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Posted: 03 July 2016 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Amazing update
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Posted: 03 July 2016 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dev_Dhakad

Clap wow update ws fun seriously. Arsh moments bhi to dalo yr jaldi. Btw gud job n thx for pm. Smile


Thanku...
In next part their will be arsh...
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Posted: 10 July 2016 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sur1911

Amazing update
Loved it.
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
Thanku
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Posted: 10 July 2016 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by T.Peru

Nice update Thumbs Up
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Posted: 10 July 2016 at 3:58am | IP Logged
superb update
read all d part...
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Posted: 10 July 2016 at 5:38am | IP Logged
                           Part-5


Geet:ek min. Yeah kya kon sa ladka, tum ek ladke pr gir gayi, durga ko ladke me bachaya... Yeh kon se ladke aa gye hamare ghar...

Geet: kahi chor toh nahi...

Durga & shivanya: chor...

After this they start to see them from head- to- toe and toe toe-to-head with narrow eyes..
 After this shivanya: geetu aaj kal choro ka standard bhi high ho gya hain...

No one understand what she wants to say...

Geet:kya MATLAB???

Durga:of-oh geetu,,, shivanya ka MATLAB aaj kal chor bhi suit-boot mein chori krte hain... Dekh na in he dekh kr lagta hi nahi ki yeh chor honge...

Shivanya:haan... Koi bhi dokha kha jyega...

Geet:pta kro yeh log kon hai... Or kya kr rahe hain yaha... Actually roko mein hi dekhti ho... Tum log piche hatoo,,,, durr raho in logo se,, oata nahi kaise hai,, kaha se aaye hai... Ager enke pas hatyaar hue toh... Tum log durr raho...

Yeh sunn kr shivanya-durga unse durr ho jati hai...

Durga:ha... Es ladke ne mujhe giraya bhi that...(prithvi ki or ishara krte hue).

Prithvi:kyuki tum chilai thi...

Geet:hey u mister durr raho meri Behan se... Or himmat toh dekho ek toh chori krne aate ho dusro k ghar or aa kr un par hi doas jamate ho...       
     Tum roko Abhi police ko boolati hoo... Tum jaise logo se kaise nipatna hain yeah police ache se jaanti hain...

Durga:haan,,, yeah acha hai... Es tarah se kissi k ghar mein chori krna theek nahi hain...

Shivanya:dekhne mein toh theek lagte ho toh essa kam kyu kr rage ho...

Durga:haan,,, koi dhang ka kaam kro... Yeh chori vori mein kuch nahi hain...

Girls ko bar bar unhe chor kehta sunn...
Prithvi:dekhiye hum chor nahi hai...
Durga:har chor yahi kehta hain,,, ki usne chori nahi ki...

Itne mein
 
Durga kuch kehne lagte hain aur tabhi parineeta pichese jake uski kaan pakad leti hain..yeh hamare ghar mein mehman hain..tamij se baat karo..ek toh perh pe charo..upar se gir jao..aur pher uparse usi pe chillao jisne tumeh bachaya!!!

Durga: aa maamma..dard ho raha hain..choriye na..
Shivanya [jaise durga ki kaan pakarne se usse bhi dard hoo raha hoo]: haa choti mamma chor dije na!!

Parineeta:  chor doon?? Toh tu idhar aa tere kaan pakad leti hoo...

Shivanya [in low voliume]: Papa app kuch kahiye naa...Dada-dadi kaha hain!!!!!!!!

Pallavi: kise dund rahi hain tum???

Shivanya: kisiko nehi...

Pallavi:shivanya ki kaan pakarti huye...
 Dadi ko dund rahii hoo..jawab main deti hoo na...ajj dadi  nehi hain eha..wo andar hain... wo uneh urzently call krna tha... Acha hoa bahar nehi aye...

Shivanya[apne kaan pakarke]: aa mamma dard hoo raha hain...
Dayal: pallavi-parineeta chor do na..galti ho gayii..phir kabhi nehi karegii..hainna beta???

Durga: haa mamma- bhari maa phir kabhi nehi karungi...

Radhika: eye plan kiska tha??

Durga: kounsa plan??

Radhika: yeh perh pe charna...kisne kaha tha perh pe charne ko???

Durga: kiski kehne paar karungi..maine khud..nehi maine nehi..wo geetu ne kaha tha charne ko...

Geet: maine..!!..maine kab kaha tujhey per pe charne ko??..maine nehi kaha..issne khud...

Pallavi: toh insabke guru tum shaitan ho??

Shivanya: Nehi ma hum teeno ki galti hain..ekele uskii galti nehi hain...abb choriye na mamma..
Jaya: haa bhabi chor dije na..

Radha: haan bhabi ji...

