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arsh ff:golmal part 8 update (Page 5)

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Posted: 10 July 2016 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
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                           Part-6
Naina: sahi kaha tune naintara...
Arohi: Aunty App chupke hamare baate sunrahii thii
Ananya:  jaise loud speaker pe bolrahe the shukar karoo Samrat Ya unme mein se kisine nehi suni..warna ho jata sare plans ka satyanash...
Pichese maan unko puchta hain kiss plan ka satyanash ho jata aunty???
Ananya [choukte huye]:pa...pa... plan...plan ka..!!!kounsa plan??? nehi main toh perh pe chari ladki ke bare main bol rahi thi...
Maan: perh pe chari ladki!!!
Naina: woh baat yeh hain ki ..woh bhabi bohot gusse mein hain na..
Ananya: Par ladki kitni natkhat hain..hain na..??khud ko bacha liya...bhabi ji ka plan ka satyanash kar diya...
Arohi: haa ma ek dam satyanash kar diya..kiya ladki hain...mujhey toh bohot achi lagi iski natkhat ada...
Maan: mamma yeh natkhat hain yeh khatarnak hain... kiya keh rahi hain..aur aur tumhe kiya huya??isski harkat dekhi apne??...naam ke hii itna bada bada karnama hain...shukaar hain iska chehra nehi dekha aabtak..warna pata nehi kiya hoo jata...aur aap eha ladki ki ada dekhne ayii ya vacation maanane???
Sanju: offcorse Vacation pe ayii hoo...paar vcation pe ake ladki dekhna mana hain???
Maan: Ladki dekhna mana nehi hain..paar aisii khatarnak ladki se dur hi rehna thik hain..
Jaya: waise maan aisa kiya kiya isne..perh pe hii toh chari hain..waise gao main ladkiya per pe charti hii hain...ismain konsi bari baad hain...!!!

Prithvi: Maa appko in logo ki tariff karneki koyi jarurat nehi..aapne us per wali ki behen ko dekha lagta hain sidha Asylum se aayii hain...koyii aese chillaata hain kiya...aur agar itna hii dar lagta hain girne se toh per pe charne kisne kaha tha...offf just out of my mind yrr...pata nehi yaha pr vacation ka kiya hoga..zinda bhi jaa payunga ya nehi...Agar aise hi do din chillaya toh mujhey kuch hoo na hoo heart attack toh jarur aaa jayega...
Jaya thora gamvir hoke: Prithvi...aise nehi bolte beta...waise en behno main bohot pyar hain...
Samrat: shayed sirf behno main hii pyar hain...baaki kisike liye nehi...baaki saabke liye toh pagalpan ka doz...
Pichese naintara: Waise prithvi Tujhey pyar ki jarurat hii kiya??Ya pher koyii aur baat hain???
Naintara ki baat sunn prithvi shocked hoke naintara ko baas gussese dekhte rehte hain aur bolta hain mamma a ap logose baat karna hii bekar hain...

Sanju: toh hamare saath baat karne tumhe bulaya koun???
Prithvi yeh sunke Maan ko leke vaha se dusre taraf chale jate hain...
Ananya: Abhi toh gaye the...
Jaya: ha abhi toh sara ka sara hamara khawab ka aise ki taise ho jate...
Sanju: aunty agar apko apne bte ke liye bahu chahiye toh apko jiyada savdhani barakhni padegii..
Aroho: haa choti ma sanju ne sahi kaha...
 
Aur eha bebaas radhika-parineeta-pallavi Geet se: chal le liya maine durga maa ki kasam tujhey aur teri behneo ko 5ch din de dengii...
Geet with a puppy voice: aur dantoge toh nehi na!!
Radhika: pehle niche aao tum...aur dhere..
Geet: ok...aa rahi hoon...
Shivanya: dhere dhere utarna..Shona ko chot ayii hain..abb tujhey nehi ani chahiye...
Geey: shivi main Sona nehi hoon...
Durga: ye bilkul thik nehi hain ..jaab dekho aap dono usko tang krte rehte hoo...
Aise main niche ki taraf ate huye geet upar se jump karti hain..aur niche jamin pe aa jaati hain..aur jamin pe aake hii chilla uth ti hain..ahhh...
Saab log geet ki taraf bhaag te hain...
Dadu: kiya huya beta??
Pallavi: meri bacchi ..isiliye per pe charne ko mana karti hoo..aab lag gyii na chot...maine toh kaha tha ki nehi datungi toh phir tumne jump kyun kiya??hay durga maa iss ladki ka eye kiya karu main???
 Shivanya chillake: tu Shona nehi hain na?? abb lagi na chot!!main bol rahi thi dhere dheere..nehi koyii baat nehi sunti hain tu...
Durga dourke geet k paas baith jati hain aur bolti hain: kaha lagi hain...pair main??dhyan se nehi kar sakti the tum...Chandni chandni...
Durga: use kyun bula rahi hain??
Chandni: jii didi..
Durga: andar jake baraf leke aaa
Shivanya: jaldi ana...

