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arsh ff:golmal part 8 update (Page 2)

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:06am | IP Logged
                 Chapter -1

'Ramanagare' 150km dur from 'kadarkanal' district...(south India)

Ashram mein  3 families ek saath apni chuti mana rahe hai...its rathore,khurana & khundra families...they knows each other from long time...
they have a great bonding with each other...
Vikrant rathote,ramnath r brothers and their family knows khurans and khundra's from their families but they r best friends from college time...
And their wife's has a great bonding with each other two...
Vikrant rathore has 4 sons and 1 daughter... 1st armaan then triplets arjun,abheer,viren...
And then simran...arjun is married to arohi..
Then vikrant younger brother family 
Ramnath rathore has 2 sons
Samrat and prithvi...

Ram khurana has 2 sons...1st Maan then dev...
Dev is also married to naintara...

Then khundra family...
they have 2 sons...rishab and aamir...
Aamir is married to SANJU...(love marriage)

Ab yeah sab families apne beto ke future life decide krne k liye mil rahi hai...
Mrs.rathore,mrs. Khurana,mrs. Khundra are damn worried about their sons future lifes...

Maya:radha Ji humare is plan mein koi garbar toh nahi hogi na...
Anger hogyi toh kya hoga..  Humare bete shaadi toh nahi PR gusse mein or kuch jaroor kr denge...
Radha:garbar honi toh nahi chahiye...par kuch keh nahi sakte...humare beto ka koi bharosa nahi hai...
PR baat toh yeah hai ki inhe apni shaadi se problem hai na ki dusro ki...
Or rahi baat plan ki toh yeah Sab humne phele try nahi kiya toh plan ko koi khatra nahi hona chaiye...

Naina khurana:haan...yeah baat toh hai...par Mara beta much garbar na kr de...gussa toh bas uski naak PR rehta hai...par dev k liye bhagwan ka shukar krti hoon ki voh apne Bhai ki tarah nahi hai varna sambalna muskil ho jata...

Ananya:cause gusse mein hamare bete bhi kam nahi hai...fer bhi mujhe lagta hai ki koi varbar nahi hogi...or safety k liye baaki bacho ko bta diya hai taki voh hamari madad kre... 

Jaya:bhagwan kre vaha Sab theek hoo...
 Vikrant:Bhabhi aap chinta mat kro vaha Sab theek hi hoga...Bas aap Sab apni tayari kr lijiye...vaha PR plan krne ka moka nahi millega...

Ram:haan vaha ja kr plan krne ka samay nahi hoga..  
             Waise ek k liye bahu dekhne ja rage hai kya pta kitni mil jaye...
Or toh or humare be to k liye perfect hai .   
Naina:kya MATLAB??????
Ramnath:kyuki voh  humare veto se kam nahi hai ...
Ananya:MATLAB????
Ramnath unhe MATLAB samjane lagte hai...tabhi sab vaha as jaate hai or puchte hai ki kis baat ka MATLAB samjaya ja raga hai...
Naina:bacho MATLAB samajna choro or plan k barre mein socho much garbar na ho...or joh bhi discuss krna hai yehi kr lo vaha jaa kr time nahi milega.   
Arohi:aunty aap fikar mat kijiye...sab theek hoga...or him Sab hai naa... 
Naintara:haan...  Or es baar hum Sab samrat ko saathphero mein ghumakr hi ghar lowtenge.   Aap fikar mat kijiye...
Ananya:yeah hui na baat...vaise yeah Pancho hai kaha...
Arjun: voh Sab ghumne nikle hai...jaldi aa jayege... 
Vikrant:unhe yaad toh hai na ki aaj Hume rajvanshi farm house Jana hai...
Viren:haan...dad unhe yaad hai...voh aa jayege...
Mohan:vaise vikrant samrat ki shaadi k baare mein baki chaaro ko kyu nahi bataya.woh madat krte...
Radha:won Charo madat krte...aap theek toh hai na...
Ram:kyun...unhe apni shaadi se problem hai...naki dusro ki...toh fikar krne ki kya baat hai...
Raj rathore(Dada Ji):x-conole army officer..   
           Meine mana kiya that...

