SWASAN OS:FULFILLING HER DREAMS...completed......on page 1.... (Page 9)

pakh IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by krishuuu

Kirti dear..
wow fabulous yr..second part was great...waiting for next part...

Update soon...
Thanks TaliaBig smileBig smile...for liking and commenting...updating now only completed...Embarrassed

pakh IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Goldie93

Awsum yaar..loved it..plzz pm me da nxt part..cnt wait..
Thanks goldie for liking it and commenting...Big smileBig smile...updating now...
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Asad08

This is just awesom!!!!!! Love it... Can you plz pm me the next parts
Thanks dear for such a lovely comment...will do...Big smileBig smileBig smile
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 4:13am | IP Logged
updated complete osBig smileBig smile
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Res.. Kriti.. I have three parts to read.. Unres will be delayed one.. Bear with me.. ;-)

Unres . finally... Big smile

Ohh man kriti.. What an updates... Just loved it each and every scenes were awesome one... Ohh Sanskaar plan for gifting her... Her dream.. No his dream too.. Aww soo beautiful.. Written dear... Clap .. I loved the family bonding and understanding too... That birthday celebration.. At midnight.. Then everyone gift were superb and thoughtful too.. Ohh suju gave little Krishna doll... Tongue ... Aww then sanskriti.. Came.. Sanskaar+kriti= Sanskriti...LOL ... Aww man.. Wink ... Finally trio.. Was happy.. Mee too.. Thanks for this babes.. I want this in the serial too...

Love you...

Kam... Wink

Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 22 April 2016 at 12:51pm
Esha012 Goldie

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 4:54am | IP Logged
awesome updates Clap loved it
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 5:25am | IP Logged
awesome story...! Clap its beautiful... aww sanskar he is so perfect. a pure gem Star I wish I find someone like him someday. anyway back to your story I loved each n every character they were all real n nice. loved your story n thanks a lot for writing it so beautifully. Embarrassed
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Kirti res for now because 3 parts read karna hai and i am very slow reader LOL
But you are very fast writer story bhi complete kar di very good Wink
Finally i am unressing my comment
Sorry for late unres Ouch

Kriti "Beautiful story has because end" this lines is truly suit in this story Embarrassed

Part-3 " Wow finally sanskar got succeed in reading that scrapbook. It was lovely scene when he was promising to his sleeping beauty wife Wink that he will fulfill her dreams Embarrassed i really that scene and sanlak manofying their wife's was also nice LOL

Part-4" swara is really a bak bak machine ROFL why swara thought that sanskar will romance in open field aere terrace pe jo kiya wohi kaafi aur asanskari baate na socha karo Blushing LOL and that surprise from sanskar was really a superb one Day Dreaming and family supporting his decision was awesome one Clap

Part-5" Finally the surprise is revealed to swara Day Dreaming and i was actually imaging swara happy face Embarrassed
And this lines "T HAT WAS OUR DESTINY SANSKAR...DESTINY WHICH WANTED US TO MEET AND TO BECOME ONE...DESTINY WHICH MADE US CROSS EACH OTHER'S PATHS LATER TO MAKE THAT PATH ONE FOR BOTH OF US ON WHICH WE BOTH ARE WALKING TODAY ...TOGETHER... HAND IN HAND AND I PROMISE TO DO IT FOR ...FOREVER...AND I KNOW U TOO WILL DO" i loved it Day Dreaming and thank you for not showing pari jealousy part and ragini is so understanding in this story. And finally the last song scene was very lovely Embarrassed

Epilogue was totally beautiful and finally ger dreams succeed Embarrassed

Truly a beautiful story Clap i loved it
Beautifully written Clap
Thanks for pm
Do write more please Embarrassed

Edited by Sujayricky - 03 May 2016 at 2:28pm

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