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               Part-3
The bus of rathore,khurana's and kundra's reached "ramanagare" at rajvanshi niwas...

Bus rajvanshi niwas k saamne khari hain...
Ramu kaka: chaliye ghar aa gya hain... Aap log aaiye main andar  sab ko btata hoon...

Vikrant rathore(v.r):ramu tum Sab se kaho hum aate hain...
Inside rajvanshi house:
Sab ghari ki aawaz sunte hain...
Mr. Vikram rajvanshi(Dada Ji):lagta hain vo log aa gye,chalo Bahar chalte hain...
Sab unke sawagat k liye bahar jaane lagte hain... 
Three ladies(mothers of our beautiful girls):ha..ha chalo,unhe intezaar krwana theek nahi...
Un teeno ko es tarah dekh Sab haste hain...
Ramu kaka unhe bahar aata dekh
Ramu kaka: voh log aa gye hain...
Dada ji: haan, toh chalo unke sawagat k liye...  Sawagat toh krna hain...
Dadi Ji: chalo-2 hum bhi bahar hi aa rahe hain...
Ghar k bahar youngest claim is busy in admiring in seeing the beauty of rajvanshi house... And thinking "bahar se heaven jaisa hain toh andar se kaisa hoga...
Baki sab:
Baba Ji(slowly): lo Bhai bahu aa gye tumhari bahu ko dekhne, kaisa lag raha hain...
Mrs. Jaya rathore(J.r): bahut hi acha baba sa,pr kya hum bahar se hi dekhege,andar chaliye na... Itna kya intazaaar krna...
Jaya ki yeh baat sunn Sab haste hain...
Ramnath(jaya k pati):pheli baar dekh dekh raha hoon kisi ko es tarah apni bahu ko le kr excited hota dekh..  
Ananya: rehne dijiye Bhai sahab aap nahi samjhe bye, ek maa k liye kya hoti hai uske bete ki shaadi.. 
Ram khurana: maan gye Bhabhi aap aurto ko,aap aurte dhanya hain...
Mohan: acha dhire boliye Sab piche hi hain.. 
Radha:zindagi mein pheli baar akhal ki baat ki hain...
Mohan: kya???
Ananya:bhaisahab ab aaplog larhna mat... Shub kaam k liye aaye hain... Shub-2 kariye...
Piche se ek awaaz aati hai
Haan... Achi-2 baate kijiye...



Edited by shdiksha - 18 June 2016 at 4:48am

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Sab piche dekhte gain... Raghuvander vaha apni family k saath khare hain...
Unhe dekh Charo dost unke gale lagte hai.   Fer Sab apni-2 wife's  ko unse introduce  krwate hai...
Vikrant rathore(v.r): yeah hai ananya merit wife, esse toh tum jante ho, yeah hai jaya, ramnath ki patni... Yeah naina hai Ram ki wife, or yeh radha Bhabhi hai mohan ki wife... Sab ek dusre ko milte hai... 

Rajvanshi family mein sab raj Dada Ji or dadi se aashirwad lete hai, enke baad seniors, yani ki dono Dada Ji aur dadi ek dusre k gale milte hai...
Dada Ji(girls side): kaise ho raj...
Baba sa( boys side): theek gain..  Tum btao Kaise hoo... India shift ho gye or btaya bhi nahi...
Dada Ji: dekho yeh sab baate baad mein krte hai...
Radhika(shilpa's mom): haan papa theek keh rahe hain, yeah baate baad mein bhi ho sakti hain... Phele ghar k andar chalte hain... Bache bhi hai saath mein...
Ananya: theek kaha Bhabhi aap me bhache bhi gain, PR chote nahi, badhe bache hain...
Parineeta: haan Bhabhi pr bacho se toh andar jaa kr bhi mil sakte hain...
Sab log rajvanshi mansion k andar jaate hain... Everyone is enjoying the view of beautiful mansion, but their is some doubt in our boys mind... Unke ankho mein jaise much khatak raha hoo...

