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New TS-YOU BELONG TO ME....Last part on pg 53 nd note on pg 54..on 8/5 (Page 11)

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lonelyyy

nice start
loving this story so much
do cont soon


Thanks a lot dr
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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nafnaf

Hi Tanu I am so sorry but I read this at work in my lunch and did not have enough time to comment as I had to go back to work"!!!!
I was just going to be when I remembered that I had not commented on this so here I am!!!!!!

It was a great concept - I loved it!!!!
Ishita a nerd, Raman a jock and of course Shagun what else but a "play girl"!!!!!Angry

I love that you are giving all three POVs 
Poor Ishu being bullied by Raman and by Shagun!!!!

It was funny and sad when Raman picked Ishita's name out of the hat fro project partner and asked who is "Ishita"????? and Sir asked Ishita to put her hand up and he saw that it was the Nerd!!!!!!!
Just then the bell goes and she runs away!!!!!!!!!!
Raman calls her "hey Nerd Girl" and gives her his address so that she can come over for the project!!!!

At lunch time he feels sorry for her when Shagun pours her milk all over her head!!! and when Shagun calls her nerd girl he corrects her and says her name is Ishita!!!!!

Ishita gets excited going to Raman's big mansion to work on the project together!!!
His mum invites her in and she likes her!!!
Ishra work on the project - she suggest an idea for it and he agrees yayyy!!!!
After they finish he invites her to stay and chat with him and have snacks together!!!
They chat and become friends - so cute!!!!
when she is leaving he hugs her and she is on top of the world!!!!

This story is going in just the right direction please continue soon and thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!

Oh gosh it's almost 2 o'clock I have to go to sleep now or else will have problems waking up for work tomorrow!!!!!!!SleepyLOL


Thanks a lot Nafisha di
this is one of the best comment i got...
i m so happy
thanks a lot di...
glad u liked itSmile
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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutekhusboo

Interesting start..

Thanks a lot drSmile
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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:11am | IP Logged
About CS
Ishita is a sweet girl who is a nerd
Raman for me he's a fool in love
Shagun Censored
Don't ask me
She's disgustingDead

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Nice Update
POV's was just good
I hate shagunAngry
She's just disgusting
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Raman he also bullies Ishu
Awww That's bad Raman
But he's sweet
N when he asked his teacher that who's Ishita I was like WTH he didn't even know his classmate?
N then also he called her Nerd Girl n gave his address
That's good
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N the lunch time
ArghhhAngry
That Shagun had done wrong with her
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N Ishu's mom is so sweet I think
She's so excited that
Ishu is going to her friend's house
N Raman's Mom is also sweet
N they chatted n become friends
So Raman is a sweet person
N Ishu is blushing n all
Hayeee
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Update soon

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Roohachu

About CS
Ishita is a sweet girl who is a nerd
Raman for me he's a fool in love
Shagun Censored
Don't ask me
She's disgustingDead


Thanks for the comment AshSmile

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Roohachu

Nice Update
POV's was just good
I hate shagunAngry
She's just disgusting
---------------------------------
Raman he also bullies Ishu
Awww That's bad Raman
But he's sweet
N when he asked his teacher that who's Ishita I was like WTH he didn't even know his classmate?
N then also he called her Nerd Girl n gave his address
That's good
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
N the lunch time
ArghhhAngry
That Shagun had done wrong with her
----------------------------------------------------
N Ishu's mom is so sweet I think
She's so excited that
Ishu is going to her friend's house
N Raman's Mom is also sweet
N they chatted n become friends
So Raman is a sweet person
N Ishu is blushing n all
Hayeee
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Update soon



Thank you so much
i love this comment. of urs...haaye dil khush kar ditta
will updating in few min

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maddy209

interesting story tanu Thumbs Up
so ishu is a nerd nd raman always bullys her but don't even knw her name...
he loves shagun so much bt she being she doesn't value his love nd is cheating behind him
what will be his reaction knowing her true face yar..bichara toot jayega...
ishu is so cute yar...i think she lives him soo much
waiting for d nxt prtDay Dreaming
bt tanu ts tho choti si hogi na...tum ise ss banao tho achi hogi
sry bt its only my wish...
update soon...


Thank you so much dr...
u knoe only u r saying it..
if i ll get more such requests of making it SS and i ll surely try to make it...
updating in few min drSmile

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