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TwiNj SS "POOL wala PYAAR" (Part 4 Pg 13) 18+ Mature Content (Page 15)

docritu99 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Anjum.

Aww it was so cute n romantic .. vv lovelyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
So beautifully u write u knowBig smileClap
Wud be w8ng for other amazing stories fm youEmbarrassed


Aww thank u so much dear..

M literally on cloud nine today..

Tbh I gave in a lot in this particular part to create what it is..!!

I would love to write more once time permits..

Thanks a ton..

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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tikit

Riya that was amazing. Yes lips and eyes serve different purpose. Aww the muscular and chubby pillow line was so cute. It was sizzling, hot and romantic. I want to read more stories from u.

Eshu meri jaan... Thank u so much dear..

I thought those lines were chesse but glad u liked it..

I will definitely write more..

Thanks a ton for the feedback..

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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Embarrassedhey, 
The disclaimer is really ...what to say...very practical & true...ROFL
Story Parke...then again will comment...
I know it's too good...like always. ...

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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaveerkti

Embarrassedhey,
The disclaimer is really ...what to say...very practical & true...ROFL
Story Parke...then again will comment...
I know it's too good...like always. ...


ROFL..

I was just thinking how could this happen that nobody brought up this thing.. And here it is..

I pondered for long what to write in warning and came up with this..

Aww that's so sweet of u..

Do read and njoy..

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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by docritu99

Originally posted by Shaveerkti

Embarrassedhey,
The disclaimer is really ...what to say...very practical & true...ROFL
Story Parke...then again will comment...
I know it's too good...like always. ...


ROFL..

I was just thinking how could this happen that nobody brought up this thing.. And here it is..

I pondered for long what to write in warning and came up with this..

Aww that's so sweet of u..

Do read and njoy..
Exams kuch enjoy karneka mouka de tab na...
Thanks for the updateEmbarrassed
Sad meCryIt ended...
I m such a reader who doesn't want any story to end & is scared of stories with sad endind...

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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Riya this was beautiful, do continue on your writing. I definitely look forward to reading more of your workThumbs Up

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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
I knew she'd wear the white dress! 
I loved how shy Twinkle was but then she awoke LOL

Great update buddy. 

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Posted: 06 June 2016 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
wow loved it

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