Samrat: yr pata nahi mujhe bahot ajeeb lag raga hain...
Prithvi: won toh lage ga hi, ghar wale itna odd behave Jo kr rahe hai, jaise chuti manane beta ghori charane aaye hai... 
Rishab: sahi mein, kaha roz shaadi shaadi ki chik chik hoti thi, ab toh Sab ko saap shung gya hain.. pr chalo ek baat achi hai ghar mein shanti ho gyi...
Maan: beta zyada mat bol, yeah shanti toofaan k aane we phele ki bhi ho sakti hai...
Armaan: or yeah toofaan khatrnak bhi ho Sakta hai... Es liye savdaan rehna chahiye...
Andar jaate hai ananya sab ko introduce krwati hai...
Ananya: maaji yeah hai mera barha beta armaan, fer yeah arjun aur arohi uski patni, fer abeer aur viren twins...
Jaya:yeah dono mere bete hai samrat air prithvi... Samrat 5 min. Barha hain...
Naina: yeh hai maan mera barha beta aur fer dev air naintara uski patni...
Radha: yeah aamir hai uski patni SANJU aur voh mera chota beta rishab... 
Baba sa: air bacho yeah rajvashi family hain or yeah tumhare dada Ji or dadi hai...
Sab unhe parnam krte hai...
Dada-dadi: khush raho bacho...
Dadi: Baku ki baate baad mein phele fresh ho jao..  Safar se aaye ho... Baho Sab ko unke rooms dekha do...
Dayal: aao mohan hum aap Sab ko rooms dekhata hoon... 
Aur ladies bacho ko unke rooms mein...
Sab rooms mein jaane lagte hai...
Parineeta: couples ko unke rooms dekhati hai...( aam-san, dev-nai, arj- aro)...
Pallavi:abeer- viren yeah tum dono ka room hai, dono room share kr loge na...
Viren: are aunty aap fikar mat kro him toh bachpan se saath hai...
Abeer: haan aunty, aur ager problem hui toh bta denge...
Radhika: rishab, samrat aur prithvi yeh room tum teeno ka hai... 
Rishab: okay aunty...
Radhika: armaan, maan beta esse aage tumhara room hai...
Armaan: okay aunty .. Ab hum dekh lenge aap rest kijiye...
Pallavi: fresh hokar niche aa jana, nashte k liye...bookh lagi  hogi...
Maan: voh toh lagi hai...
Rishab: bahut lagi hai...
Radhika: toh jaldi niche aana...

Thori der mein Sab niche aate hain...

Sab hall mein baithe hai, tab vaha anjali, sonarika air kumkum naashta le kr aate hai unke saath unke husband dhairya, aashish air sumit bhi hote hain unke piche esha, kirti, vikas, karan,gaurav aur shub hain... Sab naashta table PR rakhte hai..  Unke saath dai maa bhi hai...
Unko dekh arohi radhika se in sab k baare mein puchti hai...
Radhika: yeah mera barha beta dhairya aur anjali uski patni, fer gaurav aur fer karan chota beta...
Pallavi: yeah aashish gain near beta aur voh uski patni sobarika. Or yeah hai esha meri beti air usjke pati vikas. . 
Parineeta: yeah hai sumit mera beta aur uski patni kumkum, meri beti kirti aur shub uske pati...
Radhika: aur yeah hai dai-maa...