Pallavi: thik hain tum dono ko chor denge..pehle bol  geet kaha hain...

Durga: Wo upar hain..apne uski ki baat nehi suni jab wo uparse baat kar rahi thi!!!

Parineeta durga ka kaan chorte huye: abhi bhi upar hain!!
Durga apne haato se apne kaan ko malish karte huye: haantoh kabhi naak...

Shivanya To durga: Tumne yej kya kiya..mamma toh abb geet ka barta bana degi??

Durga: shivi tension maat lo kuch nehi hoga..

Shivanya: main tujhse koyi baati hi nehi karungi.. papa kuch karo na abb mamma geet ko nehi choragi...

Dayal: don't  worry kuch nehi hoga..thora daant hii toh sunni hain use...

Dayal: Paar papa..

Sachin: agar jiyada daant parhi toh dadi hain na tum logo ki...
Durga: dekha maine kaha tha na ki usko bachane ke liye log hain...abhi agar uska ka naam nehi lete toh hamara barta baan jata..jab tak woh niche ayegii tab tak dadi yaha aa jayegii...aur wo geet ko bacha legi sab se...don't worry usko bachane k liye log hain...

Prithvi pichese: haan hain na..jaab tumharii tarha khatre main dhalne wali hain..toh pher bachane wala bhi toh koyi hona chahiye na!!!

Durga kuch nehi kehti bas gusse se uske taraf dekhte hain...
Idhar pallavi: geet..geet...geet...kaha hain tu..niche aa...abhi ke abhi...warna.

Geet apni maa ki bat sunke niche ki karekarm samajh jaati hain...aur bolti hain...mamma apko bhi kairi khana hain??..kahiye kounsa khana hain apko???..wo wali leke niche ati hoon...
Pallavi: mujhe koyi kairi nehi chahiye..tu chahiye...tera hiii aachaar banayungiii...tu niche aati hain ki nehi??
Geet: nehi...

Pallavi: kya!!!
Geet: haan..main nehi aa rahi hoo niche...agar apko upar aana hain toh app aa sakte hain...
Dadu: kiya huya aaja na niche...mera baccha...acha baccha...

Pallavi: dekha baba apne..kitni batmeez ho gayi hain eyeh ladki!!!..
Dadu: geet niche aa jao baccha...main yaha hoo.. mamma jiyada nehi dantengiii...
Shi-dur: haan geet niche aa jaa...

