SWASAN OS:FULFILLING HER DREAMS...completed......on page 1.... - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome :)
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res...
unres..
sorry for the delay love...
keerthi can I just hug u for the concept? m gonna do it anyway,๐Ÿค—

I seriously love u for choosing this plot...CVS are not using such a potential track...hopefully in future they do...
loved loved swara's monologue...how concerned she was for his wellbeing...him not having food on time...
how efficiently she moulder herself as perfect daughter in law, wife , daughter...all in one...
its time for swara the rockstar to come back...
part 2
sanskar knew she was reminscing old days..he could read her feelings so easily...shows the intensity of his love...
lets see how he will fulfill her dreams...
update soonish...thanks for the,pm love... ๐Ÿค—Edited by sharif_lafungi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice start & concept. I wish we can see something like this in the show. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Kirti,
A very nice OS - do update quickly. And do PM about the updates๐Ÿ˜Š

Best,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful OS dear Kriti. Continue soon.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb start buddy...loved it...and thanks for the pm..
Loved swara care and concern for sanky and they way she makes him her top priority...

I hope she gets her dream soon... ;)

Waiting for more raz
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kirti dear..
Today i was bored in forum..not many stories updated...which i love...your OS was sooo wonderful...enjoyed it alot...

Will wait for other parts...

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 92Sara

Awesome Update Kirti.
Loved Swara's Pov here where she completely Ignored her Dreams in order to Fulfill the Responsibilities and to be a Good Bahu,Daughter and a Good Wife.
I so Love the way how SwaSan understand eachother and become eachother's biggest Strength and Support.
Swara's Anger is Justified for being Careless abt Health and Skipping the Food to Handle a Project.
Sanskar's Care and Concern for Swara is a Pure Bliss.
Waiting to see how Sanskar is gonna Fulfill Swara's Dream of Music school.
Continue Soon Kirti.

thanks a lot for this long and beautiful comment sara๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...I wanted to show what swara thinks about her changed life...hope I did a little bit justice to that...and swasan...well they offcourse are only support of each other and will always be...I hope u will like the way sanskar get to know and fulfill her dream of offcourse music school...hope u will like it further too๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by pakh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Superb start ๐Ÿ‘
Seriously i am loving this story alot
Swasan bonding is awesome
And their punishment was nice ๐Ÿ˜†
Superb story
Do update soon please

thanks for the beautiful comment sujoy๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...and loving my story๐Ÿ˜ณ...will continue soon...hope u will like๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Fariii

Awesome OS Kirti๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Plz post other parts of this OS soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ

thanks a lot for commenting fari and liking this story...will post next part today...๐Ÿ˜ƒ