Sab unse milte hain...
Fer sab baate krne mein busy ho jate hai... PR in sab mein armaan,maan,samrat,rishab aur prithvi bekar mein faase hue hai...pr in logo ki baate khatan hi nahi ho rahi...
Pallavi:aap log aaye hamme acha laga...
Jaya:air Hume as kr bahut acha laga...
Ananya,jaya,naina aur radha apni bahu k baare mein soch rahi hain... Or voh ishare se apne husband's ko samrat me liye jisse dekhne aaye hain uske baare mein puchne ko kehte hai...
Ramnath dayal se...
Ramnath: dayal tumhari aur sachin ki aur bhi beti hain na...
Dayal: haan... Hain toh sahi... Or ek nahi do betiyaan meri hai... Do hi sachin ki aur ek beti raghu Bhai ki bhi hai ghar ki sabse choti...
Ramnath: kya???? (Question look se  raghuvandre ki or dekh kr)
Es se phele koi much Kahe...
Raghuvandre: haan... Mujhe pta hain meine galat kiya yeh baat chupa kr ki merit koi beti hai, pr mein kya krta us waqt mein kuch nahi kr saka...
Sab unhe question look dete hain...
Vikrant: kyu essa kya hua...
Raghuvander: tum toh jaante ho, mein hamesha chahta that ki meri bhi beti ho apni beti aur jab hui mein bahoot khush tha sab ko btaana chahta that pr meri beti k heart mein kuch problem thi usko saans lene mein bhi problem hone lagi es liye doctors ne Europe mein treatment btaya or him vaha shift ho gye... Itni mushkil se meri ek beti hai, mein usko khona nahi chahta that es liye be nahi as paya...
Sab ko unki baato se pta chalta hai ki voh apni beti se kitna pyaar krte hoonge...
Ram: acha chal maaf kiya... Yeah toh btao ki naam kya hai or kaha hai him bhi dekhe tumhari beti ko...
Raghuvandre: haan... Haan kyu nahi, uska naam shona hai... (Sab k question look dekh kr) 
Mera matlab hain ki "shilpa"... 
Ananya: barha hi pyaar naam hain... 
Naina: haan... 
Jaya:pr kya aapki betiyaan nahi aayi...( innocent look pass krte hue jaise unhe sach mein nahi pta)...
Pallavi: nahi nahi aayi hain na... Apne room mein hai...
Parineeta: jao anjali, kumkum, sonarika Pancho ko boola lao...
Anjali: Ji abhi aate hai...
Yeah kh kr voh girls k room mein jaati hai...

After 15 mins.

Anjali, kumkum air sonarika niche aati hai...
Unhe akele aata dekh...
Radhika: kya hya anjali, voh sab kaha hai...
Anjali: maa... Voh Pancho room mein nahi hai...
Pallavi: kya???
Sonarika: haan maa... Voh vaha nahi hai...
Parineeta: toh ghar mein dekho yahi kahi hongi...
Kumkum: maa humne har jagah dekha voh kahi nahi hai...
Ab sab ladies saath mein: kya...
Yaha boys apni moms ko es tarah react krta dekh...
Armaan: relax mom aap kyu chilayi...
Ananya: mein kaha chillayi..  Mein toh bas esse hi...
Radhika:dekha meine kaha that na yeah ladhkiya aafat hai... Ab kaha dundhe inhe...
Kumkum: badhi maa, relax aap bathiye hum hum dekhte hai...
Anjali: haan... Aap tension mat lo hun dekhte hai...
Radhika: dhairya, aashish, summit tum Sab bhi jao or unhe dhoodho... 
Pallavi : aaj aane doo, btati hoo...
Parineeta: chodhe ge nahi inhe...



Part Finish...
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Edited by shdiksha - 18 June 2016 at 3:11am

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Nice story n update
Uff kitne characters the yad karne mai hi time lag gaya but now fine
Love this story n all character
Shil is Jaan of all wow
Update soon 
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Nice update 
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Clap Gr8 job..update ws nice.go wth it. Smile
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                   Part- 4

Radhika: dhairya,Aashish,Summit tum log bhi jao dekho kaha hain Pancho...
Pallavi: aaj aane doo,btati hoo...
Parineeta:chodhe gye nahi in he...
Dadi ji:bahu tum teeno merit potiyo k baare mein sochte hi jhansi ki rani kyu ban jaati ho...
Bachiya hain abhi...
Radhika: maa unki umar mein hamare bache ho gye the...
Anjali: maa... Aap shaant rahiye... Hum dekhte hain...
Raghuvandre:radhika shant raho... Yahi kahi hongi... Tum log jante ho unhe jitna bandne ki rokne ki koshish krogi utna hi voh a age aayegi... Unhe chor do na... Jeene do apni zindagi...vaise bhi kal ko jab unki shaadi ho jayegi toh yeah Sab tum log hi miss krogi apni betiyoon ko..
Radhika:aap toh rehne hi dijiye...
Aap teeno kaha kum gain... Aap ne hi baraya hain enhe... Vaise choriye aapse kya baat krna...

