti hain eye ekdam.. aab kiya bolu main...I am really sorry...
Maan: Are aunty aap kyun sorry bolrahi hain..it's okey..iss main aapki kiya galti...
Pallavi:tumhe toh chot aayi hai...
Maan: don't worry aunty mein theek ho...
Parineeta:par beta...
Maan:aunty relax...


Part b

Pallavi:Kaiser relax beta tum baitho mein first-aid magwati hoon... Chandani jadli first-aid lao...

Chandi: jii maji...
Jaya bhi maan ki ser ki chot dekh: Kaise laga ser main..kitna khoon nikal raha hain...
Maan geet ki taraf dekhte huye: wo baas jaab gira tha wo perh main jake lag gaya tha ser..jiyada kuch nehi thik hoo jayega..kuch nehi huya...
Aur eha shivanya to geet: Sach main bohot chot aya hain..tu bhi na geet...
Geet:  Abb maine kiya kiya...mujhse uska ser thorai takraya tha...perh se takraya tha...
Durga: paar takraya kisliye tere liye na???
Geet: Nehi bilkul nehi..wo beukuf gadha hain isiliye takraya...
Durga:per wo mujhey kisi bhi angle se bevkuf ya gadha nehi lagraha hain..mujhey bhi bachaya tha usne...
Geet: Assa..toh taab chillayii kyun??
Durga: tab mujhey thori pata tha ki ye hamare ghar main mehman hain..mujhey toh laga tha ki eye jahannam ki koyii...
Geet: Tu aur tera eye imagination..main faas gayii bich main...
Durga: Ismain meri koyii galti nehi...
Shivanya: haan ismain uski koyii galti nehi...
Geet:  thik hain meri galti hain na..meri hii galti hain..kush hain aaplog...

Par geet Last line gusse main thori jiyada jorse bolparthi hain...jisee sablog uski taraf dekhte hain...aur wo embarrass hoo jati hain...Aur wo batate hain ki..wo main..main...paar kuch bata nehi pate thik se..
Aise main pallavi uski taraf jate hain aur bolti hain abb khush hain tu..ehi baaki tha ghar ki mehmano ke saath..
Geet: Mamma maine kiya...
palkavi  use bich main rokh..baas chup...jo huya tumhare waha se hii huya..tumne kiya hoo ya nehi...har chij ki ek haad hoti hain...kitna khoon nikal raha hain...aur eye kehke wo Chandni se first aid box leke maan ki taraf jate hain...
Paar maan  kehte hain ki eye thik hoo jayega..iski koyii jarurat nehi...
Ab maan  ki eye baat se geet ko aur gusssa aata hain aur wo gussa main phirse maan pe chilla uthti hain...kyun nehi lagana dawa..aise kaise thik hoo jayenge...maha purush ho ya sannasi jise khana pina dawa kisike jarurat nehi hote...
Maan geet ko kuch kehne lagte hain paar geet use kehne ka mouka nehi deta aur khood bolta jata hain ya pher khood ko mahan sabeet karna chahte ho..
Maan: Mahan!!!!
Geet: haa mahan!!! Yeah keh kr geet maan ko ek bench PR bitheti hain or uske wound ko clean kr uspe bandage krti hain or apni behno k pass jaati gain or phir naina ko dekhti hain or assume krti hain ki voh maan ki related gain es liye teeno behne unke pass jaati hain or Sab se millti hai or maafi maagti hai...
Fir teeno apni family ko ek look dekr ghar k andar jaati hai,, or Anu-shilpa ko search krti hain...
Yaha garden mein teeno behno k jaane k baad Sab maan k pas jaati hain,,pr voh ek look apni mom ko dekr gusse mein vaha we jaata hain...
Naina:maan,,, maan tum theek ho,  pr Maan chala jata hai...
Yeah dekh kr Sab upset hote hain,,, pr Armaan,samrat,prithivi aur Rishab aage aa kr Naina she kehte hai ki voh Maan k pas jaate hai who Sab apna mood na khrab kre...
Naina in sad voice:theek hai...
In Sab k jaane k baad naina khush hooti hain...
Sab unhe khush hota dekh hairaan reh jaate hai...
Pallavi:sorry Bhabhi WO...
Naina: Kiya bhabi kitni baar sorry bolengii aap..waise bhi kyun sorry bol rahi hain'apko pata hain mera maan kisiki koyii baat nehi sunta'Use kuchh sunane ke liye mujhey koyii chahiye'..aaj usne pehli baar kisiki suni..aur jab geet ne usse dhamkaya tab toh ekdaam chup hii hogayaa'waise bhabi appki betiyoo main toh bohot dam hain'.
Ananya: haan yeh apne bilkul thik kaha ladkiyon main to daam hain'
Ananya: To abb  humain kitni bhabhi milne walii hain??
Naintara: Bhabi eye koyii puchne walii baat huyii'mujhey toh ek mil hii jayengii'...
Abb ananya: Jitni bhi mile wo mil gaye yeh soch ke baith jayoge toh kuch nehi hoga'hamin apne kaam asse se karna padega..tabhi baat banegi'.Abb hamara asli  mission shuru hota hain'You all are ready na!!!
Saab ek saath we all are ready'.
Radhika: mujhey kuch samajh nehi aa rahi'
Mr Rathore: apko chinta karne jaisa kuch bhi nehi hain bhabi...
Raghuvander: paar eye saab kiya hain..main bhi'
Ram: saabkuch samajhne ki kiya jarurat'
Dayal: jarurat nehi!!..humein batao kiya ho raha hain'.
Jaya: vai sahab yaha hum aapki ek beti ki haat mangne aye the'paar aab hum ek ki jagah teeen ka haat mangna chahte hain'
Aur jata se eye sun pallavi-parineeta chillake: kiya?!!!
Saab unhe chillate huye dekh unki taraf dekhte hain'
Naina: Kyun apko koyii prolem hain..agar hain toh app bol sakte hain'
Parineeta:Hume kya problem hogi,,,, Jo hogi aap ko hogi...
Radha:MATLAB...
Pallavi:matlab yeh ki yeh joh humari betiyaan hain,, voh betiya tornedo hain tornedo'jaha bhi jate hain'musibaatoo ko khud bulavya de rahi hain app..ek toh samhal jaati..paar teeno!!!!!!!!!
Ram: baas baas bhabi aur burayii nehi hamari hone wale bahu ke naam'
Dayal: haa wo toh samjha..paar ek baat batao..hamne abhi taak shivanya se hii baat nehi ki samrat ko leke..himmatii nehi ho rahi'pher eye geet aur durga Aur aapko nehi pata mere betiyon ko agar eye pata chal jayega toh teen to kiya ek  bhi shadi nehi hogii'
Jaya: toh pher hum use batayenge kyun!!
Pallavi:matlab??nehi batayenge toh kaise hogi'Shadi main kitni sare raasmain..pher..
Pratima: bhabi..app aise kyun bol rahe hain'hum sidhe shadi taak thori jayenge'Shadi se pehle toh kuch aur hoga!!
Dayal: Shadi se pehle kiya hoga..jo bhi hoga shadi ke baad hii hoga'
Pallavi to dayal: Unka matlab Pyar se tha..
Ananya: haan wo log khud ake hamse shadi ki baat karengi''.
Parineeta: wo kaise hoga beta???
Anjali: ananya aisa kabhi nehi hoga'mere jo nanad hain na kuch bhi karega paar pyar main phasega nehi'
Kumkum: haan..
Naintara: wo nehi pasege toh kiya huya hum uneh phasaenge'
Kumkum: paar wo kaise'
Ananya: hamare paas kuch plans hain aur kuch karna padega'pehle app hamin innteeno ke bare main details main bataiye..inke sawvaab..ineh kiya pasand..kiya nehi'aur ham aplogoko inn teeno ke bare main bolte hain..pher plans fixed karte hain'
Anjali: haan!!
Naintara: haa..
Ananya:  eye thik hain..pehle thikse plan karte  hain'paar ek baat plans karne ke baat eye plan hum saabko milke kameyaab karna padega'
Kumkum: saab saath denge..
Sab bahut khush hote hain...
Ananya:SANJU kya hua tum khush nahi ho...
Sanju:yeh galat hain aap teeno ko bhabhi mil gyi toh aap mujhe bhool gyi...
Naintara:essa nai hai SANJU...
Sanju: accha tabhi yeah bhool gyi ki mujhe bhi ek Bhabhi chahiye...
Rehne do mein khud hi apne liye Bhabhi doondogi...
Sanju to rajvanshi ladies: aunty aapki do air bettiyaan haina,, kya in mein se ek mujhe mil sakti hai...

