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Posted: 30 April 2016 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Az07

Such a lovely update 
Glad that Bikram is saved
Just loved the bonding between the team 
Trisha taking care of Raghav like a mother. How cuteEmbarrassed
Loved when she moved away and cried due to the happiness to see back Raghav and Bikram the strong woman she is never wanted the guys to be worried for her. So matured Trisha is 
Just loved the car scene. The way Raghav realised he is incomplete without her was awesome the way he realised Trisha's qualities I don't have words to explain so well mentioned 
I liked him teasing her. How can someone grow over a night? Only Raghav can come up like thatTongue
The way Raghav was lost in his sleeping beauty the way he took her to her room was just so romantic Embarrassed
I wonder Trisha's mom didn't suspect these twoTongue
Loved his letter to Trisha so emotional 
Wonderful story please update Talaash too 

Thanks for liking the update. The team bonding is very important if they have to work in such dangerous circumstances. Trisha took care of him just like his mother, she knew that he missed his mother a lot. 
She is a strong lady for sure and she does not want Raghav or anyone else to see her cry, but she could not escape from Raghav's eyes.
 Raghav could not overlook what she did for him at night, noone else could have done this, he knew this. 
Thanks for liking the romantic scene when he took her inside her house, that's my favourite too.
According to me any mother would suspect in such situation, but as I said, we are talking about Trisha. She is a girl who would never do anything wrong. Her parents have full trust on her. They would like to wait for her to come up to them and tell them her feelings. 
Thanks once again. I'll post Talaash after this new story. Please bear with me dear.


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Posted: 30 April 2016 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nymphadora12

This. Is. Wonderful. 
Usually I'm not the kind of person who feels emotional and attached to a story, but this part was beautiful. I liked the way you builded this story till the end and conveyed it amazingly.
The fact that even though their relationship is simple it is yet complicated with both of them not able to convey love through conversations but they do by actions where neither one of them need to speak of it to be known. 
And you've displayed it really great! 
The letter was beautiful. 
Do keep writing! 

Thanks a lot dear. If you say that you got emotionally attached to the story, its a huge compliment for me, means a lot. I didn't know myself that I would be able to take across the emotions like this. But if you have liked this, then definitely I succeeded.

Their relation is beautiful in true sense. Niether of the two express their feelings, but both of them are mad for each other and they know also about this. But still they manage to maintain a professional relation amongst them, that shows the maturity of the two.

I hope I can do so in future also.
Lots of love.

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Posted: 30 April 2016 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1973deepak

Nice and emotional update. Indirectly romantic. How beautifully written each emotions were described well.Happy to see that Bikram is saved and The two conditions he asked was nice He desperately want Raghav to stay in CBI. Raghav lifting Trisha in her arms and the note he left was very nice addition. He said all his fellings for her but she still have to wait  for direct proposal of the three magical words till Raghav put vidushak behind the bars. Please update your other stories and thanks a lot for this update 

Thanks for feeling the emotions I tried to portray. The last part in the car and her home was added later while I was writing it. It wasn't a part of my original thought. I just added those to depict the understanding, the bond between the two and how much they care for each other. 
I'll update my other stories soon.
Thanks once again 
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Thanks everyone for liking the story. I'm highly obliged with your comments.

Lots of love.
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Posted: 05 May 2016 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by braveheartdoc

Thanks everyone for liking the story. I'm highly obliged with your comments.

Lots of love.
thanks a lot for this awesome story
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Posted: 05 May 2016 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by braveheartdoc

Thanks everyone for liking the story. I'm highly obliged with your comments.

Lots of love.
thanks soo much for this awesome story

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Posted: 07 May 2016 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Such a beautiful story dear really loved ir. Thanks a lot for writing such a wonderful story loved your writing soo much

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Originally posted by Desaitara1234

Such a beautiful story dear really loved ir. Thanks a lot for writing such a wonderful story loved your writing soo much


Thanks a lot for liking the story. Glad you liked it.
I was quite nervous while writing this as this was planned as a continuation from the last episode, it should be such which goes in the flow of the episode. I hope I could do justice with this.

Thanks once again for liking my writing.
May I know what can I call you dear?

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