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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 2:52am | IP Logged
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It was very beautifully written.. u r a really talented writerBig smile Never stop writing, I'm sure u'll become a popular writer of the forum soon if u keep writingTongue
Loved the 1st part.. wating for the newxt.. update soonBig smile

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Originally posted by rosesidni

It was very beautifully written.. u r a really talented writerBig smile Never stop writing, I'm sure u'll become a popular writer of the forum soon if u keep writingTongue
Loved the 1st part.. wating for the newxt.. update soonBig smile
zooie she is also frm keralaEmbarrassed like u

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It was very beautifully written.. u r a really talented writerBig smile Never stop writing, I'm sure u'll become a popular writer of the forum soon if u keep writingTongue
Loved the 1st part.. wating for the newxt.. update soonBig smile
zooie she is also frm keralaEmbarrassed like u

Really?Tongue Anyway,  happy we have a new writer like SandyTongue, she too was from Kerala but now disappearedOuch

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Originally posted by rosesidni

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It was very beautifully written.. u r a really talented writerBig smile Never stop writing, I'm sure u'll become a popular writer of the forum soon if u keep writingTongue
Loved the 1st part.. wating for the newxt.. update soonBig smile
zooie she is also frm keralaEmbarrassed like u

Really?Tongue Anyway,  happy we have a new writer like SandyTongue, she too was from Kerala but now disappearedOuch
yeah Tonguei knw sandy is missing dnt wry i will talk to her and get her back
yes her name is amrutha i call her ammuEmbarrassed
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I am extremely very very srry gys for such a long delay. I was busy with my exams and all. And i am so happy that u guys liked my story. But I am sure that u all have now forgotten my story. Any ways here comes Part-2.  Sorry for the late update very very sorry

PART-2

Roshni, Asha and Surbhi reach college... They had last come to college during the time of admission after that coming for the first time... The day they had taken the admission the college was having a different look and today the college was looking very lively.

 

Asha: yaar yeh who hi college hai na jab hum aye the admission ke time pe... us time kaisa bejan tha aur aaj kya ronak hai...

 

Roshni: Anuva you have doubt...

Surbhi: Roshni  chod na use lets go out and check our classes...

 

All three go to the notice which had all the rush...

 

Surbhi: Oh nooo...

 

Asha: what happen???

 

Surbhi: yaar we both are in same class but Roshni is in another classs...

 

Roshni: yaar its ok anyways we are in same college atleast... come on let's check out other things like library and Common Room and canteen everything before the class start...

 

Asha: ya first canteen

 

Surbhi: Ya chalo baba canteen otherwise she will be like troubling us...

 

Asha:   what I trouble you both... jao mai baat nahi karti... Am going

 

And she starts walking...

 

Surbhi: Aare I was just kidding yaar

 

And Surbhi also start walking...

 

Roshni  remained behind alone as she was seeing the board and noting down the details...

 

 Roshni saw that Surbhi  and Asha walking ahead so she also started moving towards them...

 

A group of notorious boys were standing and teasing all the passerby girls... They saw Roshni coming... Roshni  ignored them and decided to take other way...

 

The boys came behind  Roshni...

 

One of the boy: hey beautiful kaha ja rahi ho...

 

Second one: Lagta hai nayi hai college me...

 

Third one:  ha yaar phele kabhi dekha to nahi...

 

Boy: Itni bhi kya jaldi hai jane ki class ko to abhi time hai

 

They all surround Roshni... Roshni  gets very scared... seeing all of them surrounding her and other people looking at her... The other people talks among themselves yeh ladko ka phirse natak shuru hogaya... humesha kisi na kisi ladki ko chedte rehte hai...

 

Boy: Acha we will leave you first tell us what is your name???

 

Roshni: That's none of your concern

 

Boy: Oh really now till the time you don't say your name we are not going to leave...

 

Roshni: What do you think???? I am not like other girls who will do what ever you all will say.. understood so mind your business and leave my way...

 

 

Surbhi and Asha realises that Roshni  is not there

 

Asha: Surbhi  where is Roshni????

 

Surbhi: aare she was with me only...

 

They turn around and see Roshni was surrounded with some boys... They get scared and run towards  Roshni...

 

Roshni: Are you all leaving my way or not????

 

One of the boy: Nahi jaane diya toh kya karogi????

 

Roshni: Mai jab karugi tab tumhe bhi pata chal jayega????

 

Boy: Damki de rahi ho...

 

Roshni: Nahi kar ke dikhaungi... and she takes her mobile out and start dialing a number...

 

Boy: Whom are you calling???

 

Roshni: My uncle who is in police...

 

Boy: police...

 

Roshni: yeah  police

 

Hearing the name of the police all boys runs away...

 

Sid  and his friends had also reached the college but they were doing timepass at the gate...

 

One of their friend comes and says

 

Yaar you all know that aaj to us ladki ne un notorious ladke ki band baja di... humesha maine ladkiyo ko rote dekha hai but aaj to usne kamal kar diya...

 

Rithvik: kaun hai who ladki, kaha hai

 

Friend: are wo campus mai hai

 

Karan, Misha, Rithvik  all say together chal  Sid jake dekhte hai...

 

Asha: Roshni  are you ok

 

Surbhi: Kaha reh gayi tu yaar

 

Roshni: Asha, Surbhi  am fine yaar

 

Surbhi: Un ladko ne cheda to nahi na

 

Roshni: Nahi yaar kuch nahi aisa jawab diya ki bhag gaye...

 

Surbhi: but tune aisa kya kaha ki who bhag gaye

 

Roshni: kuch nahi yaar apna police wala formula...

 

Ohhh and all three started laughing... And start walking

 

Misha: Kaha hai who ladki...

 

Friend: who dekh ja rahi hai...

 

Roshni  had already gone by that time...

 

Sid: Jane de baad me dekh lege... Chalo classes chalte hai...


And thats all for Part-2.

 All kinds of comments are welcome.

 

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