Jamai Raja


Jamai Raja
Jamai Raja

FF- Love birds updated part -2 pg 4

adorableniafan Groupbie

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 1:54am | IP Logged
Hi everybody... An idea was spinning in
my mind since a few days. So I thought
to start a fiction with that. This is the
first time I am attempting anything like
this. So, there may be many mistakes
and flaws. Till now, I always read fan
fictions and praised them. but now
thought to give a head start.
               This is a Story of two
individuals about there college
life, their enjoyment in college, how they met and how they
fell in love with each other..
There is nothing much excited in this story. I don 't know whether u all will like it or not. Okay, enough
ranting, here goes the character sketch:


years old handsome guy. Son of a multi millionaire hotelier Raj Khurana and Simran Khurana. He is studying in Excel College . A brilliant student.

ROSHNI PATEL: She is 18 year old a
very Bubbly and a beautiful girl..
She has just completed her 12th Std
and took admission in Excel college. She is a very brilliant girl and very active in all fields. She stays with her Dadi DD Patel who is a famous jeweller. She lost her parents in her car accident.. For Roshni dadi is

KARAN,RITHWIK,MISHA- Best friends of Sid

SURBHI, ASHA - Best friends of Roshni.Fortunately 3 got admission in same college.

Other characters will be introduced in the story.

Edited by adorableniafan - 10 May 2016 at 11:07am

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Interesting dear
Continue soon

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prathe IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 2:02am | IP Logged
hello its really cool dnt bother abt anything just enjoy writing thats allEmbarrassed

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Amazing.. continue soon, would love to readBig smile

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Adorable ..continue soon..Big smile

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Part - 1

Early morning, Patel House ...

"btameez dil... btameez dil... btameez dil maane na... "

DD enters Roshni 's room and
switched off the alarm in roshni 's mobile...

"Roshni , Roshni get up. Its 8:00 am.
Wake up girl".
"Wake up I say. Kumbhakaran ki
mata!! Wake up or else I'm going to
switch off your fan.
"Hmmm.. Daadi plzz 5 minutes"
"Okay! Sleep then. I am switching off
your fan
DD switches off the fan and
goes out of the room. Within two
minutes,Roshni starts stirring on the
bed. She rolls left, right, again left,
again right and finally gives up. She
wakes up making an annoying face and comes out of the room in slow steps, rubbing her eyes.
DD was reading a newspaper.
She saw Roshni coming out of the
bedroom. "So, you are up?? Ah,
finally.. What is this Roshni? Every day I have to literally fight with you for waking you up. Why do you sleep so much? See the girls of your age, they are so.."
Roshni : "Daadi plzz, don't start again. Today is my first day in college and you are scolding me"

DD: So u remember it. Phir bi late     udii
Roshni: Daadi mein to subah 6 baje ko alarm rakhi thi. But ye badtameez alarm bajii nahi. I think my phone has got some complaint.
DD: Phone ka complaint! Tumhari badtameez alarm ki badtameez song sunkar puri duniya udi except meri badtameez naathin.
Roshni :( stands with a cute pout)
DD : "Accha okay okay!! Go and
freshen yourself. I have already made the breakfast. Today I made your favorites."
Roshni: "Really?? Wow. I'll be back in 15 minutes".
Roshni fully ready comes to the dinning and had breakfast.
DD: So all set to
go to college... Today is your first day...
Roshni: Yes Dadi fully ready...
DD: Jane se phele khanaji ka aur apne Mummy Papa ka ashirwad le lena
Roshni: Ha Dadi yeh bhi koi kehne ki
baat hai
DD: Dekho Roshni aaj pehla din hai
college mai to sambhal ke rehna kahi koi raging na karde
Roshni: Nahi Dadi. I am not alone
Asha aur Surbhi bhi to hai
Asha and Surbhi come to pick up
Roshni Roshni Roshni ... Asha was
screaming from door itself
Roshni: Whats the matter... Why are
you both screaming... Surbhi kya
Surbhi: Dadi Asha has gone mad
since yesterday... She is more exited for going to college...
Roshni: you both are here finally I was waiting for you since long
Roshni takes the blessing of her parents
and Dadi and all three leaves...
As soon as they come out of the
Asha: Am so so exited yaar... We will be going to best college... Have lots of fun wowww
Roshni: Surbhi, looks like Asha has gone totally mad...
Surbhi: are Roshni kya bolu puri raat yeh ladki ne tag kiya hai message bhejkar...
yaar but I am bit nervous yaar
Roshni: same here... am also exited but little nervous...
Asha: Why are you both nervous...
Koi jang ladne thodi ja rahe ho college hi ja rahe ho...
Roshni: Ha yaar but thoda dar to lagta hai pata nahi kaisa hoga...
Surbhi: But one thing is good that we are in same college...
Roshni: true yaar
Asha: Kya tension lete ho tum dono
bhi... Look at me am so free...
Roshni: Teri baat ho sakhti hai... aap mahan ho...
All three laughs

On the other side Khurana mansion

Raj and Simran were sitting on the dining table and were discussing some stuff...
Sid: Good morning Mom... Good
morning Dad...
Raj and Simran : Good morning Sid
Raj: So how is your studies going
Simran: What is this Raj ji every now on then you ask him the same question let him have his breakfast first...
Sid : Its going good Dad...
Raj : And what about college...
Sid: College is fun Dad...
Misha, Karan and Rithvik all three come with a car to take Sid... It was a usual habit of them... All four use to go to college together... They were pressing the horn... That was the signal to call Sid
Sid: mere friends agaye... mai jar
aha hu Bye dad, Bye Mom
Simran: Sid atleast complete your
Sid: Am done Mom... byeee and
Sid runs away...
Simran: Yeh bache bhi na kabhi nahi
Sid comes out of his house and sits in the car... Hiii Guysss
Karan: yaar kitna time laga
Sid: Kitna time aap log abhi to aye hoaur horn sun kar mai chala aya...
Rithvik: Leave himh... He has
gone mad... He wants to reach
college early...
Sid: Why early???? What so special
today???? Kya nahi girlfriend dhoond li hai kya????
Karan : Kya girlfriend yaar...
Misha: aare Sid aaj wo freshers ayegena that's why he wants to be early
Sid: Karan you wont improve at all...
Misha: Use adat ho gayi hai mar khane ki...
Rithvik: right Misha...
All of them laugh and keeps on teasing Karan ...

Precap: Roshni all alone standing and few boys surrounds Roshni...

I know i have written so badly. If you find it boring please feel free to comment. I don 't want to kill you with my boring work. So if u don t like it please tell me i will stop writing.
All kinds of comments are welcome..

Edited by adorableniafan - 19 April 2016 at 6:32am

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prathe IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Super awesome love all the char here sidni rithvik asha misha is here mewans pakka neg i feelWinkLOL
do continue soon

dnt wry dear enjoy karo wats u name btwTongue

Edited by prathe - 19 April 2016 at 11:52pm

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Awesome update...pls cont soon

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