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New TS-YOU BELONG TO ME....Last part on pg 53 nd note on pg 54..on 8/5 (Page 6)

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
nice start
loving this story so much
do cont soon

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 6:50pm | IP Logged
Hi Tanu I am so sorry but I read this at work in my lunch and did not have enough time to comment as I had to go back to work"!!!!
I was just going to be when I remembered that I had not commented on this so here I am!!!!!!

It was a great concept - I loved it!!!!
Ishita a nerd, Raman a jock and of course Shagun what else but a "play girl"!!!!!Angry

I love that you are giving all three POVs 
Poor Ishu being bullied by Raman and by Shagun!!!!

It was funny and sad when Raman picked Ishita's name out of the hat fro project partner and asked who is "Ishita"????? and Sir asked Ishita to put her hand up and he saw that it was the Nerd!!!!!!!
Just then the bell goes and she runs away!!!!!!!!!!
Raman calls her "hey Nerd Girl" and gives her his address so that she can come over for the project!!!!

At lunch time he feels sorry for her when Shagun pours her milk all over her head!!! and when Shagun calls her nerd girl he corrects her and says her name is Ishita!!!!!

Ishita gets excited going to Raman's big mansion to work on the project together!!!
His mum invites her in and she likes her!!!
Ishra work on the project - she suggest an idea for it and he agrees yayyy!!!!
After they finish he invites her to stay and chat with him and have snacks together!!!
They chat and become friends - so cute!!!!
when she is leaving he hugs her and she is on top of the world!!!!

This story is going in just the right direction please continue soon and thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!

Oh gosh it's almost 2 o'clock I have to go to sleep now or else will have problems waking up for work tomorrow!!!!!!!SleepyLOL

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
interesting story tanu Thumbs Up
so ishu is a nerd nd raman always bullys her but don't even knw her name...
he loves shagun so much bt she being she doesn't value his love nd is cheating behind him
what will be his reaction knowing her true face yar..bichara toot jayega...
ishu is so cute yar...i think she lives him soo much
waiting for d nxt prtDay Dreaming
bt tanu ts tho choti si hogi na...tum ise ss banao tho achi hogi
sry bt its only my wish...
update soon...

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attitudequeen17

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Divanru

Res .yipee me first
Unres .Nice CS .
But this shagunia again .ok no worries .
I know she will disappear after one or two updates .
Title 

Rang Jo laagyo
Ek duje ke vaaste


Thnaks pooja di
will surely think about this names...
yup!! soon she will disappear
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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sri1091

Intresting character sketch Raman bullying ishu and Raman and Shagun are lovers and Shagun as usual cheating Raman loved it

Thanks Sri
glad u liked itSmile
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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vaishnavi28

resSmile
me 2ndUnhappy


unres it soon
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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 1:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NIDA.ISHRAFAN

Kia yr em nt da first
Still nice start
Waiting fr more
vese
Tanu aj tum itne gusse mai
Hmmm
Vese I luved ur possessiveness fr me
Awww my baby
Em shoorry
Plxxx apni di ko maaf krdo ..
Hello itna bhao mat khao
Chalo jldi se maafi do .

Ufff bas de di
Itni asani se

Wah yr Bach gaye
Luv u..


Nxt time di
Thank youSmile
its ok di..
isbaar maaf kar diya...
firsst time tha na isiliye...

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutieruhi

Nice start tannu
Uff how much I hate this shaguniya
Please throw her out asap
Congrats for ur new story baby

Title main soch kar bataungi


Thank you so much Rakshu di
yup!! she will be out soon di
jaldi batana

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