Unhe dekh sab khare ho jate hai...or Bas dekhte rehte hai...
 Are kya dekh rahe hoo...
Are kya dekh rahe hoo...are kya pta ek dekhne ja rahe hai kitni mil jaye...
Sab ladies excited ho kr.   
Kya MATLAB...
Kya essa ho sakta hai...
Arohi-naintara:haan...kya aisa hi sakta hai????
Vikrant:haan!!!baba aisa kaise hoga!!!!
Dadi Ji:haan assa Kaiser hoga...
Dadaji:are tum log bhul bye uss ghar ki 7 betiya hai...
2 ki toh shaadi hao gyi hai or bachi 5...
Toh ho gyi na...
Sab...5 betiyaan...yeh sun kr Sab k mann mein ek hi baat hai ki ager 5 ki shaadi ek saath ho jaye toh... 
Vikrant:7 betiyaan... Kaise baba...mere hissab se toh 6 honi chaiye...
Ram:ha...sachin or aashish ki 6 beetiyan hai...toh 7 Kaise hui... 
Dada Ji:7 betiyaan...raghuvandra ki ek beti bhi toh hai...
Yeah suun kr Sab shosked ho jaate hai...
Specially 4 fends... 
Raghuvander ki koi beti bhi hai yeah unhe pta hi nahi tha...PR voh khush hai kyuki unho be dekha tha ki unka fend ek beti hamesa se hi chahta tha...
Dada Ji:Mujhe pta hai tum log kya soch rahe ho...es liye Bhai yeah toh mujhe bhi nahi pta ki in Sab ne yeah baat kissiko kyu nahi batayi pr yeh sach hai...jab mein 7 ssal phele ek conference k liye Europe gya that toh vaha mein in Sab se milla tha or tab mujhe pta chala ki raghu ki ek beti bhi hai...
Bahut hi pyaari bachi hai...sirf bahar se hi nahi Mann se bhi sundar hai...
Sab unhe dekh kr shocked hote hai...kyuki unho be aaj she phele kabhi bhi unhe es tarah kissi ki tarrif krte nahi dekha...

Dada ji:ananya...vaise shilpa armaan k liye perfect hai...armaan ko seeda kr degi... 
Or tumhare armaan ko toh use pyaar ho hi jaye ga...
Dekh Lena...or armaan ko seeda kr degi...
Baki Sab bhi theek hi hoga...
Sab khush ho kr specially ananya
Ananya:sacj baba!!!essa ho sakta hai...aap keh rahe hai toh ladki achi hi hogi...
Pr kya voh shaadi k liye tayaar hai...
Dadi ji:haste hai...bas ananya vaise tum logo ko samrat ki haan ka intzaar hai...ladki ka kya usne haan krdi hai kya????
Vikrant:kya MATLAB???
Dada Ji:hasne lagte hai...
Dadi Ji:aap hass kyun rahe hai????
Dada ji:jiss ladki ko hum dekhne jaa rahe hai...voh toh tab haan kregi jab usse pta hoga ki him usko dekhne jaa rahe hai..  
Sab:haa????ShockedShockedShocked
Dada ji:haan...vaha bhi joor dhaar drama chal raha hai...

Dada ji sab ladies ko...
Dada ji:vaise meine Jo bhi dekha or jaana hai un 5 sisters ko 7 saal phele us hisaab se perfect hai tumhare beto k liye...
Tum logo k beto ko seeda kr dengi...
Ananya:sach...essa ho sakta hai...
San ladies:haan...kya essa ho sakta hai...
Dada ji:haan...Bhai essa ho sakta hai...
Pr ager ladki haan kre toh...
Vikrant:pr Hume kyu nahi pta ki raghuvandra ki koi beti hai...
Yeh sunn kr ram-mohan-ramnath ko choar kr San hasne lagte hai...
Fer dada ji khud ko control kr...
Dada ji:Bhai yeh toh nahi pta...tum log khud hi apne best frnd se pooch Lena...
Fer sab doobara vikrant ki or dekh kr hasne lagte hai...


Precap:girls reach 'ramanagare' village...
              Shilpa met with accident...



Kaisa laga... 
Boring hai ya jaisa bhi but rply fast... 
Rply fast...




Edited by shdiksha - 23 April 2016 at 12:40am

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Hii
Sorry for late update...
I hope u guys like it.. . 
   