Geet ki chehra baye tarafse uski balloon se dhaki huyii hain aur daye taraf uski do behen hain iisliye family ko uski chehra dhikai nehi de rahii..
Aur eha Chandni baraf lene ke liye uha se jane ke bbad...
Geet: usse kyun bheja apne baraf lane!!
Radhika: baraf lagana padega na teri pair main?? bohot dard ho raha hain??
Shivanya: dard toh ho ga hii na ma..kitni uparse giri hain...
Anjali: main jake bam latii hoon..
Geet: nehi bhabi baam ki koyii jarurat nhei..
Kumkum: kyun!! Main jake lati hoon na...
Durga gussa hoke: nehi bhabi use baam nehi chahiye..wo kiya hain na wo shona nehi hain..wo kabhi girte nehi..kabhi use chot ate nehi..aur agar chot aa bhi jayee toh use bam ki jarurat nehi...kyun ki wo shona nehi hain...
Geet: baas karoo na..kitna dant oo ge...abb toh lagta hain ki per se utarnese pehle mamma se nehi tumse kasam leni chahiye thi..
durga: haan wo hii baaki hain..jaab dekho blackmail...
Geet[ek aur jump deke]: waise mujhey kuch nehi huya..wo eye toh natak tha...
Pallavi: kiya!!!
Geet: haan..
Dayal: pagal kahiki..aisa koyii karta hain kiya??
Pallavi: karti hain na..appki betiya...!!!
Geet: Mamma aap aise mujhey nehi dant sakte..apne kasam jo khayii hain...
pallavi: Dant nehi sakti na???
Geet: haan...
Pallavi: toh fir thik hain...tum 5cho ko aaj khana nehi milega...aaj ka khana band...
Shivanya: kiya???Paar mamma mujhey toh abhise bhuk lagrahi hain..main bhukhi nehi rehsakti...
Geet: Khana nehi milsakte...paar kairii toh milegi nah!!!
Parineeta: kuch nehi milegei...
Durga: Paar mamma aap aisa nehi karsakte???
Radhika:  kaar sakte hainn..humari hii betii ho na??
Geey: haan..
Radhika: Toh pher main aisa kar sakti hoon...
 Shivanya:uski maa ki taraf se nirash hoke: toh eye natak tha geey??
Geet: Aur nehi toh kiya..pr ek min. Aapne 5cho ka khaana band kyu kiya???...

Durga:haan... Unka kis liye. ..
Radhika:kyu tumhare saath woh bhi perh pr chadi or an bhi perh pr hain... Haina...
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An Sab perh ki or dekhte hain. . pr vaja koi nahi hota or fer teeno ki or...
Pr teeno bahno ko kuch samaj nahi aata...
Durga:aap perh pr kisko dhund rahe ho... 
Shivanya:haan!!!
Radhika:or kisko,,, Shilpa aur Anu  ko...

Du-shi-geet:kya???? Pr voh toh room mein hain humare saath nahi...

An Sab chilate hain:KYA????


Finish...
Ignore mistakes...

Precap:more fun in Rajvanshi family...
             Sister bonding...
            Armaan-shilpa,Anu-rishab,geet-maan face off...
         Boys family ask to get married their five sons to rajvanshi sisters. ..



Edited by shdiksha - 17 July 2016 at 4:24am

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Nice update 
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hey tht ws nice.short n sweet.gud job. [:-)]

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Short n sweet update
Loved it
Update soon
Precap is interesting
Thanks for pm

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Originally posted by sur1911

Short n sweet update
Loved it
Update soon
Precap is interesting
Thanks for pm
Thanku...
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[QUOTE=Dev_Dhakad]hey tht ws nice.short n sweet.gud job. [:-)][/QUOTE
Thanku..
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Originally posted by T.Peru

Nice update 
Update soon 
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