Dayal: mere pyarii beti niche aa ja..mamma kuch nehi kahegiii

Pallavi: Kisne kaha main usko nehi daantungi??main toh aaj usko ghar main hii ghusne nehi dungiii...
Dayal: main jaanta hoo na..main toh baas use niche bula raha tha..beta niche aa ja...teri mamma tujhe bohot dantenge...
Geet[haste huye]: papa main niche aaa sakti hoo..paar meri ek shart hain...
Dadu: shart hain??kaisa shart...
Geet: pehli shart ...mujhey koyii nehi dantega...
Durga to shivanya:  dekha shivi maine kaha tha na ki eye geey hain...
Shivanya durga ki taraf dekhte hain aur eek cute si smile deti hain...
Durga:aur bhi shart hain...
Feet: haan hain naa..pehle yeh wali maan le..pher dusra bataoungiii...
Pallavi: mujhey koyi shart manjoor nehi...
Geet: thik hain phir main yehi rahungii..niche nehi ayungii...
Sachin: maan lo na bhabhi wo niche nehi ayegi warna...
Pallavi kuch soochke:  thik hain...abb dudsra bol...
Geet: thik hain toh dusra shart aur saabse jaruri shart eye ki mujhey shivi,durga,anu aur Shona ko apko 5ch din denae parhege,woh 5ch din hum hamare marjii ke mutabek kuchbhi kar sakte hain...
Radhika-pallavi-pari: kiya!! Eye shart hum kabhi nehi mannege...kabhi nehi...
Geet: mamma ,badi maa, choti maa apne ser ki kasam hum koyi ulta sidha kaam nehi karenge..baas apse 5ch din mang rahi hoon..aur wo 5ch din appsaabko wohi karna padega job hum chahte hain...baas simple...
Radhika: yeh nehi ho sakta..
Parineeta:haan... Tum log sab ka jeena haram kr doogi,,, en 5ch dino mein...
Geet: thik hain..phir main nehi ati...
Rad-pal-paei phirse kuch soch ke...thik hain..maan liya...
Geet: abb ek kasam khayiiye ki app ne joo do promise mujhse ki ap wo do promise rakhengi..khayiye god promise...
Pallavi: humne maan to liya...abb promise ki kiya jarurat...
Geet: jarurat hain..warna app kabhi bhi palat jayenge..him apko bohot ache jante hain...warna main nehi ati niche...
Anjalu: geey aa jana niche maan to liya hain maa ne...
Shivanya:Bhabi app meri teeno maa aur aapki saas ko nehi jante..wo bohot khatarnak hain...  Humari maa hain na..
Eye sunke anjali chup ho jaate hain...
Dhariya: niche aa jaao geet..aab bohot huya...
Geet: nehi bhai..bilkul nehi...main niche nehi aa rahi  jaabtak mamma kasam  na khale...
Pallavi: hum nehi khayungii kasam..
Geet: thik hain pher main nehi ati niche...app chaho to upar aa jao...
Pallavi..assa dekh tu main kiya karti hoo..aashish upar jaa aur use niche leeke aa..
Geet: main janti thi naa app aisa khi kuch karenge paar kasam nehi khayenge...toh pher main boldeti hoo...agar koyi mujhey utarke le jane ke liye upar ata hain toh main jaha hoo  vaha se niche kudh jaungii..ab aap samajh hii sakte hain ki agar main eha se kudi toh mere Do do pair main se ek pair toh jarur tutega...aur shayed kabhi thik bhi na hoo...puri zindagi apki beti koo wheel chair pe baith na padega..you know double trouble for you...
Pallavi: koyii double trouble nehi hain kood niche tu..tu lagrii hii thik hain...
Pallavi: main janti thi app aisa hii kahengii mamma..paar iska bhi ek upai hain..agar main lagri hoo gayii na mamma toh aap teeno k sapno pe paani pher jayengii..
Parineeta: kounsa sapna!!!
Geet: apki betiyoon ki shadi!!!...Apki lagri, wheel chair ke saath chalne wali beti se koun shadi karega???
Pallavi: haan!!
Geet: haan mamma..aur pher meri shadi nehi hogi toh aap baki sab ki shadi kaise karwenge...waise main mana nehi karungii baki sab ko shadi karnese..paar woo mujhse pyar bohot karti hain na...mujhey chorke woo shadi nehi karegii...aur shivi ki abhi tak shaadi huyii nehi...Aur agar shivi ko ek baar eye samajh aa jaye ki hum charo ki shadi nehi hogi toh phir wo bhi kabhi shadi nehi karegii...I am quit sure about this mamma... isiliye kehrahii ho khalo na kasam..bachalo apni betiyoo ki shadi..waise mujhey shadi ka shouk nehii..aur main jantii hoo Baki kissi  ko bhi shadi nehi karni..paar apki choti beti meri chutki durga,,, usko Shadi ka bohot shounk hain..app uska dil maat toriye naa...
Durga:hawww!!!!!
Es se phele woh kuch kahe shivanya usko rokh deti hain...
Geet: Dekha maa Shadi nehi kar payegi eye soch ke hii bechari ghabra gayiii...
Pallavi: tu abhi niche aa...
Geet: haan main toh niche aana hii chahti hoo..paar app hi toh kasam nehi kharahi...upar se bhai ko upar bhej rahe hoo..toh main kood ke aa jao??
Parineeta: nehi...tu kudegi nehi..bilkul nehi..koi nehi aa raha upar..jaa khaliya humne kasam...
Geet: meri achi choti mamma..aise nehi apne durga maa ki kasam khao...
 
Eha sanju to naintara and arohi: kiya khatarnak ladki hain
Naintara: danth toh dur ki baad usne toh baaji hii palat dii..
Arohi: sanju tujhey pata hain eye ladki hamare Maan ke liye bilkul perfect hain...wo kiya hain na maan kisike baat nehi manta ek baar iske palle pad jaye to usko sidha karke choregiii..
Naintara: sahi kaha apne bhabi..Waise Samrat bhaiya ki Jodi daar bhi bohot achi hain...abb pehle eye rishta paakka ho jaye baad main maan ka dekhenge...
Naina: sahi kaha tune naintara...
Arohi: Aunty App chupke hamare baate sunrahii thii
Ananya:  jaise loud speaker pe bolrahe the shukar karoo Samrat Ya Maan main se kisine nehi suni..warna ho jata sare plans ka satyanash...
Piches Maan: kiss plan ka satyanash ho jata aunty???


To Be Continued...


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Edited by shdiksha - 10 July 2016 at 5:53am

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Posted: 10 July 2016 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Nice update
These girls are so craxy
 Their momis shocks
Update soon
 thanks for pm

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Posted: 10 July 2016 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sur1911

Nice update
These girls are so craxy
 Their momis shocks
Update soon
 thanks for pm
Thanku
Yes,,, these girls are so crazy...
Pr Abhi toh teen ki crazyness hain,,, jab 5ch saath hongi tab dekhna...

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