                                 Part - 2

Sab girls apni destination pr pouhoch jati hain... Unke village se 15 km phele ek station aata hain...voh Pancho vahi pouhoch gayi hai...
Vaha pr unke liye car liye ramu kaka wait kr rahe hai... Aur unke saath chandni... Ramu kaka air chandini rajvanshi family mein caretakers hain... Station pr utar kr voh Sab apni car se apne garh jaaiyegi...
Sab apne bags lekar train se bahar aati hain... Or vaha ka view enjoy krne lagti hai...
Anu:ahh... Yaar I miss this place...
Geet: yaha ki hawa mein alag si kashish hai...
Shilpa:(kuch sochte hue) yaha ki har cheez mein kuch alag baat hain...
Durga-shivanya:shona kya baat hain...
Shilpa:ease hi kuch yaad aa gya tha...yeh ramukaka nahi Sikh rahe..  .. Shayad station k bahar ho...
Chalo bahar chalte hain...
Sab bahar chalte hain...
Thori der mein ramu kaka vaha as jaate hai... Unki car road ki opposite site pr hoti hain... 
Sab girls unse blessing leti hain... 
Ramukaka:khush rahiye... Kaisi hai aap Sab... Or safar Kaise raha...
Geet:kaka hum theek hai or safar bhi acha raha...
Kaka:toh aap Sab ghar jaaiye...
Shilpa:hum ghar jaaye MATLAB aap nahi aa rahe saath...
Ramu kaka:voh mujhe ashram jaana hai... Kuch kaam hain...
Shivanya:toh hum bhi saath chalte hai...
Ramu kaka:nahi...
Durga:kyu nahi...
Ramukaka:voh mujhe raaste mein much kaam hain...
Es liye aap Sab jaaiye...
Shilpa:theek hain... Toh aap driver bhaiya ko saath le jaaiye... 
Ramukaka:pr beta aap...
Anu:him theek hain or drive bhi kr sakte hain...
Ramukaka:theek hain beta... Chandni tumhare saath jaayegi...
Geet:theek hain...
Sab car mein baith jaati hai...
Shilpa:arre paani nahi hai...
Aap Sab roko mein station se paani laati hoon...
Shilpa paani lene jaati hain...
Durga:kaka aap jaaiye,shilpa k aate hi hum chale jaayege...

Ramukaka:koi baat nai beetiyan him aap k jaane k baad chale jaayege. ...
Sab shilpa ko aate dekhte gain,voh pH pr kissi se baat kr rahi hoti hai... 
Ki achanak kissi k dakha Dene se voh gir jaati hai...
Shilpa:ahh...
Sab shilpa k pass jaate hain...
Beedh mein se aap kaise gir gyi...
Shilpa:shayad dakha lagne se...
Ek bacha:sry Didi voh meri vajha se aao gir gyi... 
Shilpa:its OK...
Shilpa Sab ko jaane ko kehti hai...
Anu:kaka yeah  medicine le aayiye...
Sab shilpa ko car mein me jaate hain...
Ramu kaka medicine laate hai or shilpa ko dete hai...
Anu:kaka aap jaaiye him bhi jaate hai...

 In ashram:
Rathore,khurana aur kundra family Pancho boys ko daanth rage hote hai...
Jaya:tum pancho k pancho nikame hoo...
Radha:haan... Jab pta hain ki hum rajvanshi house jaa rahe hai toh kyu bahar gye the...
Naina:Bhabhi aap enhe kyu danth rahi hai...
Galti toh maan ki hai...
Ananya:mera beta toh doidh ka doolha hain...
Haina
Boys en Sab se pareshaan hota dekh
Dadi Ji:bacho jao jaldi se tayaar hoo jao hum late ho jayege nahi toh 
Fer sab boys ashram k andar jaate hain...  
Bahar garden mein Sab gents baate kr rahe hote hain...
Tabhi vaha ramukaka aate hain...
Sab ramu se milte hain...
Ramu kaka:naaf kijye ga late hoo gya... Station pr gya tha
Ananya:station kyu????
Ramukaka:Voh aaj beetiyan as rahi thi toh...
Jaya:toh kya voh nahi aayi...
Ramukaka:nahi voh aayi hain na bas thori garbar hoo gyi...
Naina:kya hua sab theek hain na...
Ramu:Ji voh baaki toh theek hai pr shilpa beti ko chot lag gayi...
Ananya:kya chot lag gyi...
Ramu:haan...
Vikrant:toh aap yaha kyu aaye hum khud aa jaate...
Ramu:koi baat nahi or vaise bhi shilpa k saath uski behne hai... Behno mein bahot pyaar hain...

In girls car...
Chandni baate krti hi jaa rahi hain...
 Sab sochti hain ki yeh chandni kitni baate krti hain...

At 4:00pm
Girls apne ghar pahoch jaati hain...
Voh apni family se multi hai...
Shilpa ko daanth Parthia hai... Khud ko me kr careless behaviour k liye..  
Fer Sab girls apne room mein jaati hai rest k liye...
 Girls k jaane k baad
Dadaji:sach kehte hain ghar ki roonak toh betiyaan hoti hai.. .
Sach yeah ghar mein na ho toh ghar ghar nahi rehta...
Anjali:dadaji an toh aa gyi hai ab kahi nahi jaayegi...

Dadi Ji:nahi beta jaayegi na,apne ghar... . apne sasural...
Fer sab kaam mein lag jaate hai... Aakhir guest job as rage hain...



Precap:
               Boys reach rajvanshi house...
                         Girls vs boys
                Shilpa punch on Armaan face...
Boys family impressed with girls...




Yr boring hain...
Ya pasand nahi hai 
Response toh doo...
Aged achi nai lagi toh discontinue kr doogi...
But plz rply me...






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