Aise mein ek 14 saal ka ladka haath mein ek tokri kairi leke aata gain... Air bolta hain Massa shivanya Di ne yeh kairi bheji hain... Sab k liye...
Es se phele vo ladka kuch Kahe...
Pallavi:ajay tumhe yeh kairi shivanya ne dii...
Ajay:haan...
Parineeta:kaha hain woh...
Ajay:WO aapki garden mein joh kauri ka perh hain us par...
Radhika:kya??? Hey bhagwan...kya kre in ladkiyon ka hum...
Fer ajay se...
Aur woh uski behne voh bhi vaha hain...
Ajay:Baki bhi vahi hain...
Ananya:perh PR...
Ajay:haan...
Shivanya Di perh se neeche aa gyi hain...baaki Sab upar hain...
Radhika:aap dekhna maa aaj in Pancho ka kya krte hain hum...
Pallavi: aur aap mat rokna aaj...
Parineeta: bolo koi krta gain essay...
Dadi Ji: PR Pancho kyu shivanya toh neche hai... 
Pallavi: aapni behno ko toh upar chadne diya...
Radhika:or shona usko toh pehle hi chot aayi hain,or an perh pr hain...
Fer Sab garden mein jaane lagte hain...
      Yaha garden mein ek ladki adhe khule baaloo mein green colour top aur black jeans mein aasman ki aur dekh rahi hain...
Green top girl:durga lagta hain baarish hogi... Kitne saare baadal hain aasmaan mein... Geetu tujhe milli wo kairi??? Jaldi-2 torho... Ager humari maa ko pta chal gya toh pta nahi kya kregi humare saath...durga dyaan se ger jaogi... Dyaan se kro...
Upar se koi ladki pink tank top and white jeans mein...
Pink top girl:yr sach kaha mujhe bhi lahta hain ki gir hi jaogi...
Shivanya:kya kr rahi hain dhyaan se kr girna mat... Ache se tahni ko pakar kr upar chad... Kya kr rahi ho.. Tum na niche gir jaogi es tarah..  Tum niche aa jao.. Geet le  ayegi kairi tumhare liye... Aao jao niche...
Upar se ek or ladki: yellow top &blue jeans mein... Shivanya theek keh rahi hain durga tum neeche jao mein tumhare liye kauri laati hop jao tum...
Shivanya:haan durga tum aa..  Won me aayegi...
An shivanya k peeche se koi bolta hain: shivanya tum yaha kya kr rahi ho, tum bhi jao chalo apni bheno ki tarah perh PR neeche utarne ka kasht kyu kiya...
Parineeta:durga tum bhi upar hi rehna warna aaj tumhari bhi kher nahi...
Apni maa ko es tarha chilata sunn durga aur shivanya gabra jaate hain...
Shivanya piche dekhne Lahti hain pr es chakar mein apna balance kho deti hain...
Usse balance khota dekh samrat ki maa Maya niche girne ka naatak krti hain jisse dakha lagne se samrat aage aa kr shivanya ki taraf jata hain...
Samrat ko achanak Dhaka lagne se usko much samaj nahi aata or woh balance khoti shivanya samrat k upar gir jaati hain...
Eha Samrat aur shivanya ki najar milti hain..najar milte hii wo dono kahi kho jate hain...
Aur baakisab families baas eye scene enjoy karne lagte hain...
Aur tabhi upar se durga shivanya  ki girne ki awaj sunke aur Ghabra jati hain..aise ghabrahat main Apne hat se pakdi huyi per chor deta hain aur niche girne lagta hain..durga ko girte dekh maan Rishab voh dekh voh ladki gir rahi hain...
Prithvi dourke per ki niche jate hain... Prithvi niche girne wale durga ko pakar leta hain...Aur durga apni Akhe band karke baaas chillane lagti hain...Use lagta hain ki wo per se utarke jamin pe giregi toh mar jayegi...
Idhar rishab,prithvi,maan Aur armaan uski chillanese boukla jate hain
Rishab to prithvi: eye aise kyun chilla rahe hain??
prithvi: pata nehi kyun...
Aur nichese durga ki chillane ki awaj sunke Uparse geet: kiya huya durga???
Maan: eye koun hain..per pe toh koyii aur nehi dikhraha...