Yeah sunn kr Sab hasne lagte hai... Kyuki voh miss tarah yeah keh rahi this yeah lag raha tha ki voh bahut desperate hain...

Radha:haan Bhabhi aapki do betiyaan aur hain voh kaha hai,, unse bhi milwaye kya pta mujhe bhi apne bete ko sidda krne k liye koi mil jaye...


Finish...
Part c will update tomorrow...
Arsh meeting...





Edited by shdiksha - 13 August 2016 at 12:25am

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Posted: 11 August 2016 at 2:43am | IP Logged
LOLROFLLOLohh sorry yaarLOL
ek minuteROFL yeh ladkiya kamal k hWink
itni masti???LOL loved the part!Embarrassed
missing ArSh plz unka b kuch
moments dikhao naWink love uHug

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Posted: 11 August 2016 at 2:49am | IP Logged
OopsShockedLOL i was stalking u Wink
yeh part mast laga hayye!Day Dreaming
Geet- Maan k woh girna n khonaBlushing
oyye hoyye :* n ek line zabardast lagi mujheLOL
yeh qoute kar rhi hoon mWink
''yeh ki yeh joh humari betiyaan hain,, voh betiya tornedo hain tornedo'jaha bhi jate hain'musibaatoo ko khud bulavya de rahi hain app..ek toh samhal jaati..paar teeno!!!!!!!!!''ROFLROFL
matlab abhi toh yeh haal hWink agge kya hoga???LOL

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Posted: 11 August 2016 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ajuswa19pm

LOLROFLLOLohh sorry yaarLOL
ek minuteROFL yeh ladkiya kamal k hWink
itni masti???LOL loved the part!Embarrassed
missing ArSh plz unka b kuch
moments dikhao naWink love uHug
Thanku...
 shilpa will enter in next part...

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Posted: 11 August 2016 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Nice update 
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Posted: 11 August 2016 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ajuswa19pm

OopsShockedLOL i was stalking u Wink
yeh part mast laga hayye!Day Dreaming
Geet- Maan k woh girna n khonaBlushing
oyye hoyye :* n ek line zabardast lagi mujheLOL
yeh qoute kar rhi hoon mWink
''yeh ki yeh joh humari betiyaan hain,, voh betiya tornedo hain tornedo'jaha bhi jate hain'musibaatoo ko khud bulavya de rahi hain app..ek toh samhal jaati..paar teeno!!!!!!!!!''ROFLROFL
matlab abhi toh yeh haal hWink agge kya hoga???LOL
Thanku...
Abhi toh sirf teen musibat hi hai...
Jab 5ch saath hogi tab kya kregi...
Yeah sochna chahiye...

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Originally posted by T.Peru

Nice update 
Thanku...

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