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TwiNj SS "POOL wala PYAAR" (Part 4 Pg 13) 18+ Mature Content (Page 14)

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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 1:56am | IP Logged
Fantastic it was sooo hot...
Twinj are sooo romantic..
Romantic sadu sarna..
I luved the ending..
It was clean..

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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Aww it was so cute n romantic .. vv lovely EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
So beautifully u write u know Big smileClap
Wud be w8ng for other amazing stories fm you Embarrassed

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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Riya that was amazing. Yes lips and eyes serve different purpose. Aww the muscular and chubby pillow line was so cute. It was sizzling, hot and romantic. I want to read more stories from u.

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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Wowww that was sensuous and loved the choice of words to describe their aesthetic and beautiful love making ClapClap... Though I dont follow the show but your write up sort of made me imagine Kunj-Twinkle's first night together in a different way Embarrassed ... Loved the foreplay that u wrote initially followed by their first night ... beautifully written StarStarStarStar


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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti06

Wowww that was sensuous and loved the choice of words to describe their aesthetic and beautiful love makingClapClap... Though I dont follow the show but your write up sort of made me imagine Kunj-Twinkle's first night together in a different wayEmbarrassed ... Loved the foreplay that u wrote initially followed by their first night... beautifully written Star




Jyo m so greatful to u..

Though u don't follow the show still u showed up here just coz of a pm that's really amazing..

Thanks a ton dear.. I was kindda jittery and nervous and ur honest and genuine feedback gave me relief..

Love ya.. Thanks lot..
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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Black_Maniac

I am still not 18+LOL
I read what I should and skipped the restEmbarrassed
What I read was equally HAWT...
That romantic SarnaBlushing
And I also read the morning sceneEmbarrassed
It was so adorable.. I mean naughtyTongueLOL
You are a really good writer RiyaEmbarrassed
Would lovd to read more from you... Only one small request.. Try making it HAWT without 18+ROFL

P.S first commentBig smile



That's so Sharif of u DAT u skipped 18+ parts..

So glad that u liked and enjoyed it..

Thank u so much buddy "good writer" means a lot to me...

Actually 18+ is not my forte.. It was just stories demand..

And good for u I also believe in and write Hot stuffs that are equally hot but not 18+..


So yeah I'll try to write such things more..

Thanks again for taking time to read and leave ur response that too on first spot..

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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AbhiGya_ArHi

BlushingBlushingBlushingthat was sizzling HAWTT
What a perfect end to a beautiful pool romance
You are a brilliant writer Riya!
Your writing is so descriptive and deep..feel like drowing in them
Indeed a beautiful piece. Hats offClap


Thank u so much luba..

U gave me so much happiness saying so..

I too feel I write descriptive but its my type can't change it.. Glad u liked it..

I personally liked the ending most and was looking forward for feedbacks on the same.. And so thank u so much for dat...
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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amlavs

Fantastic it was sooo hot...
Twinj are sooo romantic..
Romantic sadu sarna..
I luved the ending..
It was clean..



Thank u lavanya Di..

Glad u liked it..

Even I myself loved the ending..lol..

Thanks so much to take out time to read and appreciate..

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