Armaan: pata nehi..shayed koyi bohot upar hoga...
Abb prithvi ki god se durga :main mar gayii dii..main toh mar hii gayii...
Geet: kiya!!!kaha hain tu???
Geet: pehle apne akhe khol aur mujhey bata tu kaha hain!!main aati hoo tere paaas...
Durga: agar main maar gayi toh tum mere paas kaise ayoge??!!
Geet: tu pehle apna akhe khol..aur shivanya kaha hain??
Durga: main kaise bolu..bola na meri akhe band hain...
Geet:tum aanke khilo aur dekho shivanya kaha hain, uske girne ki awaz aayi thi...
Durga: aaista-2 apni eyes open krti hai aur rishab ko dekhti hain..
PR geet ki awaz se woh Josh mein aati hain or jor se chilati hain...
Durga:aaah...
Uske es tarah chilane se prithvi darr jaata hain or apne haath piche kheech leeta hain... Jiski wajha se durga niche ger jaati hain.. 
Durga:o maa.. 
Or fer voh dekhti hain ki yeah unke ghar ka garden hain itne mein uske girne se shivanya bhi uske pass aati hain...
Dono behne ek dusre ko hug krti hain...
Durga: kya hua tum kaha thi
...
Shivanya usko batati hain ki ...
Kuch der phele...
Jab woh apna balance khoti hain tab...
Shivanya durga k neeche girte hi "aah"ki awaj sunke apne scene main aa jate hain...aur Samrat ki upar se uthne ki koshish karti hain paar uth nehi pati uske upar phiir gir parti hain..shivanya pher uthne ki koshish karti hain..paar pher samrat ki upar gir parta hain...Aur aise main use gussa aa jata hain..aur wo samrat ki upar chilla parta hain..koun hain app??aur eha kiya hain???kiya hain Sidhe nehi reh sakte??mujhey eha se uthna hain...Ajeeb admi hain...kisne kaha tha meri pische ake khare hone ko...
Samrat: dekhiye main apke piche nehi khara huya tha..wo toh baas achanak...
Shivanya: Assa toh app mere piche nehi the??maine toh dundke nikala aapko!!!
Samrat[shockingly]: Kiya!!!
Shivanya[gusse se]: wo aapke upar girna tha na mujhey...
Samrat:hello..mujhey bhi girne ka shouk nehi..wo main toh baas apki madad...
Shivanya: haa kitni madad ki wo main dekh hii rahii hoon...
Aise main gusse se Samrat shivanya ki  alag karta hain aur dono khare hoo jate hain..khare hone ke baad jaab shivanya chalne lagta hain..aur uski first step main hii gar bar ho jate hain aur wo firse girne lagte hain..paar issbaar Samrat use sahise pakar leta hain..aur use girnese bachata hain...ehape un dono ka Akhe fir ekbaar milta hain...
Jaya aur ananya khush ho jati han unki eye look dekhke..
Jaya: bhabhi mere samrat  ki biwi toh mil hii gayii..mere Samrat ke liye eye bilkul sahi hain...
Ananya: haa bhabi..bohot ache lagege saath main dono...
Es tarah shivanya keh kr innocent look se durga ki or dekhne Lagti hai...
Or durga jor -2 se hasne lagti hain...
Geet bhi Jo ko perh pr hain...
Geet:shivi durga ka to samaj aata hai perh pr se gir gayi pr tum zamin pr se hi gir gayi...
Hahaha...
Shivanya: haso nahi, mein nahi giri hoti ager voh ladka nahi aata bich mein...
Geet:ek min. Yeah kya kon sa ladka, tum ek ladke pr gir gayi, durga ko ladke me bachaya... Yeh kon se ladke aa gye hamare ghar...
Geet: kahi chor toh nahi...
Durga & shivanya: chor...



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Edited by shdiksha - 08 July 2016 at 10:44am

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Nice update Thumbs Up
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Clap wow update ws fun seriously. Arsh moments bhi to dalo yr jaldi. Btw gud job n thx for pm. Smile

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